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Yay! June W. is the one responsible for archiving all nine stories and formatting them in ONE day. She did all the linking and everything. All I had to do was put the files in a directory. Kudos to June, and I am so thankful as well as awed. That was a LOT of work!
The chapter two "next chapter" link in part 2 needs fixing. it points to chapter 2 Loved these on AFF still loving them.
reviewer: Thank you so much for pointing that out for me. I've fixed it, and welcome anyone that sees errors to please let me know. Thank.
Hi MS_Figg - it's me again. Your proof reader lol. In up against the wall wars the link from 28 to 29 (next chapter) needs fixing. Also the chapter where you introduce Colin Creavy, You refer to him as Collins a few times. I missed this story first time around, and have just read it. I really enjoy these stories. You have a great imagination and a talent for telling the story and getting the reader involved. this web site was a haven when AFF closed down. Your stories keep me same. it's great to have all the links to the other fictions too. Best wishes and power to your "burning" pen
Apologies Your stories keep me SANE not same. New keyboard lots of typos!! lol
You wrote one line that made me want to kill Delaluci myself. "After all his hard work, he deserved something for his efforts in courting the stupid little bitch." No man worthy of the name deserves sex or love unless it is freely given. The same is true of women. The whole concept of love and sex, is based on a reciprocal giving. Absent that it is degraded.
This story is incredible. Ruth, your fantastic mind is a wonder. The twists and turns and the incredible inventions just amaze me and the love touches me and I read on and on. Often I sense some horrible thing in the wings and going on is difficult because you make the reader feel with the characters. The fear, apprehension, joy and love are feelable by the reader. God, how I love it. Thank you for sharing your stories with us.
I knew it...I just knew who was the "Dead Eater". Wonderfull job, thanks for sharing. Oh...and by the way? I like Severus' dark side better too. I´m not much of a romantic, hahahaha. Alexandra (The Netherlands)
How I love the way your mind works. °GRIN° Who would have thought Severus to be that great a fighter with his hands? Lots of lemons by the way...very well done indeed. Thanks for sharing. Alexandra (The Netherlands)
You did it again... *chuckles..Severus in a pregnant suit* Thank you for sharing. Alexandra (The Netherlands)
o my gosh i thought it was lucius malfoy not snape wired turn of events but so cool
umm in your 6 chapter you said draco has blue eyes he dosnt he has gray eyes same as his dad
i loved your joke bout the bull testies i might try it lol on my brothers and dad who force me to eat shellfish lol wonderful storys by the why i like them alot and the humor in them you must be a funny women
I loved it... although I can't see Marcus with blond hair, I think he's fascinating... :) btw... the 'Get a room' line was perfect... I've seen it in hundreds of movies and read it in a lot of books, but it never fitted so good... btw... I'm starting to like Marcus more than Snape, so thank God Cassandra will tame him a little... he's too good being that dark!
aww, all your stories are absolutely adorable...well in their own special way. esp #9 :) well, i'd love to see more added to this series, but like you said, how much can you do with one plot line...but maybe some family life is in order eventually? eh? consider it.
Oh, my! The hotness! I want a Severus of my very own, but don't know if I'm a strong woman like Hermione. Don't want to settle for Ron, though, hee-hee. I'm hoping she'll come back for more and take care of her strong, possessive lover.
Your site is good!
The website is awesome and very informative
Hmmm... the Eradicators remind me of the Treadstone Project in the movie Borne Identity. hehehe. Loved the Story. Delaluci sounds absolutely appalling and very entertaining. Cant wait to read more about him. :)
that was such a beautiful speech from severus, about how much he loved hermione
Great stories! The Ch. 9 link needs to be fixed on "A Rather Catty Situation."
Oof, freaking amazing. ;) Best stress relief I've had in a while, keep it up, you've got a gift for lemons!
I LOVE this story! I LOVE you for writing it! this has made so happy, I am forever your fan! I am at a loss for words(for me this is very odd) SS/HG always and forever! roses to you @-->-->--LOVE Sumer Rain
Who was the woman Hermione saw fucking Snape on the astral plain? And great stories, I really love reading them!
Are you going to write more to this, or is it really ending?
I feel like a stupid psycophant cause every time I come to review your stories I have ony praises for them. I discovered your prose totally by chance (or did I?) and it's just the crack my SS/HG addiction needs. Only critic of this "porn with plot" story is after all the hormonal rollercoaster Hermione was in in the weks previous to the encounter, she seemed pretty cool and detached the moment they made it to the cabin, which stroke me as a bit odd after all the previous hornyness (is that even a word???) Apart from that, as a bookworm myself, I felt totally drawn by the story, the bookworm way you had Hermione explore her sexuality before consumating the act making me highly reminisce my own "researches" on the matter... Pity my first field experiment was NOT with our favourite Potions master, hehehehe.
Hmmm..interesting. I was a bit..shocked at first, haven't not read the others of the series, but I'm intriged. Great Job!!!
The link from Chapter 8 to 9 is broken. Love the series! I think you could use a copy editor, though.
reviewer: probably could use an editor, especially on those stories which were the first ones I wrote. I like to think I've improved somewhat, but yeah probably wouldn't hurt. I even used "panties" instead of "knickers" in a lot of the stories because I didn't know the proper british terminology, misused spells, etc. etc. Early work. Sigh. But glad you were still able to enjoy them.
:D It's very charming. I love it very much and it was beyond touching. Thank you so much for writing it.
I've just finished this and I'm about to start reading The Ghost and Lady Snape - at the end of every story I'm delighted to find there's another to lose myself in! Severus and Hermione's passion for each other touches me deeply and the plot lines are fascinating. Oh, and the lemons? My mouth is watering from them, hehe! I adore your dark, possessive Severus *wibbles* Thanks for sharing this story with us (and please don't stop writing!)
In the fourth book the fake Moody enlarges a spider using the enlarging spell, "engorgio". The stories are fabulous, by the way.
really enjoying this one so far - I love the set up where you are telling the story in flashback (the italics work for me but you have already finished so I don't mknow if it will stay that way) I just discovered your fics and am loving them all so far, I'm getting no sleep!
That was amazing. I would love to say something really insightful but I just can't think of anything good enough. I have read all your stories in about a week they are so engrossing and real. You clearly have a very good understanding of human nature :o)
Wow. What a story =| My poor boyfriend didn't know what hit him when he came home from work ;] Your writing is superb. Not only do you write amazing lemons, but I love the way you have portrayed both Snape and Hermione, dark!Snape is delicious! I was actually recommended your series WWIT by several members of the Facebook group "I'd Join the Dark Side to Fuck Severus Snape". Everyone there raved on about how amazing your writing and stories are. Just wanted to let you know that in the fanfic world, your name is well-known, and you are very much appreciated for such an amazing contribution to Snape and Hermione fanfiction :]
I just reread this story - such a great fic! I really enjoyed seeing Marcus with his parents and Fiona, and just now caught that Fiona made him promise to have at least one heir. He better keep that promise, as the world needs more dragon-men! I was pleased that Fiona was going to report Marcus' feat to her husband, the dragon ancestor. Thanks again for writing this fic!
when i discovered your stories at fanfinction.net i also bookmarked this page here, but i never really thoroughly looked at it. what a mistake! that's why i just found out yesterday that there are stories posted here that aren't to find at fanfiction.net or aff. so here i'm am, once more reading and immideatly adoring your stories. the way you describe severus (no matter what story) is really amazing. i dare say that your severus is my absolute ff - favorite!!!!!!!! and i'm sooo happy that i've got still lots of your written fantasies to read and then to reread!!!!! big applause, hooray!!!! sabine
SSSQQQQEEEE!!! I'm so glad I found this story again! I remember reading it a long time ago, at some archive or another... and I've been surching for it for weeks! LOL Thank goodness for message boards! I LOVE this story! lol *waves fan* Girl you sure know how to write them! LOL Thanks so much for giving me a well needed break from reality. Your FANTASTIC! 10 gold stars!!!!
I love your series - I know I don't review as much as I should do, but that's only because I can't wait to read what happens next! :D Well done!
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hello Ms. Figg...i've just recently found this site and i wanted to say that you are a great author. i look forward to readin more.
Whew! I was a tad bit concerned reading the rough anal penetration scene! It seemed very non-con and more brutal than Sev has been up to now. I normally like that a lot (in RL and reading), but not this one. Gosh!
I crawl to the floorboards of your wonderous lemonade stand to throw myself at your feet. I shall proclaim my unworthiness and lift my voice to sing your praises!! Okay, I admit, I don't have much of a voice for singing, but I still love your stories. I think this is my favorite so far, but I still have more to read. You are definatly one of my favorite fan fiction writers. That sentence was a bit of a run-on, but you get the idea. Please continue to write, so that I might fill my insommnia induced hours with lemony goodness. I hope my "review" will help to nurture your lemon orchard.
awesome! I really like Eli the houseelf. And I love how you alway manage to spin a story around the lemons that is fun and exciting to read. Today I had a pretty bad day but your story distracts me. So I guess I should thank you :)
"But he still scowled a lot." XD Love it! As per usual, you have amazed me. <3 My only criticism would be the phrasing of one line. But it wasn't at all crucial and I seem to have misplaced where I saw it... so yep. ^-^ <3 Hoping you are well and having as much fun writing as I am reading! <3
Oh my god! I don't want Hermione to get hurt, lol, I'm scared for her!
It's ashame you don't do more anal. You do that EXTREMELY well. Only, I have to be honest. I don't care how often you do it ... it's always going to hurt at first. lol
Rabbid romantics?? LOL. Okay! Great story. That bit about fucking her with the knife was harsh. EFFECTIVE, but harsh. Still, great way to introduce the love factor. I know this story is old ... but I'm just getting around to reading it.
I noticed you commented that these are your eariler works and there are a few mistakes and whatnot. I have to tell you I think your eariler works are the best I keep reading them over and over...
Draco deserved to die, that bastard! Now, please bring him back (in something witty & sexy, please). As always, I looooove your work :D
Hi - the link to #9 isn't working :o
wow. you finished this part about 2 years ago...hehe. i love the last chapter. you described the final battle very well. i enjoyed that part the most really. the way you described each person battling on their own..wow. by the way, i couldnt help but notice how, when you said that hermione and severus flanked either sides of harry....where was ron ? =S you seem to have left him out there haha. until you have harry mention him near the end. wow..hermione was a real hero. =) anywayz. thanks. =)
sorry; actuali iono wen you finished it ^^" i only realised that this review page is for all parts so i`ve only been reading the dates in each review below rather than reading it properly. terribly sorry about that ^^"
this...this was an awesome awesome series! i enjoyed every moment of it ;) i`m very happy for hermione and severus..and now desmona. thank you so much for this great story =)
I absolutely loved this story. In fact I love every story I have read that was written by you I especially got a great laugh over poor Severus's uncomfortable experience with the pregnancy suit. I laughed so hard I was having trouble not losing my place while wiping tears from my eyes. Thank you ever so much for this wonderfully touching and hilarious story. Keep them coming, please!!!!
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