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wow. you finished this part about 2 years ago...hehe. i love the last chapter. you described the final battle very well. i enjoyed that part the most really. the way you described each person battling on their own..wow. by the way, i couldnt help but notice how, when you said that hermione and severus flanked either sides of harry....where was ron ? =S you seem to have left him out there haha. until you have harry mention him near the end. wow..hermione was a real hero. =) anywayz. thanks. =)
sorry; actuali iono wen you finished it ^^" i only realised that this review page is for all parts so i`ve only been reading the dates in each review below rather than reading it properly. terribly sorry about that ^^"
this...this was an awesome awesome series! i enjoyed every moment of it ;) i`m very happy for hermione and severus..and now desmona. thank you so much for this great story =)
I absolutely loved this story. In fact I love every story I have read that was written by you I especially got a great laugh over poor Severus's uncomfortable experience with the pregnancy suit. I laughed so hard I was having trouble not losing my place while wiping tears from my eyes. Thank you ever so much for this wonderfully touching and hilarious story. Keep them coming, please!!!!
Ohhh you cheating b*tch! I was sooo sure who the mysterious DE was, but later when the surprise statement came out, I thought I had it wrong... XD Great fic as always!!!
I loved the story. I think caught a typo in chapter 21 "But now yet...just a little more of her...a little more... " you mean not right?
just brilliant, your talent for lemons mixed in with fantastic story lines never ceases to amaze me! i love them
I am impressed with your pacing and the tension you develop through this story. You give depth to your characters, and by revealing their thoughts as well as describing their actions, make their interesting internal struggles and contradictions evident. I have been reading a number of your fiction pieces recently and enjoying them very much. I am delighted with your inventiveness and in awe of your productivity.