AFF Reviews for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

nicole boulet		2005-08-31	id # 2035390555
WONDERFUL! You are a gifted writer. I cannot wait to read more!!!

ancientgirl		2005-08-31	id # 2035390570
Okay, you have my undivided attention. Please update soon.

Anon		2005-08-31	id # 2035390617
An excellent start. There's nothing I like better than dark ex-Death Eaters hunting Little Lionesses. Update regularly, and you will no dubt garner a loyal following.

Charlotte		2005-08-31	id # 2035390637
Great start. I look forward to whatever you have in mind for later chapters.

DB2020		2005-08-31	id # 2035390865
So good! I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter, I'm hooked. Wonderful ^_^

Belle_Morte		2005-08-31	id # 2035390997
GREAT!!!!! Please up date soon ^-^

Danu	(Email Hidden)	2005-08-31	id # 2035391007
I think you have a brillant start. Would love to see it continued.

firewall		2005-08-31	id # 2035391176
This story has possibilities...was it a one shot or are you continuing? I enjoyed Snapes mental responses. LOL I'll be interested to see where you go from here.

Hypatia		2005-08-31	id # 2035391282
Wow!! What a GREAT start! The writing is nothing short of captivating.......... I can't wait to read more!!

firewall		2005-08-31	id # 2035391341
Severus, you sneaky snake you! hahahaha Interesting chapter....that was a dream and a half.

Kira		2005-09-01	id # 2035391644
This story is fantastic. I really hope you continue with it.

JTBJAB		2005-09-01	id # 2035391743
Wow... interesting, I just hope you aren't going to make Severus too Dark as a character!

lovethelab		2005-09-01	id # 2035391832
"ready, oh so ready to offer her intimate knowledge of that sweet fruit of good and evil that hung low and pungent between his thighs." What a great line!! Just evokes all sorts of images that are none to pure!

lovethelab		2005-09-01	id # 2035391835
Well, That was hot! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Anon		2005-09-01	id # 2035391910
For a first smut scene, you did a wonderful job. I was thinking as I read it that you even came up with some new and eventive descriptions for body parts and secretions. Also, I really liked your dream sequence of the Lioness and The Serpent. Keep doing what you're doing, and you'll have a very well written, and certainly sexy story.

JTBJAB		2005-09-01	id # 2035391934
For your first lemony scene - I have to say I am quite amazed. --- In a good way that is --- I thought it was excellant, and just perfect =p I can't wait for your next chapter... sigh...

Hope		2005-09-01	id # 2035391951
Wonderful absolutely wonderful please get them together soon. It will definitly be worth the wait, hopefully not too long of a wait.

bunny_wigglesworth		2005-09-01	id # 2035392122
*fans self* Oh my... that was something to behold. I must say you have a stunning way with words. I like Snape's fuck-it-all attitude as he decides that he will have the delectable Miss Granger. As one reviewer once told me... 'I do so love a shameless Snape'. As for you first lemon... let me just say... it was just the right amount of 'tart'. Poweful imagery as well, it's interesting to see what is basically a PWP with such imginative, descriptive, language. Keep it up... I can hardly wait to see what the climax of your little tale will bring.

Zoltaire the Inscrutable		2005-09-01	id # 2035392136
First Lemony scene, you say? Dang. Yeah, that was good, that was very good. I especially liked that whole 'where the real snake of Slytherin is hidden' part (I know it's not a direct quote, but I can't be fussed to hit the back button, copy it, move back to reviews page and retype the little that I had typed before that part. Sorry.) Seriously, great job. I'll have you know, I actually have passed over this story a few times, before deciding to take a chance with it. Now I'm hooked. Eagerly awaiting your next Update. Zoltaire the Inscrutable

jenniferr68		2005-09-01	id # 2035392357
So far its fantastic I cant wait till you write more.

Hypatia		2005-09-01	id # 2035392646
I can't wait to see what happens next!

Bree		2005-09-02	id # 2035392948
AHHH!! This is such a wonderful story!!! Not only is it really well written - the dream was just insane - but it's a great plot and the characters and the whole story... Wow. I'm really stoked to continue with this story. I hope you plan on continuing with it soon! THANKS so much :)

shiv5468		2005-09-02	id # 2035392995
Good for Hermione - well said! You're building up the tension nicely, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Just one tiny thing though - it's Hermione not Hermoine. An easy mistake to make.

ancientgirl		2005-09-02	id # 2035393094
Oh damn, how can you just leave it like that? I'm glad she tore Ron a new one. Men need that sometimes. I guess since you left a cliffy my only consolation can be that you have been updating frequently. I can't wait for that "interception."

Medea		2005-09-02	id # 2035393099
*takes a deep breath and begins to type. stops. realises she cant say anything much. frowns at herself and tries again* wow... you have the most beautiful lyrical style, your imagery is *flaps again as she cant get the right word* wow. Fantastic. Wonderful. Sensuous. Alluring. Inveigling. And Bewitching.

JTBJAB		2005-09-02	id # 2035393154
I thought it was very easy to understand - I mean Severus was calling all the shots, so he was the one with the longer and stronger dialogue, with Hermione answering.... have H: and S: would have broken the flow of it!!! This chapter was amazing, and I hope to god you update soon....this chapter had me going crazy!

Moi		2005-09-02	id # 2035393156
I thank you from the bottom of my heart for not labeling the dialog. That would have been extremely juvenile.

Anon		2005-09-02	id # 2035393187
This story rocks! It's a testament to how good I find this story that you have reduced me to writing such things. By the way, bite as hard as you want. It's sort of a kink of mine ;)>

nothingness		2005-09-02	id # 2035393201
really great chapter. i cant wait until u update!!

tonkatrish	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-02	id # 2035393251
Reading these SS/HG fanfics, this by far is the one that leaves me hanging on the edge....not unlike Hermione. The "good girl" dying to slake her thirst with the "bad boy"---- priceless. And he has her without even trying...great job. I'm hooked and awaiting the update

ancientgirl		2005-09-02	id # 2035393561
Aha, I see no sweet Snape in the future. Dark Snape to come. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Serentipity01	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-02	id # 2035393884
Hi! I just read your story through to chapter five and I am absolutely hooked. Can't wait for the lemons you promised ;) The 'private' dialogue was easy to follow, no worries there :) I love your style of writing, especially the fact that you tell the story alternating between Herminoe's and Severus' point of view - makes for highy entertaining reading *sigh* I'm curious, will you enter an emotional level to the pending relationship between them? I'll confess, I'm a sucker for emotional entanglements on top of physical action ;) Guess I'll have to wait and see like everybody else, then ... Two thumbs up for your work and virtual moral support for the continuation. Serendipity01

Hypatia		2005-09-02	id # 2035393945
Wow!!!! This is fantastic so far. (I'm getting mighty thirsty for handsqueezed lemonade!!)

Anon		2005-09-02	id # 2035394052
So good! You have to update soon. Just.. wow. I never thought of their relationship that way. Update woman!

lindsey	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-03	id # 2035394391
one of the best stories i've read so far...ur a really great writer and i like ur style of writing! i can't wait for the next update for this story!

Yabo	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-03	id # 2035395062
Dear lord! I think I need to start smoking if I want to finish the rest of this. Great job, keep it up!

Anon		2005-09-03	id # 2035395216
Squeeze the lemons !!!!!!!Squeeze them!!!!!

Lord Voldemort		2005-09-03	id # 2035395222
I would just like to say that I rather object to the fact that I am hardly in this story at all. Severus Snape is nothing but a snivelling piece of traitorous filth.You must stop writing about him "getting laid" as you Muggles put it, and let MOI deflower the delectable Miss Granger instead.I am the Dark Lord.Everyone knows that means I will be a much better shag and far more evil to boot. I order you to write sexy lemons about Lord Voldemort and beeeeyoutiful LAYDEEZ this instant. Love from The Dark Lord xx

luvssnape		2005-09-04	id # 2035395296
I LOVE this story. I love the way you portray snape. I love my Snape dark and cruel and sarcastic. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am happy that you update so frequently. Looking forward to more!!!

DawnEB		2005-09-04	id # 2035395415
You know, citrus is very good for colds. Why don't you just immerse yourself in lemon, then share with the rest of us? ;) I like your nasty snarky Severus, with just the slightest inkling of a conscience ruthlessly subdued.

JTBJAB		2005-09-04	id # 2035395604
Oh mn you have to update again soon - you are not jus torturing Hermione, but me and the rest of the readers too!!!! I hope you feel better, cause real life sucks, so get well soon - but don't push yourself to write the next chapter if you feel too bad.

Medea		2005-09-04	id # 2035395668
A writer after my own heart then ,) I hate Fluffy Severus.. its just not canon and its just not Severus. He's a bastard, thats why we love him because woman love bastards. Lets face it, we wouldnt be the shippers we are if we didnt want deep down what this story is portraying ,)

firewall		2005-09-04	id # 2035395815
This story is definitely developing into a really interesting and well-developed story. Thanks for sharing it with us. Gotta love an egocentric selfish Snape. BUT I could give Hermione a good swift boot in the butt...I hope she develops a bit of backbone.

cboyer21	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-04	id # 2035396359
Okay, blackmail worked to get me to review, something I rarely do. I can't wait to see what you have planned next

firewall		2005-09-04	id # 2035396380
Yes, the game is afoot and by the glittering of Snape's eyes, he's enjoying every second of the foreplay. LOL I am glad to hear that Hermione still has some gumption, I'd hate for her to be a doormat and a snarky Snape needs someone who will stand up to him. Here's hoping for another chapter tonight. *fingers crossed*

BeautifullyMalicious	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-04	id # 2035396387
This is one of the best HG/SS's that I've come across in a while. The UST is simply divine. Keep writing, I'm DYING to read the smut!

TheAngelOfSilence		2005-09-04	id # 2035396388
Wahey!!!!Come on , my dear, harvest those lemons from the tree! I for one cannot wait!

Killer Kadoogan		2005-09-04	id # 2035396417
Smashing story, dearie!!! I just love it! You must realize that you have been way too much of a tease thus far! Naughty git! Now you shall be punished- enter Snape with a whip and various other punishments. Seriously though this is some very great writing! You have a really good way of teasing us along and we still come back for more! And I, too, like my Snape just the way you write him. You have done a wonderful job of staying true to the character and adding your own unique flavor to him. Bravo, sweetie!!! I am anxiously awaiting the "deflowering" and I hope that much shagging will ensue(is that spelled right? Oh well, much too lazy to get up and check)! Much happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud! Hugs and kisses! Killer K (Lovin' my Snape!!!)

MyEmeraldEyes		2005-09-04	id # 2035396526
Your not stopping there are you? I am simply going to say: I like it, no actually I love it! Hehe Hope you update soon.

Zoltaire the Inscrutable		2005-09-05	id # 2035396562
TONIGHT! TONIGHT! TONIGHT! Do not make us wait! We've waited long enough! (sorry, but that letter of dear, DEAR Severus' gave me chills.) You don't know how upset I was getting reading this chapter. All sexual frustration and tension and what-not, building up to the big climax (pun TOTALLY intended) and then we slow down quite a bit to examine Hermione's intentions and thought process. NOOOOOO! Now, gentle author, write this day down. This is the first, last and only time I will ever say this. For the love of all that is holy and quite a few things that are not: SKIP THE PLOT AND BRING ME SMUT! Seriously, I usually by-pass PWP, but the tension is too much for even me to take any longer! I'm going cross-eyed from trying to imagine what your creative little mind will be gifting us with. Wouldn't that be a treat for my optometrist! 'I don't need glasses, doctor, I just need Ms_Figg to write the smut already!' Okay now, I hope this review can be the one to sway you to release chapter 8 early, and to release we {cough me}, the desperate reader[s] of our need for smut. Pretty please? Zoltaire the Inscrutable

katie	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-05	id # 2035396577
oooo i hope you do bring the enxt chapter soon its a very good story ive been watching for it every day

Cindy	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-05	id # 2035396591
This is so good! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Scully_m_	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-05	id # 2035396604
Very very entertaining. I just finished reading this from start to ... well... now. I turly enjoyed their mental meeting. It was quite clear who was saying what so have no worries there. I love how Hermoine was 'stiffly' packing her things and kept on thinking 'He has sent for me'. I can not wait for more.

luvssnape		2005-09-05	id # 2035396643
Please, please, please update soon. I can't stand to wait. AAAAAAAhhhhhh!!! I need to read more. oh sorry I was freaking out there for a second. Anyways I love the note that Severus sent. Especially the part about not wearing makeup because it would just run, that was some good stuff. Anyways I hope to you update soon.

Lorelie79	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-05	id # 2035396651
*Jumps up and down* Please post more! This is really good and it's sucked me right in. Excelent job!

nothingness		2005-09-05	id # 2035396662
I for one really enjoy your story alot! i think you need to update asap! ahhh, but seriously, i really love this fic and cant wait till you post!!!

ann		2005-09-05	id # 2035396730
please please please put up another chapter. This is so good i don't want you wait to put up the next chapter in a few days. please update

Anon		2005-09-05	id # 2035396731
tonight !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you must update tonight. I am dying to know what happens next. want to read some lemony goodness

jenn		2005-09-05	id # 2035396733
update soon update tonight can't standing waiting for the next chapter

Anon		2005-09-05	id # 2035396735
love love love this story . i love how you made the story really angsty . keep up the good work and update soon. tonight if possible

Shmlss		2005-09-05	id # 2035396804
uhm... now please. :) thanks. it would be greatly appreciated. i can't believe how you've kept me hooked for seven chapters with no solid smut. it's remarkable. i don't want to wait. i'm an impatient woman. please. thankyou again. hehe.

Shmlss		2005-09-05	id # 2035396811
i was previously under the misconception that i had already reviewed your story. it appears as though i have not. so... your story is incredible. i always love a story where severus starts out being a complete dick, as usual. i tend to stray when the stories don't turn to true love and romance and quasi-mushy!severus and all that rubbish. HOWEVER, you write incredibly, your characterisation is fabulous and very much on target, and there is promise of good, old-fashioned, rough shagging ahead. so. you rock. the story rocks. go you! WOO HOO! :)

Serentipity01	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-05	id # 2035396841
That's it, I am absolutely done asking for anything storywise from you - I know when to trust a master ;) I love your story! Enough flattery to upload chapter 8 tonight? Pleeeease? See you've reduced me to an embarrassing state of dependance *ggg* Fingers crossed and hopes up, Serendipity

JTBJAB		2005-09-05	id # 2035396928
Holy crap - the only thing I could think of to say - brilliant, would be another.... I can't wait to see what Hermione decides she wants

Hypatia		2005-09-05	id # 2035397019
Brava!! Well worth the wait.

firewall		2005-09-05	id # 2035397101
Your Snape has an interesting blend of brutality and sweetness...the sharp edginess taking precedence. I'm relieved Hermione is now asserting herself...you had me worried. A very hot chapter.

wildly_unreal		2005-09-05	id # 2035397233
Oh MAN! (*fans self*) i found this story yesterday and haven't been able to stop reading. it's sooooo good. Please write more soon!!

lovethelab		2005-09-05	id # 2035397268
Well, that was HOT! I can't wait to see what Hermione does to Severus in the next chapter. Will he really be able to leave her after their night together?

luvssnape		2005-09-05	id # 2035397350
Wow!!! That was an awesome chapter. I can't wait for more!! I love the dialogue that you give Severus it is different, more real, than many other stories that I have read.

nothingness		2005-09-05	id # 2035397366
omg!! that is sooo hot. you've got to update soon or i might just explode!! ~hugs, nothingness~

DeathCab	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-05	id # 2035397492
Omg.... need moreeee *dies*

deathraven	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-05	id # 2035397552
omg i love your story so far can't wait for the next update!!

EriWren		2005-09-05	id # 2035397695
I love this. It's my very favorite. I literally sat and read it from chapter one all the way through. You are good.

deathraven	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-05	id # 2035397772
yaaay! i can't wait for the next chapter!!! update update!!!

JTBJAB		2005-09-05	id # 2035397785
Great chaper... and damn it, if only spells like that existed.... sigh Update soon, even if that does mean the end is nearer... i just need the next chapter!

Zoltaire the Inscrutable		2005-09-05	id # 2035397856
Ms_Figg, Sugar. the tobacco companies of this great nation shall shortly be sending you many, many thank-you letters. After reading chapters 8 and 9, wiping the drool from my face and shifting uncomfortably in my chair more times than I care to relate, I feel the need for some sort of post-coital vice. Alas, smoking seems to not be my particular cup of tea, I wonder if they still make those candy cigarettes (we used to use them in elementary school. thought they made us look cool. I was such a dork!) More seriously now, that was awesome. that was incredibly great. that was sooooo worth the wait, (even though you are such a treasure and didn't make us wait. thank you! thank you! thank you!) Honestly, that was brilliant. I loved Hermione's brains are sexy comment. such a Hermione thing to do. Also, thank you for not making dear Severus a complete fluff-ball. He's a snarky so-and-so and we love him that way, dang it! Have I mentioned that this was stunning yet? Now, you just take your time writing another chapter. Absolutely no pressure from my quarter. You've left plenty of reading material. I can read over and over and over and over. and over and over and over. and then maybe one more time for good measure. or two. Can't wait to see what other stories you wish to put to the masses! Taa! Zoltaire the Inscrutable

luvssnape		2005-09-06	id # 2035397919
Once again awesome chapter (9). I was excited to see that you updated so soon. I wish that I had your talent. Of course if I could think this stuff up then I would just sit in a daze and never respond to reality so I guess it is wise that I am an avid reader and not an avid writer although I wish I was. Can't wait to read more.

Shmlss		2005-09-06	id # 2035397972
you're a sick woman for leaving this at only ten chapters and an epilogue. sick. what will you do with yourself? knowing that there are much more sexperiences to be had, here. wow. kay. wow. thanks (undying and undivided gratitude) for the lemonade. delicious. (PINK lemonade! and that's not to imply that your story is fluffy as pink might entail, but more a reference... hehehehahahaha!) i left a dollar in the cup. keep the change; i'll be back, expecting more from you, good lady! :)

lovethelab	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-06	id # 2035397988
WOW That is about all my lust-addled mind can come up with right now! WOW!!!

Thea		2005-09-06	id # 2035398199
This is not only a very good lemon-story but also a story in which both - Snape and Hermione - are so in character - very, very good. It´s great to read it and believe me - it works! Please write more like this and I´ll be a fan of you for eternety. Greetings and thanks for this story! Thea

Serentipity01	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-06	id # 2035398230
Oh. My. God. You've reduced me to a quivering mass incapable of anything but rereading and obsessing about your story. Congratulation! I seriously envy you your imagination and will therefor be eternally grateful that you had the good sense to share some of it with those less gifted ;) Although you DID ruin a lot of other stories for me - I keep finding fault with anything else now ... well, can't have everything, can you ;) Please continue writing and posting here!

Zoltaire the Inscrutable		2005-09-06	id # 2035398324
Belly dancing, eh? I think I saw a video on that in wally-world the other day. something like Fina and Nina Teach the Art or some such. Who would have thought it could be used in that fashion?! Bravo, Ms_Figg, Bravo. Encore! Many, many, many more encores, if you please. One thing. I believe you spelled McGonagall's name wrong. (Please don't ask me how that managed to jump out at me in the middle of all that lemony goodness. Heaven's honest truth, I don't know) As always, 'twas wonderful. Taa. Zoltaire the Inscrutable

JTBJAB		2005-09-06	id # 2035398334
Oh man, how the hell can he even think about giving her up after that?!?!?!?! I can't wait till the next chapter arrives!!!!

Anon		2005-09-06	id # 2035398379
Heh heh heh! A truly magnificent bumper harvest of juicy lemons!

Allie		2005-09-06	id # 2035398422
Oh my... This whole story certainly was erotic. I must say, the way you portray Snape is probably my favorite fiction version of him. I'm gonna be sad when this story is over, especially when the have to part ways. Maybe they won't have to though? Maybe you, the wonderful author, will have them together forever? Or is that just wishful thinking? :) Either way, I LOVE the story!

Maria		2005-09-06	id # 2035398466
This is one of the most amazing HG/SS stories I've ever read - and I've read them all. Wow. Very well done!

EriWren	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-06	id # 2035398488
YAY! I love this. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!

deathraven		2005-09-06	id # 2035399083
oh i just love your story you just have to keep going your really good at smut, just thought that i should tell you. well i can't wait for the next chapter. love it love it!! UPDATE and soon please. ~*giggle*~

luvssnape		2005-09-07	id # 2035399170
Once again lovely chapter. I laughed out loud about the "did she just call me baby" comment. Very funny!

deathraven	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035399190
oh i don't want it to be over i just love your story soo fucking much!! ~*TEAR*~ oh its such a good story ~*TEAR*~ you will just have to write another stroy now wont you,~*SMILY TEAR*~. oh fuck it i'm sad oh well i hope you will write another story you are a really good writer!! ~*one last TEAR*~

Serentipity01	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035399342
AMAZING!!! You've truly created something beautiful here! I love your Snape - will you let him return in another story? Or a sequel perhaps? That would make a lot of people REALLY happy ;) I know, I know, here we've got a bad case of 'give them a finger and they want the whole hand' - let's just say that selfishness is a sign of a true fan ;)

FinalPhoenix	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035399421
well i read the ending before school this morning and the dialogue that followed was this. ''wait, what? oh shit, that was the ending.'' i put everything else on hold to read yours and now i'm emo that it's over. congratulations you've written the best i've seen.

JTBJAB	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035399491
Wow! I am speechless... something I never thought would happen!!! Well done!!!

Hypatia		2005-09-07	id # 2035399492
What a GREAT read!! Completely satisfying through and through.

snapescat		2005-09-07	id # 2035399548
WOW! There has got to be more. He is a tough guy but she's broken him, he just doesn't know it yet. I think he's addicted. Sequel??

Zoltaire the Inscrutable		2005-09-07	id # 2035399573
Great Googa-Mooga! What an awesome story! How will I ever survive without the torment of waiting for the next chapter of this story?! Aaaaargh! You've completely ruined me for any other SS/HG story! Well, I guess I'll just have to re-read. So, how many Epilogues are you planning? I think you have to do at least 11 (for starters). Each chapter needs and epilogue. And then each epilogue will need an epilogue. I think we could safely say there should be at least 44 more chapters epilogues for this story, don't ya think? It's only fair, to the story, I mean. And, I'm sure that the readers can find the time to spare from their hectic schedules to read the epilogues. Yes, we are a busy lot, but I'm sure we can squeeze you in. Please? Zoltaire the Inscrutable

me		2005-09-07	id # 2035399717
I´m very interested to read a sequel.This fic is really great. Thank you for the fast updates.

ladyofthemasque	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035399723
Sorry, hon, this isn't an epilogue. This is a continuation chapter. An epilogue wraps up loose threads in the tapestry of your story. You just dangled several more in front of your readers, and you didn't even tie them into a decorative fringe. Bad author. Finish the tale as it should be finished, even if it takes you several more chapters. ~Lotm (who rarely leaves reviews on this site, so consider yourself warned)

Serentipity01	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035399733
I think you've got a bit of a taste for sadism, don't ya? Well, blackmail at least ;) OF COURSE you have to write a sequel - can't let all these delicious unspoken thoughts and secrets go to waste! So take a break, relax, take loads of bubble baths and then get back to your computer to GIVE US MORE! *beggingonmyknees*

Septentrion		2005-09-07	id # 2035399745
if reviewers are all you need to provide us with a sequel, then I shall provide you with a review : I've loved this story but it has left me starving. Hell, you left too many loose knots ! You just have to tie them now ;-)

Ariel	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035399761
This was so...so...WONDERFUL! I need a part two or my head will explode! Please have mercy on my empty head ^^

Anon		2005-09-07	id # 2035399763
OK now... I don't want to beg... but, Please let there be a Part II !!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

tamidon	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035399791
Keep going, please please

luvssnape		2005-09-07	id # 2035399793
I am soooo happy you decided to add more. I want them to be together again soooo bad. You are an amazing writer. Keep up the awesome work. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Zoltaire the Inscrutable		2005-09-07	id # 2035399804
You tease! You bloody tease! aaaarrrrrggggghhhhh! Okay, now that that is out of my system. Sequel away, Dear Ms_Figg, Sequel away! Was that meant to be a filler between the two stories? or Chapter 1 of the Sequel? I can't wait. Hopefully, the sequel will center around Severus chasing Hermione, tit for tat and all that. Great work. I knew you wouldn't let us down! Taa Zoltaire the Inscrutable

Stormi	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035399808
Yeah!!! We get a sequel! Love the story and am looking forward to the next chapter. Stormi

Anon		2005-09-07	id # 2035399809
please make a part 2 would love to read another installment of this story. this story is so addicting. would love to find out what happens with hermione and snape.do they get together in the end? please keep writing .

lovethelab	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035399812
Great first chapter for your next story! I am glad that Hermione had enough strength to deny Severus what they both wanted. I love you house elf - Eli, I hope we get to see more of him. Can't wait for your next chapter!

ancientgirl		2005-09-07	id # 2035399822
Yeah, I didn't think he really wanted to let her go in that last story. I'm guessing he's feeling hurt since she probably didn't contact him in a year. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Amanda		2005-09-07	id # 2035399833
VERY hot!!! And a little kinky. I like it. Hope you make a sequel soon.

JTBJAB		2005-09-07	id # 2035399861
Ooh, definitely not an epilogue.... oh i can't wait for the sequel!!!!!

Anon		2005-09-07	id # 2035399899
best story I have read in a long time....and I read tons of erotica :)...keep up the amazing work...and please write a sequel

NVSCat	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035399932
WOW what a story. I loved it. Can't wwait to see what happens next. PLEASE keep writing. Nancy (NVSCat)

snapescat		2005-09-07	id # 2035399993
Thankyou for continuing. I look forward to the story unfolding.

beeky63		2005-09-07	id # 2035400033
Well that was bloody brillant!!! Ladyofthemasque and snapesflower have always been my favourite authors and their smut has been the best. You now rank right up there with them. This story was unbelievably erotic and I can't wait for the sequel and further lemony adventures of Severus and Hermione penned by your hand. YOU ROCK. Lots of hugs and kisses to you and thank you.

DawnEB		2005-09-07	id # 2035400165
oh yes -more!

firewall		2005-09-07	id # 2035400189
I really enjoyed the last story and it ended as it should have...but ... this story has real possibilities as well. Gotta love a snarky Snape story.

ladyofthemasque	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035400257
YAY!!!! YAAAAAAAAY!!! YAAAYYYY!!! *bouncybouncybouncy* More, please!! ~Lotm

ladyofthemasque	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-07	id # 2035400259
P.S. I agree with Beeky63. I meant to tell you that in our IM; I guess my first review comes off as a bit terse, because I neglected to mention that part. (I rarely review on this site because the writing varies so wildly in quality.) This is really good storytelling! Have you considered submitting this one to www.restrictedsection.org? ~Lotm

Hope		2005-09-08	id # 2035400294
Thou art very cruel if you do not get them together!!!But oh well, at least you keep Snape in character. Please get them together!!!Pleading. I will send chocolate.

Anon		2005-09-08	id # 2035400305
The brainy, intellectual Hermione was gone now, driven out by the animal that was Severus Snape. - Brilliant!! Loved it.

anon		2005-09-08	id # 2035400380
you've really got to update the sequel to this story. i absolutely love the way you write and i can't wait to see how the couple will overcome their issues.

Killer Kadoogan		2005-09-08	id # 2035400969
Oh, finally!!! It felt like my computer has been down for years instead of days! What a glorious way to finish up, dearie! I can now congratulate you on your fine lemonade!!! Woo-eee!!! And I must add, that is a very big compliment coming from a born and bred true Southerner like myself! You make it just right- really sour! Yum, yum!!! But you do know how we Southerners love our lemonade! Can't wait to check out your sequel. As always I will be expecting great things from you, terribly erotic, but great things!!! Happy writing, mi chicquita!!! Tengo que irme! Salud! Hugs and kisses! Killer K :)

Angie		2005-09-08	id # 2035401079
OMG! That was one of the hottest stories I have ever read. You are truly talented. Great Job!

ladydeathfaerie	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-08	id # 2035401302
Bravo! i really enjoyed this. nice smut and a lovely, snarky, nasty Potions Master to lust over. well done. ~blessings~ ldf

wormey		2005-09-10	id # 2035402559
“Yes. Yes I do realize that…Severus,” she replied softly, hesitating on the unfamiliar but enticing sound of his given name on her tongue. “You have been the most honest and forthcoming member of all the faculty in Hogwartz.” Hogwarts has a "s", not a "z" at the end.... and its like that a bit further down.

Lindsey		2005-09-11	id # 2035404828
that was such a good story! i loved it..it was the perfect balance of everything and i really enjoyed reading it!!! thank u for that story and i just wanted to say great job and i love ur writing!!!

amsev		2005-09-16	id # 2035409816
Oh me oh my, but that was so HOT! I look forward to reading part 2, but now I've got to take a breather (fans face with hand)

CynthiaAnastasia	(Email Hidden)	2005-09-17	id # 2035411572
Loved it. Very passionate, and not just a randy piece of smut. I enjoyed how you kept the characters true to the traits they held, even if it meant no sappy happy ending. Well done.

Anna		2005-09-18	id # 2035412918
Pumping back and forth for ages doesn't suggest a sexgod to me. Being a sexy, good lover is about a lot more than having a big penis and stamina. This sex was just bad and boring. The beginning of this fic was really excellent which is why I felt so let down by the fulfilment of all Severus' teasing. You are a great writer and I might certainly look for more of your fics in the future but for now I feel a bit put off by our different views on sexyness or whatever I should call it. Please don't feel discouraged but this is just my honest opinion. Love, Anna

Ms_Figg		2005-09-19	id # 2035413577
Anna: I appreciate your review. I would like to state however that this story is PORN, and there's a lot of humping and pumping in Porn. That's its reason for being. Sorry if you didn't like the sex scenes. But..... Prerequiste for Porn: Men with huge penises and lots of stamina. Although I appreciate you expressing interest in reading more of my work, I wouldn't suggest reading What Was I Thinking ~ Part 2. Even though it has somewhat more of a plot, it is still smut, and there are graphic sex scenes there along the very lines you dislike, that would probably offend you very, very, very much. I would rather you not read my work, than read it and feel let down in any way. There are other, much better writers than me out here that are probably more suited to your tastes. Thank you for reviewing.

sorynliv		2005-09-19	id # 2035413981
While I'm not very good with a review in true form, I can honestly say that this was a fantastic PWP. The story was well written and, well, 'Holy Smut Batman'. Very hot and lemony fresh. Off to read pt.2. Thanks for the entertainment!

kat1441		2005-09-23	id # 2035419117
I decided to come back and relive the good old days instead. It occured to me that I had never reviewed before I reviewed that "other" episode of the series. I picked this chapter because it is the sexiest blowjob scene I've ever seen written. Particulary, I think, because he'd never experienced it either. I don't know. Whatever it was, I wish I could write like that!

dicey		2005-10-03	id # 2035430820
lady, you sure do have a way with words!! Sev="orgasmic express" ALL ABOARD!!!! (I wanna ticket!!!) *whew* Your Sev is soooo ferally, virile and intensely SEXY *pants* *cartoon tongue hanging down LOW & eyeballs bugged out, etc.*

dicey		2005-10-03	id # 2035430838
atta girl, Hermione! I'd like to transfigure that Weasel into a tapeworm for picking on her so much *sniggers*

Linda		2005-10-12	id # 2035443332
Ms. Figg....great writing. You build your characters with such reality, they are well fleshed out. The sexual tension is extraordinary and your descriptions are awesome.

sbrande	(Email Hidden)	2005-10-29	id # 2035468857
Loved every minute of reading this great fic... Sometimes you have to get away from the mundane fics and have a good laugh... Cheers and thanks for writing this... Off to read Part 2!!! Sonia

SeductionsClaim		2005-11-17	id # 2035499807
*le sigh* Shame there's not really a yummy potions Master to teach...yah well yum is all I can really say at the moment

Suklaanmurunen		2005-11-26	id # 2035512880
Wow! I have to admit that I finally got enough of courage to review your amazingly fantastic story, I have read this thorough so many times that its now my duty to review this. Hmmm, what I could say? This isn't just a mindless PWP story only with randy shagging scenes but so much more with extra ordinary plot, I liked to see what they're thinking and you carried the plot amazingly good forward. And by the way, Severus is really so fucking good sex-god!!! ;)

Satai Delenn		2005-11-29	id # 2035519262
Review Chapter 5..... Good story so far, but you constantly misspell HogwartS..... It is not spelled HogwartZ.....

Anon		2005-12-22	id # 2035551783
that was so much fun!!!

aemilia	(Email Hidden)	2005-12-29	id # 2035563323
ok,i'm just being a pain in the ass about this, but the phrase ostendo versti translated comes out to be show true.which i mean, it does work. i'm in latin class and i was reading it and i was all like, 'SWEET!LATIN!' so yea, just little random thing.

slytheringriffendor21		2006-01-08	id # 2035584892
Wow! I can't believe I waited this long to read this one. I'm sorry about that now. This story rocked! I loved it! Going to find more of your stories I have yet to read! Your biggest fan, Tiffany

HighSign	(Email Hidden)	2006-01-10	id # 2035588937
'I am ready to gather the lemons in for harvest. I doubt there will be any sugar to be found.' Lovely turn of phrase. You are clearly twisted and evil, and I mean that as a mark of the highest respect. '-) Damn it, now I'm going to have to read everything you've ever written (that I can find). This is your fault, you know! -HighSign

Alexis	(Email Hidden)	2006-02-11	id # 2035643342
Ok i'm on ch4 right now and i know there are more but i had to stop and review because i love your story so far, but one line just cracked me up. Really i just started laughing out loud because it was brilliant it was the line: "Harry could have sworn he saw a flash of premeditated murder in her eyes" OMG the premeditated murder art is awesome. I love this story. You're a great author and now i am off to read the rest. Keep writing cuz you are bloody brilliant!

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