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Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
Date:
13 Jun 2006
Time:
12:54:40
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Comments

Thanks again Alex. You're a wiz***

Reviewer:
Mia
Date:
14 Jun 2006
Time:
18:08:36
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Comments

You know I have to say I loved this story. LOL I know it was harsh but, honestly who wouldn't want to get revenge like that!!! Great job (of course we know that eventually our SS loves HG LOL). Great job!

Reviewer:
LaLa
T1:
o
Date:
08 Jan 2007
Time:
06:49:42
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I was actually expecting Sabrina to commit suiside.

Reviewer:
rose
T1:
r
Date:
03 Mar 2007
Time:
05:32:55
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Comments

great story hehe feel sorri for sabrina tho lol

Reviewer:
Jessica
T1:
3
Date:
03 Nov 2007
Time:
05:35:55
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Comments

Wow. Just WOW. I honestly hated this. Not your writing, definitely not that, but young Snape's brutalization. Although I can understand it from a point of a Slytherin, he had to redeem himself and his House pride. But... Wow. You portrayed him so light in the beginning, so happy with where he was going and who with. Then Sirius just had to go fuck it all up for him like usual. Can't a guy just let up for once? Your writing is absolutely amazing. I actually curled my lip in disgust at what he did and I'm hardly one for emotional reading. It was a very pleasurable read however, in a dark and twisted way that I'm not entirely comfortable with. Ha. Jess

Reviewer:
Jordanna
T1:
8
Date:
15 Jan 2008
Time:
19:48:54
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Comments

If anything, my respect for you as a write just skyrocketed with this story and your author's note. A story is a story is a story and they all must be told eventually. Good job, well written, even if it was a bit squicky in some places. :)

Reviewer:
JosieMarie
T1:
A
Date:
17 Feb 2008
Time:
22:16:20
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Comments

I love this, of course I havn't read a story yet that I didn't love. It is a little dark, but as you put in the note at the end, it had to be. Something had to send Snape on his path.

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