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I have always liked this story and now to see that it will be extended is like getting a late birthday gift. Thank You!!!!!!
okay i havent been around lately. i like this one. new spin on things, really good. hoping you do some more
excellent transition. i was hoping you would keep going. read the other with the authors and those two, knew you couldn't stay away, okay i at least hoped you wouldn't.
omg, it's brilliant! I was wondering how you'll connect the past and future timelines and it was simply flawless! I love the fact that Harry is a Slytherin and that Neville isn't so shy and... dumb :))) I wanna read the next chapter soooo much! thank you, Ms_Figg!
Oh Ms. Figg thank you so much for making Neville the way he should have been. I have loved this character since I read the very first book. It must really make for some interesting makeup time when filming as his portrayer has grown into a very handsome young man and not the geek they try to make him out to be on screen. If only I were 10 years younger I would soooo go after him. Here's to seeing more of him and maybe, just maybe, a lemon for he and Luna. (just a small hint/request)
Yey! I'm so glad you are working on this! I LOVE time-tuner fics and I like how you are doing this one. Such a shame Lily Potter allowed her son to be such a prick!
All I have to say is thank you for this i've waited a long time for you to add on.
I'm glad that his personality is still the same though he lived his life differently. :] This will turn out to be cool.
Lily got what she had coming to her. Did he just say he "got there first?" Now that's a twist I didn't see coming!
I love the direction you are taking this one-shot. I never thought you would expand on this but this is wonderfully unexpected. I love your take on SS history... and what a turn for the better indeed. Because HP was going to be sorted in Slytherin were it not for his choice. And I really do think Lily was a bitch for turning her back on her childhood friend for a bit of popular dick. WHAT?! Its true. The Maurders were a bunch of bullies... except for Remus. I can't wait for more of your work... I really missed you in your absence. I was devastated. I can't wait for updates on your other stories either. All the best.
Very good chapter! I can't wait to see how this is going to work out! Livvy
Your writing is amazing - I've read all your work... it's very well done! Keep going!
yikes!!! creepy.
OMG. This was my fav story and now its more!!!! I love it well done and keep up the good work. Thanks!!!
I know this has nothing to do with the story, but I just wanted to say your daughter looks beautiful in that picture you have up. I hope she has a happy married life!
making Harry his protégé just to exact revenge... that's soooo Severus :) at first I was shocked that he treated Lily in that manner, but with her being alive, I guess his love just evolved in hatred or smth... there is no remorse for her death now and he's had his closure the day she stopped being his friend... no 'always' in this story I guess :D I can't wait to see what u've planned for the story! I love 'in an alternate universe' and this story reminds me of it, cuz sooo many things are different :P 10x for the chapter, it was great!
It's funny to see Harry looking up to Severus,he should have done that all along.I love how you maded the talk with Lilly go.She needed bringing down abit.Once again thank you for contuning this story!A turn for the better is my favorite one shot!
Ahhhhhhh, now that was fun to read. I love this new timeline and can't wait to see what's to come. So glad you're back writing SS/HG again- you're the best. Sometimes you just need a break, a re-boot as it were. :) LK
please update!
YAY I am so happy you are writing SS/HG fics still. I love this fic. Time Turner fics are wonderful and this is one of my new favs.
You know, I've never read a time turner fic and right now I'm glad I haven't because I can kind of form my own ideas. I'm sure I'm not doing anything new with this genre of fanfic, but I'm not constantly thinking of anyone else's story, scared I'm subjectively taking elements. Plus I get to rewrite the world. lol. It puts another spin on Alternate Universe. I really hope I do a good job with this story. Also, I'm really liking Snape in this one. He's not actually lusting after Hermione but standing back, helping her along, letting her develop naturally, not trying to interfere too much, just give her a leg up now and then, and this is juxapositioned by what he's doing to Harry, practically spoiling him, influencing him to utilize his darker tendencies to get what he wants. Unfortunately, this could have had a bad result for Hermione, but Snape arrived in time. I'm going to go into Harry's punishment. It most likely won't suit the crime but he'll find it very unpleasant anyway.
Hermione girl, it's coming to you. Just a little bit more....
ooh excited to read more! please continue
Oooh, I like the maturity fairy! I don't think it's EVER going to get near Ron. Love your stuff!
Your slow days to me are just as good as your fast days.I love updates to this story.I love how you've made Harry!Because i've always seen a few Syltherien traits in him.I like how you've made Nevile have more confadence.
Thanks for the chapter. I like the way Snape has protected her w/out seeming like he's protecting her. I'm looking forward to seeing his reaction when he discovers her crush on him. Or does he know already? He'd have to I guess.
You reap what you sow! Karma really has a way of biting you on the butt. I guess that's what Lily and James are experiancing. Goodness, I wonder what would happen if Sirius showed up. Fireworks no doubt.
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