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Name: Tasha

Comment: By far the best piece of fanfiction I've ever read. Did you write 'In the prefects bathroom'? I couldn't help noticing similarities in the way you describe Snape's gentle but firm love making. Nothing I could pick at except for the fact there wasn't more chapters. I look forward to seeing a continuation where we see a little more of Hermione, Snape and their day-to-day life, maybe their first real fight, later resolved with some very passionate sex? Thank you, Tasha.

06 September, 2011 at 21:05:05
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Name: SFEEP

Comment: GREAT

04 May, 2011 at 20:51:40
Name: K

Comment: OMG i loved this...i have to admit it was quite a long journey but it was worth it. i had to wait til the very end to leave a review...just so i'd be able to feel as excited as i do right now. lovely adorable ending...i was truly enchanted by this piece. you should definitely publish something original, i like your style!

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26 January, 2011 at 00:03:57
Name: Enid LaReg

Comment: As usual a full fledged story with the speed of lightening. You always seem to keep the action in your story for hundreds of pages. I read almost everything, and for the first time, a not so snarky Snape. Liked him, though. Thank you very much for yet another addition to my HG/SS fanfic library. Your style and humor is great.

28 November, 2010 at 08:32:04
Name: Machele

Comment: Hi there, just to let you know chap 51 -58 (that's out of my head, so i might mis some) don't have a working next chapter link. Might wanna fix that. And for the story, once again a very nice fic. Getting close to reading all of the i wanted to read. I have to say i find it amazing how you can have so many fics but still have them all be original an not getting repetitive, bot in storyline and small details (well except for the flaming gay vanmpire, but he's cool :D)

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17 September, 2010 at 18:08:52
Name: FlittterKat

Comment: Yum, delicious. Enjoyed your story so much! I enjoyed seeing what happened if Tom never came to power and how it affected everyone's lives. I liked Hermione's and Neville's friendship. Also, I thoroughly enjoyed seeing Lily get what she deserved. James also got the son he deserved. Sounds like Harry was a better man with out them. Sounds bad, eh? Loved the story Ruth, thanks!

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10 June, 2010 at 12:34:14
Name: Pauline

Comment: I always love returning to this story, it's one of my faves. Great story!!

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05 February, 2010 at 05:18:41
Name: shadowchsr

Comment: This is probably one of my favorite stories of yours, though that's a hard pick as I love all of your works, even the darker ones like Inside the blackest heart. I just like your vision of what the world would have been like if there was no lord Voldermort. It was nice to see Harry as well as Nevil as whole families instead of being broken because both of them were orphaned in a sense (though Nevil's parents were still technically alive) Though I must admit part of me wanted to know what happened to Sirus, Remus, and even Peter Pettigrew. It would have been nice for them to have a cursery mention as they all died in the war. I really do wonder about Remus because he had a son that was orphaned by the war. I did love the interaction between Hermione and Severus and her aventure with the chamber of Secrets and the Basilisk though I do feel it was poor planning on her part not to try and bring a rooster with her, maybe under the petrificus totalus spell. The wedding and the Wedding night and adventure was probably some of my favorite moments, that and when she was inadertantly tormenting him when stating she wanted to be with him. Though one thing I've been wondering about since reading this is what would have happened in a Harry Potter Universe where both Harry and Hermione were sorted into Slytherin and everything else is the same. Voldermort is still after them, Snape is still charged with keeping them safe, Albus tries to take care of things, etc. I just wonder what a more personaly driven harry and hermione would have done in such a situation.

09 November, 2009 at 21:44:57
Name: Ms_Figg

Comment: Hermione looked at him. Severus wasn’t attractive at all. He was very tall, skinny and pale, his hair even greasier looking than it was in her time, and longer, falling over his thin shoulders in stringy strands. He had quite a bit of acne on his face too, and his nose was huge. The young wizard appeared…well…the best way to describe him was gangly. His hands and feet looked too big for his body and his joints were sharp and pointed. But still, he moved gracefully. Hermione had no idea how he managed that with his over long limbs. “Who are you?” Severus demanded. “My name is Hermione Granger. I’ve come here to help you,” she said.

30 May, 2009 at 06:11:22

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