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Just testing the review board. :)
chatty: ch2- They are in earth? the place of the dead? lol. This is marvelous Ms_figg. I love the way you write about animals and make it soo good. I loved the line when you mentioned about sahara laughing at the little dog. lol. btw, whats Shadron doing now? And will sahara go back. She doesnt even know english right?
chatty: ch3- lol. 'beasts who swallowed humans and rode up and down! thats hilarious. Surely Sahara is not from earth right? if she is, she must be from some far off abandoned island. however its going nicely. and shadron is angry as hell. How on earth is Sahara going to communicate to the ppl in USA? is she going to fall in love with the vet? gods. so many questions. Please update. :)
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Story is interesting. I was a bit surprised when it's all taking place in Alabama. Well, here's to hoping Shadron doesn't find Sahara any time soon.
Alex: Well, that's deffinitely interesting. I really like seeing you try to write something original. Knowing you, you'll make wonders! Keep it up!
Chapter 3 - Love the story! More please.
(anaretaacronycal) So, do the dead still pass over to DarkWorld and get reincarnated or something? And in that case, does Sahara meet up with Kalami (or w/e) again? She could always bring her back, or another fight could ensue in DarkWorld where that darn SHandron was not sucessful. I don't like him, haha. Although the grey eyes do sound hot. You must like Lucius a little. Maybe he was the stranger on the island. *does a little dance*
chatty: Ms_Figg, Where's the new chapter? *whining* Please update soon.
Denise: Chp 1-3: well, i definatley like the story...u are a great writer...tbu this just isnt the same since its not a HG/SS story. I hope you havent given up on them! overall, i have no complaints about the story, the only confusion i have is wether or not sahara's tribe/home is on earth....if not where is it? cant wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
ccrawley: Possible romantic interest with the vet for Sahara. Why not have the title be Sahara? Liking the story so far, more soon. Please.
cutie_berry: interesting start! i wonder though, is Shadron "Severus" in disguise? he kinda possesses Severus' temperament... hahaha... can't wait for your next update!
Marsha - It's hard to review an original work because you don't have "know" the characters, and because you're seeing incomplete material. But here goes up to Chap 3. The whole Eldron and the village maidens was great. Keep Kilami alive, but banished (think sequels, woman!) Don't kill off a very viable male character you might use in your next original work. If there are more islands, put him on one where his nice guy image can tarnish and toughen a little. I'm withholding all other comments until I read more of the story. It's not fair to you to review until I know where Shadron, Celia/Bowser and Jeremy stand in the context of the plot. I'm from Alabama originally, so it's great that Sahara winds up there. I've read all your work on AFF and like your original characters - Oi! Marcus! and I trust you as a writer. More chapters, more review.
larissa...u may recognize me from AFF...i LOVE this story (although I hope the *hero* shows some redeeming characteristics soon)...MORE, Please!
larissa...u may recognize me from AFF...i LOVE this story (although I hope the *hero* shows some redeeming characteristics soon)...MORE, Please!
Severusism: Oh, yuck...Eldron's such a dirty peverted chief... Jeremy sounds like a cute vet... when's the next chapt?
Severusism: When's the next update?I love this story as much as your sshg ones.
Charmy: Ah! Original story! I love it so far, omg. Please continue it.. I'm a sucker for original storylines.
Charmy: For the love of God, Figgy! *grabs and shakes* PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! >_<
This story is great! Please update soon
vonHardenberg Great start, we'll be watching as you go. I am impressed with your ability to take Sahara's POV in the modern setting. The descriptions are like those often imagined in science fiction of the ET that lands on earth.You are good. Keep it up and you will be published some day. I have a feeling.
Are you ever going to update this??? The 1st 3 chapters are great... but we want more! Pretty Please? Or at least a reason why you aren't continuing this????
I was just wondering if you were going to update this again? I really do like the idea behind this story and I think it would be awesome if you continued to update it. I was really sad that you didn't update again, though I do love all of your other fics. Anyway, if you don't have time or don't like the story could you perhaps take it down? When I see it still up, I hope that it has been updated but am always disappointed when it hasn't been. ^^ Thank you.
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hey this seems like it's going to be pretty good figgy
Wow, how anyone could read this far and not want more, I don't know. I'm off to make my donation....excellent start and I love it so far. The conflict is terrific, and I like that Eldron is getting some because of it, lol! Maybe it'll breathe new life into him and Shadron will be sol! Looking forward to reading more....LK
hey that frontpic is so cool! i think u've just cast the crew for the would-be movie sahara :P doesnt that girl look really sweet? lol.
Well. So much for duty waiting for pleasure. I already gulped this down.
testing board from private location. Hope it works. lol.
ohhhh Ruth you are just as much an evil cliffie witch when your not writing about our fav couple. this story is going to be so much fun i can hardly wait!!!
Oh finally! And just when I was running out of fanfiction to read, you update. Life can just be bliss sometimes. I am reviewing to encourage you to continue. Because I want you to :)
Oh, excellent chapter! I'm so pleased to finally see the next chapter! Great job...now for Sahara to wake up in human form...or something. My, my...another interesting mother character. Is this one still alive? No?
Avanell: Lol. Yes she is. She predated June Barrows and was my original NAG mom. lolol. But Jeremy is no Emmet. He didn't act like it was okay and didn't take it well either.
it starts to be addictive, like your other stories! i just finished reading a matter of choice and needed to go on with something. I'm glad Jeremy's not gonna be like Emmet, we need a strong guy to fight the big bad wolf! please update soon!
it starts to be addictive, like your other stories! i just finished reading a matter of choice and needed to go on with something. I'm glad Jeremy's not gonna be like Emmet, we need a strong guy to fight the big bad wolf! please update soon!
Ooh! I just checked back for some unknown reason and found chapter V! Wonderful...so he has a vicious Ex, eh? Vitamin F? Too funny...I can't wait for that b**** to see Sahara in the flesh...oh, wait...HE has to see her, too! How will that go?
I just checked yet again...ha-ha...before heading of to San Francisco for my family to take me for an early b-day dinner. Loved it! I keep forgetting to ask...if he catches her in human form soon, will the bruises show? I just he does...see her, that is...or maybe Yvette will inform him of the woman. Ha-ha! Keep writing! Like, tonight! I'm sure demanding, aren't I?
Ok it took me practically all day to read the six chapters, but I finally managed to finish. This story is very addicting. I figured I would take me a few days to read all six chapter, but I couldn't stop reading, except when my son wouldn't let me read hich is why it took me all day! I love the character of Eldron, he may be dieing but that won't stop him from getting nookie from a lot of beautiful women! Can't wait to see what happens when Jemery finds out what Sahara really is, and of course Sahara can't help but have a little fun with him. And what will happen when Shadron tries to frind Sahara? So many possibilities. Looking forward to the next chapter.
More...more...more! (please?)
Oh man, Shadron is something else!! Poor Jermery, didn't even get a bite of the delicious, sounding, sandwich. LOL...can't wait for more.
Well it doesn't seem to matter who you are writing about...the words you weaver drag us in. Looking forward to reading what you come up with.
wow. so many chapters. sahara is definitely finding her way about. lol. isnt she missing her home? and wondering how Jeremy will react if he catches her in human form. and shadron is -runs out of words- oh and totally loved sahara stealing stuff from jeremy. there'll be a hell of a lot to payback to jeremey i guess when the time comes.
Wow, you've certainly gone to task with updating, haven't you? I love it! Sahara stealing the food, and acting innocent...
chatty: Sahara hasn't been gone long enough to miss her island yet. The past few weeks before she passed through the veil were probably pretty bad for her, and most likely she is relieved being away from Shadron.
To: birdy1247@yahoo.com I hope you read the reviews here. I can't email the Sahara link to this address! You made two donations for the same story because of this and I want to return one. Please contact me from another email address. Thank you. Ruth
Just now catching up to the story....great job! Can't wait for more!!
Sahara the couch potato...or rather, Sahara is absorbing information. Oh, dear...I think I'm thinking of Splash. Will it help her with the language? Or at least understanding better? When is he going to see her in human form, or talk to Yvette (that cow is bound to turn up somewhere)???
"Thanks for reading"? What is that? :) Another great chapter, as usual. That was close, though... she had changed in her sleep. I thought for sure she was going to get caught. I really do love this story.
Oh no Sahara is getting addicted to TV. I wonder if it would help her with the language. I wonder if/when she will reveal herself to Jeremey.
No. I don't think she is absorbing the language, more like learning things. Not necessarily anything she can use. Or even getting the right view about. For example a lot of people who catch fish, eat them. She was watching sport fishing. And crocodiles don't catch wilderbeest in Alabama. lol
I'm so sore from darn yardwork.....but I could finally get here and read it all! It's wonderful, Ruth! I cannot wait until she finally either reveals herself to him or gets caught by him. I don't think Yvette will be much of a problem, the little bitch. Something tells me that Sahara will be very territorial about Jeremy....*chuckle* Looking forward to more.... (Good thing she wasn't watching Discovery Health, she could've seen plastic surgery! Lol! LK
That was hilarious! I enjoyed it so much...I just knew Yvette would see the wolf next...btw: Yvette seems to have quite the pasty complexion. Ha-ha! Living indoors too much? Or...never mind. Very funny, and am glad he trusts SaharaWolf
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