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Reviewer:
purple dragon
T1:
1
Date:
10 Jun 2008
Time:
18:22:20
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Comments

I just got done reading the last three chapters!I loved how you made Severus headboy and he really did have a good year.Poor hagard it's hard to see him sad and without friends.Hermione has figured out alot,I can't wwait to see howw Severus handles this!Update soon!!!!

Reviewer:
lilbitbord
T1:
l
Date:
11 Jun 2008
Time:
06:27:34
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Comments

Oh no what is Severus going to do when she tells him what she remembers. I'm more worried what would happen if she remembers everything. She might go insane with remembering two time lines. Can't wait for more :)

Reviewer:
BLUEJAY
T1:
8
Date:
11 Jun 2008
Time:
10:32:15
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Comments

2 words 2 describe this story and I quote a certain Ronald Weasley "bloody brilliant". yep this is a hit. luv it. i luv alternate reality stories, the "what if" of fan fiction. can't wait 4 the nxt chapter! keep up the good work!

Reviewer:
Scrapbabee
T1:
8
Date:
11 Jun 2008
Time:
11:25:55
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Comments

OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer:
DeChagny
T1:
2
Date:
11 Jun 2008
Time:
13:32:00
Remote User:

Comments

HAhHHAhHAh... now that's too good :) Snape knows about Hermione's crush, Hermione knows she fucked Snape in another life... everything is coming to its proper place... only one question... how come Hermione isn't a Head girl???

Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
T1:
3
Date:
11 Jun 2008
Time:
13:59:52
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Comments

Dechagny: Because someone else is Head Girl. <eg>  You'll find out more about that later. ;)

Reviewer:
Lelir
T1:
a
Date:
12 Jun 2008
Time:
02:48:08
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Comments

Nice turn of events, Ms. Figg! Keep the good work and thank you for the update!

Reviewer:
foxmom
T1:
d
Date:
12 Jun 2008
Time:
08:56:58
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Comments

Imagine my surprise when I saw you are continuing this story! WooHoo! GOtta find more time to get on-line <sigh> I love the twists and turns in the story...and how the AU Hermione is trying to check out all her "dreams"...and a rather nice Snape... Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer:
reviewer
T1:
5
Date:
12 Jun 2008
Time:
10:23:51
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Comments

Hey, I'm a bit surprised that Luna is Head Girl XD It's just that Luna is a year below Hermione, not a year above. Unless you changed that in your timeline :)

Reviewer:
reviewer
T1:
O
Date:
12 Jun 2008
Time:
10:47:04
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Comments

WOW! I totally expected Hermione to be Head Girl! OMG!? lol. Anywho, I bet Luna will help in there adventure. Interesting, indeed. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
T1:
8
Date:
12 Jun 2008
Time:
11:10:42
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Comments

Whoops. Well, I'll just explain it by Luna skipping a grade. lol. She is a Ravenclaw after all. Thanks.

Reviewer:
Scrapbabee
T1:
8
Date:
12 Jun 2008
Time:
19:14:53
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Comments

I am so glad you are including Luna in this. She is such a neat character. I was wondering if the picture you have at the beginning of the story. Is the younger man Severus or Neville?

Reviewer:
JosieMarie
T1:
A
Date:
13 Jun 2008
Time:
02:12:05
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Comments

Ohhh, the plt thickens. I love it, but this waiting, uh it's killer. Oh well, it's worth the wait. Thanks.

Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
T1:
8
Date:
13 Jun 2008
Time:
04:06:07
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Comments

The pic at on the index page of this story is Neville and Hermione. The front pic is Neville and Luna. Matthew Lewis, the actor who plays Neville, is VERY handsome. They have to do some work to make him look less handsome, believe me. He's a hunk. lol.

Reviewer:
Scrapbabee
T1:
8
Date:
13 Jun 2008
Time:
07:00:19
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Comments

Well know she knows. Yummyness must be coming up.

Reviewer:
FFFW/AutumnKiss
T1:
8
Date:
13 Jun 2008
Time:
19:39:42
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Comments

I hope my contribution posts. I was catching the devil trying to get the page to come up on this dinasour of a PC. lol. The part where Snape questions whether or not Hermione could ever return his affections and the bit about him being able to provide and care for her, despite his obvious short comings was very, very touching. I got a little pang from reading it. Great work.

Reviewer:
reviewer
T1:
2
Date:
13 Jun 2008
Time:
21:48:45
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Comments

I think you wrote Boyle instead of Goyle? He is rather like a boil on one's arse so easy enough mistake to make! Great story!

Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
T1:
8
Date:
13 Jun 2008
Time:
22:49:30
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Comments

reviewer: Thank you so much. Either my finger slipped or I had a "Daddy Dearest" flashback. Lol about the "boil" analogy. Very clever . . . and true!

Reviewer:
bluejay
T1:
8
Date:
16 Jun 2008
Time:
16:52:31
Remote User:

Comments

Please can we have some more? you've just stopped as it was getting exciting!

Reviewer:
reviewer
T1:
3
Date:
17 Jun 2008
Time:
10:17:32
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Comments

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Reviewer:
foxmom
T1:
g
Date:
17 Jun 2008
Time:
11:43:15
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Comments

I am really enjoying the interaction starting between Hermione and Snape. You have really come up with some fresh ideas. Also, I like that Neville is someone less shy in your AU. Looking forward to more...especially sine Hermione has now "challenged" Severus

Reviewer:
jw
T1:
1
Date:
17 Jun 2008
Time:
21:18:44
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Comments

hi, ruth! I finally got some time to catch up on reading, and read all 17 chapters this week. this is wonderful! you have a touch for engaging situations and characters. I really like what you've done with Neville and Luna, and Harry - wow! will you show us how the Potters interact with the Dursleys? I was touched by the Hagrid-Myrtle scene, and amused by Luna and the rooster. she's not going to try to hatch her own basilisk, is she?? thanks for writing SSHG again, and I'll be looking forward to chapter 18!

Reviewer:
purple dragon
T1:
1
Date:
18 Jun 2008
Time:
07:30:27
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Comments

Hermione sure is good at geting her way!Luna is a favorite of mine to I like how you have her a little sneaky to.

Reviewer:
Livvy6
T1:
1
Date:
18 Jun 2008
Time:
08:26:30
Remote User:

Comments

Oh snap! Hermione has thrown down the gauntlet hasn't she? Good work! Livvy

Reviewer:
elle
T1:
3
Date:
18 Jun 2008
Time:
20:51:06
Remote User:

Comments

more! more! bravo.

Reviewer:
jw
T1:
1
Date:
18 Jun 2008
Time:
20:55:39
Remote User:

Comments

ch 18 - cool! good thing that James Potter didn't tell Harry about the Marauders' Map. looking forward to seeing what Luna is up to, and whether Severus catches up with them. thanks for the new chapter!

 

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