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REPOST: I'm home!! Thank you all for your well wishes, but I couldn't stay there. But I am fine, just overdid it a little. I hope you'll all take a look at the letter I wrote at http://www.theburningpen.com/familiar/letter.htm It's address to all of you, hope the contents aren't too shocking. I'm certainly no angel in any sense of the word. If I were I probably wouldn't be writing lemons <g> Good to be back and thanks again for all the well wishes. I'm going to do a little read-over, then start the next chapter. ****
I am happy to hear that you are okay. Just listen to your doctors and do what you need to do. A published poet?! Wow.... It is a dream of mine to have my poems published (a far distant dream that probably won't happen because I'm not really good despite what some people say).... So, again, I am looking forward to updates when you feel up to writing them. But until then, take care of yourself. ^_^
I ment to scold you yesterday when I found out what happened, but I got called into work. I'm really glad you're out of the hospital. It's no fun being there, I know. I'm working on saving up some money to send you, but I'm just a little broke at the moment (I'm a driver and gas prices are sucky in Texas right now). I hope you take better care of yourself in the future, you naughty girl! And 44 isn't old, trust me.
Oh, yea, I forgot to say, I'm going to be a published poet as well! Well, I'm suppose to be. I'll explain later, I gotta go (my neice is screaming)
Just want to leave a thank you to PJ, who updated pretty well considering she knew next to nothing about Frontpage. I see she put up my Snape/Hermione manip on the front page. I took the face of Samantha Morton and maniped it to the hair and seated body of Mary Elizabeth Mastrantonio, both of whom were spoken of in wikkt (When I Kissed the Teacher) daily digest. I thought together they made a decent Hermione. What do you think? Let me know. Also, for the naughtier of you...I have two very, very naughty triple XXX animated gifs of Severus and Hermione...er...doing the do. Too bad to put on my site openly however. If you email me (over 21 of course) I will send you the address to the naughty manips. Yeah, I'm bad...I know. Still, they're pretty hot animations. <eg>
Ruth! Two triple XXX animations! I'm shocked! I'm appalled! I WANT
Ruth! Two triple XXX animations! I'm shocked! I'm appalled! I WANT them! You know my e-mail address. Thanks Darling. Toodles, Alex. (over 40 and voracious) Lol.
Alex, you crack me up. Sent.
I always find these particular scenes of your extremely hard to swallow. The likely hood that HG could find any pleasure after being anal raped like that is so small as to be non exisitent. Why would she continue to trust him when he clearly goes against her wishes? She says "no" and he goes anyway? That is the defintion of raoe, and it would normally spell the end of any trust in a relationship. Seems kind of obvious that he doesn't give a damn about her as a person. There was no respect, or affection in that entire scene. Yet just a chapter ago he professed to have "great affection" for her. Whatever.
So glad that your back and doing better...now make sure you LISTEN to your doctors!!!! Your health is more important then keeping us FIGGED! I'll see what my bank account is like and if I'll be able to purchase your book...voracious reader that I am. God bless you dear. Diane
Reviewer: Hermione has accepted Severus “as is” and has a sort of view/fantasy of him as the kind of man who is sexually dominant to the point of fulfilling his own needs first. And it is a turn on for her. As a masochist she accepts his domination, but she’s never admitted her own little twisted desires. She accepted his desire to fulfill a fantasy without even asking the depth of it. She came into this relationship willing to subject herself to his desires, and her willingness had the effect of softening him towards her in the end, which is what she hoped for. Her strength, passion and willingness to please him, affected him. I didn’t work that into the scene, but his treatment of her afterwards, and his confession of love showed that a difference was made. Severus had a long way to come back from… Hermione’s innate understanding of this made it possible for him to open his heart to feel and express something deeper. Hermione trusted herself, and what she felt for the wizard. Her trust panned out in the end. At least in my estimation.
I'm glad your out of the hospital. Still, make sure that you listen to your doctors, (even though they make life a living hell at times). I think I can vouch for everyone when saying that we all want you to recover asap. Personally, I know how boring it is to have to be confined to bed all day, and it's NOT fun. Hope you feel well, Jamie
Hi Ruth, Thanks for the naughty clips, loved them. Ah! Without our dreams we have but nothing.Anyway if you're interested check out this website mysite.wanadoo-members.co.uk/heartofengland/bidford.htm It had pictures of Bidford-on-Avon in England, it's the village where my hubby was born and raised. The church in the pictures is where we were married. Toodles, Alex.
oh thank god. Thank GOD that u are back. was really missing u a lot. and good to see that you are actually planning to follow the doctor's advice. I can imagine how bad it is. Even me i dont follow any advice of the doctor. i hate it that doctors have the ability to control us... u know what i mean. now about the animations!!! i wanna see it. how can i not if its made by you. ha? lol. im emailing you right now. good luck and take care. and drink the meds on time and till the doctor tells u otherwise. good luck again and have fun. dont get too stressed and stuff. get some extra sleep. 5hrs is defintely not enough. ok good luck again.
It's good to have you back. I was worried for you, and I hope you follow the doctor's orders now. Beacuse you are such a wonderful writer, that shouldn't be locked up (even if it's for your best) and kept away from a computer, when you can do magic here for all those who has fallen for your dark wizard! Love you!
Hey Ruth. I wish to donate but is there another way other than through Paypal? I live in Australia and I have tried my best to stay away from credit cards so is there another way in which I can donate?
Welcome back! *Grins* Glad, you're back, and get well soon. I need to go check in on my bank acc to see if i can afford the book , i would really like to read the other stuff you have written.Bye for now. :)
thanks a lot Ms_Figg for the clips. awsome! have never seen any thing like this. it looks so real and wow... u are the best in everything. you should design more animations you know... those that you made are simply wonderful.
I am glad to hear you are ok. You are the best writer in fan fiction I've read yet. Please keep up the good work and know that you have a very loyal fan base behind you!
Hi Ruth, I checked out the links you gave us and read one of your poems called Another Love Poem. It's beautiful. You should submit your work to other publishers, you have nothing to lose except the cost of a stamp. Please give this some serious consideration, you have to much to offer the world of literature to let it go to waste. Toodles, Alex.
Hi, just wanted to let ya'll know I'm working on the next chapter and it should be up tonight. :)
Beeky63: When you submit poetry, mostly you get a copy of the publication you are published in. lol. As far as getting commercially published...no dice. Publishers don't do poetry. Most poetry books are put out by the poets themselves. Roman Bandi, my publisher was a visionary, bless him. There aren't many like him.
answer to the letter : I'm usually indequate for that sort of things but I'd like you to know I feel deep admiration for you and for your generosity. I wish you a quick and complete recovery, a well-paid and not tiring job and if, and only if, you have time and health more HGSS stories.
Your daughter needs to see you as we do lol as anything but too old. lol. take care
See, I am reviewing! Told you I would. Anyway, Severus' mommy. Should be intresting. I hope she is a complete sweetie, with a little bit of snark. Loved it! Becca
I'm so glad you're feeling better! I have no money, nor a credit card, so I'm sorry I can't help you out. Best of luck with your money problems- you should try getting your book published at another company! Never give up =) But anyway- I wish you the best. Take care of yourself!!! (by the way, I love the MILF thing.. hi-LAR-ious!)
Yay, a new chapter! Hope you're feeling better. :)
Ch 59 - glad to see you back again! And glad to see the wedding plans coming along. Will Eli be invited too? Hmm, could Eli tame Raucous to not muck with the wedding guests... Yeah, Severus' mother is a big surprise, but Dumbledore doesn't seem to think she's a fearsome thing, so perhaps all will be well with Hermione's first meeting with her. Thanks for the new chapter, and you get plenty of rest, you hear??
His mom??? You are awesome...what a surprise...I wonder if Snape has any siblings...WHEW... can you imagine a brother?!!? Oooohhh boy..what you could write with that! LOL...OK now my imagination is running WILD :)
Oh! Oh! The dreaded mother-in-law, will she be evil or will she be sweet? I can't wait to find out. Good to have you back Darling, Toodles, Alex.
I'm glad to see you are back, Ms. Figg. I hope all stays well with you and that this book of poetry of yours gets you back on your feet. I will keep you in my prayers. Ithilin
If you post your book I will buy it. Dama. ps. I very much enjoy your work, and wish you sucess.
Welcome back! Like everyone else, I'm so happy to hear that you're doing better. As for Chap 59, another awesome chapter. I just love the twists and turns you put in all your stories, this one in particular. Now, in addition to everything else, I can't wait to see what his mom's like. I hope she likes Hermione. It would be sad if she didn't. Oh well, it's your imagination, we're just the captive audience. Literally, we're captive. We're all tied to our computer chairs hitting the refresh button every two seconds. Hehe. Well, anyways, take care of yourself and I can't wait to read the next chapter. ^_^
sounds like a sweet lady!!
Oh Ruth, I'm so excited that you are back in action. But please, do take care of yourself! This last chapter was absolutely hilarious. A penguin can't do this.... oh man, I laughed out loud in a coffee shop. Good Lord. Next chapter please!
bringin in severus'mom is so cool. cant wait to see her. lol. does dumbledore have a thing for her? lol. lol. anywayz...going off to read the next chapter.
Awwwwwwww I think i like Sev's mom =) looking forward to seeing how this plays out, and the fact that she knows fawkes, did she and albus had a thing... Ooooo =) good chapter =)
severus'mother doesnt sound bad. Infact she sounds good. cant wait for what will happen now.
Ch 60 - wow, she sounds like a hottie! Hmm, if she marries Albus, would Minerva be upset? It would keep her out of Severus and Hermione's hair. Thanks for the new chapter!
oh poor severus. how i wish he hadnt gone under that hell of a father but had become snarky on his own! hehe. its hard for me to think that severus the snarky bastard was once abused. but what to do... thats the way. but who cares if severus killed him or not. he's dead. now what im wondering is... who is hermione's baby? cos according to the dream... its voldemort right? wondering what will happen. This story is so exciting. What if the baby is voldy and what if the baby has the memory of being a voldy? and what if the baby is possessed by voldy... or whatif!!! so many whatiffs... anywayz... good night Ms_figg and sleep tight. waiting for the next chapter anyway. :)
love how the story is coming along, but not at the expense of your health!! take care, i look forward to the stories you write.
Very poigniant chapter in 60 and very sad in 61. I believe Severus was an abused child like I think we all believe. Although we don't know the extent, I think his home life and his experiences at Hogwarts lead him to become a DE. I'm very excited about Isadora. I hope she can quell Hermione's fears.
*Eyebrows Creases* Great chapters,seems we've learnt more about Severus' past, Ruth, but arent you supposed to be resting up? You've been a very naughty girl...now go to bed! You need a spanking...;)
i loooove your story thus far, and it's my favourite to date!! you're AWESOME!
man his dad was a nightmare, always interesting to see pieces of his life. this story is wonderful and you could write it 100+chapters long and i'd be with ya to the very end. just make sure you get some rest =)
I really love this story so far. The emotions, the humor and the lemons; it's all very good! It's already one of my favorites and it's not over yet (thank gods; more please!?) And please take good care of yourself!! Miepje
I love it! I am so glad to hear that you are better! You need to take care of yourself first, screw us. Just take it easy. So great chapters, I see you have not lost it. And there are a lot of loose ends arn't there: Voldemort and the baby, the parental figures (Snape's and Hermione's), Harry and Ron, and what about Draco? Will he be stopping by on the wedding? Keep up the good work and take care!
wow nice chapter. severus is going through a lot recently. i hope he doesnt get depressed or anything. it could ruin the sex. lol. cant wait to see severus'mother. and Ms_Figg, no matter how long this story is going to be... its going to be the best cos its written by you and im going to read it till the very end. good luck and keep the chapters coming. and take care of yourself. i hope u dont forget too take ur meds while writing the chapters. hehe. :)
Ok. I am going to kill the Voldemort possession rumor. The Dark Lord entering Hermione's belly and baby was just a daytime nightmare brought on by eating Hermione eating cold spaghetti, and cubed cheese and turkey for lunch. He's dead and staying dead. At least in this story. heh heh.
Chatty: urg! thanks for reminding me about my meds. :::looking sheepish::: I am really locked into the story now...because I find out what's going to happen just before all of you do...and now the storyline's possessing me! Help! lol. But really, thanks for the med reminder. Taking them right now.
Severus' mother sounds like a sweet and wise woman. Now Ruth, you should know by now that your loyal fans will stick with you, no matter what. In fact, it's a sad event when you finish a story, the only bright spot is that we know you will soon be starting a new one. I hope you are following your Doctors advice or I'll have to send Severus over there to tie you to the bed and spank you. Lol. Toodles, Alex.
I would rather this one be finished completely than start reading another while this one has loose ends.
i am happy to see you are getting better, i come home last night to find two new chapters i was over joyed but don't over work our self and get sick. love the story
wonder how alfonso'll take it. and how isadora will hand it to him.
Ch 61-62 - nice twists. Hmm, I get the feeling Raucous better not mess with Severus' mother. Glad to see Hermione using Legilimency; perhaps she can read her books while she's at home, get ahead for school when she returns. Thanks for posting, and get some sleep!!
So good to see you back and writing again, Ruth! Hmmm, who will it be?? Could it beeee......... Albus?! Lol! Let's hope so, we know how that will infuriate Severus! LK
lol. Albus is sweet, but I think Isadora is a bit too young, not to mention has needs the old wizard probably couldn't meet. That's all we'd need. Albus dropping dead from heart failure and pleasure on top of Severus' mother. lololol
Wonderful characterization of Isadora! Loved the wordplay between her and Alfonso...LOL comparing his "seduction" with the attacking of a fortress...such imagery is well, poetic. But wait, you ARE a poet though! Such illusions must be your cup of tea...it definately takes a creative force to see the images/people/characters that you write about. I know from my own often *pathetic* attempts at writing my poetry how hard it is...thus I commend you once again not only on these fanfic stories, but also for being a poet. It takes tremendous strength, courage, personal insight, and creativity to combine your life experiences into poetic form...and to make them available to an audience. I use poetry as an emotional outlet and stress reliever but have kept it to myself...sometimes its *too* personal. But a few times I have given into my creativity and published some poetry about HG/SS in limerick and rhyme form. Anyway sorry for the rambling...Thank you for continuing this great story!
Now... as I thrilled as I was to log on and have 4 new chappies ...AREN'T YOU SUPPOSED TO BE RESTING?!? OK--now that I have scolded you----Thanks for the great chapters :) Take a break--- please?? :)
All right. I am going to rest for the rest of the evening...as best I can...with all the stuff dancing in my head about Isadora arriving at the airport and meeting Severus and Hermione in the waiting room...and what happens. Sure. I'll just sit here and twiddle my itching thumbs over the keyboard, resisting the urge to write! write! write! Sigh.
love the story.
Great chapter; I'm so anxious to meet Isadora. But one thing.. you kept alternating between Alphonso and Alfonso.
Koda: Thanks for pointing that out. I believe I've fixed the discrepancy. It should now read Alfonso. :)
Another great chapter, looking forward to the mother and son reunion. Well done to Chatty for reminding Ruth to take her meds. Ruth, I find setting a kitchen timer helpful in reminding me to take meds when required. Take care of yourself. Toodles, Alex.
Ooh, plain enough to see that Isodora is like Hermione. I suppose Alfonso is quite a handful, eh? But Isodora will not succumb to his charms and cheap lines... Great work as always, Ruth.
LOL, I have a feeling Isadora might have to stock up on lemon drops.
Ch 63 - so she wants a big "power tool," eh? Who's going to do the measuring - her or Severus? Or will Raucous do the spying? Heh-heh! Thanks for updating. Get plenty of rest, you!
Severusism: Maybe the old adage holds true: Men want to marry a woman like dear old mom. lol.
your link to your poetry book on the familiar index as well as this review page is incorrect its linking to theburningpen.com/familiar/book.htm when it needs to be theburningpen.com/book.htm, just wanted to let you know so that they all work =)
Kailael: Thank you so much for that heads up on the links. I've fixed them. Much appreciated.
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good chapter as usual. cant wait to see the reunion. isadora is so like hermione... with the desire for big tool and all. lol. i hope she finds someone who will be able to make her happy toolwise. lol. i hope raucous messes up with isadora. haha. and that alfonso is such a jerk. doenst he know that anyone who is related to severus doesnt fall for crappy lines? broken his heart indeed. lol. cant wait for the next chapters.
great chapters...keep up the good work...get some rest as well miss figg...as much as i love dumbledore..i can't picture him with isadora...lol...i can just picture him now...post orgasmic offering her lemons drops or talking about his socks...lmao...too funny...i am thinking maybe lupin for her being a werewolf maybe he has the tool after all he has got the beast in him...(evil grin)...i just know whomever you put her with will be exactly who she needs...anxiously awaiting next chapter...and again...get some rest... did you get the last email that i sent you about those manips...
good story. please update fast
June: Yes I got your email and sent the response to the hotmail address. It didn't bounce back so must be there.
hmm, maybe it's gonna be marcus ; he's "adjustable" :D
ms.fig, i just rememberd something and was wondering if you knew severus mother's name is Eileen prince and later she became eileen snape. thats why severus calls himself the halfblood prince. and he inherited the nose from his father, hair from his mother. But so what... isadora is so much better than Eileen. this is an inverse JKR universe. hehe. PS: and i love the names you give your characters. totally cool. i for one can never think of such cool names.
Chatty: Yeah, I know...but I really didn't like the 6th book. Hence, the Alternate Universe I always write. To me it was slow as molasses until Albus and Harry did their thing. and when Snape killed Dumbledore...sigh. I borrowed the book from a friend when it first came out and after reading it had no inclination to buy one to re-read it again. I felt like flinging it out the front door. I will probably have to get it eventually though and this time absorb it, even if I dislike where the story went, just for the sake of writing this kind of fan fiction. I will eventually do one in canon I think.
hi ruth... ty for the manips...i just lurves em...lol...save a horse ride a snape...lmao...hope you are feeling better...take care and once again ty
Awwwww =) i like Isadora. wanting to sit in coach on an airplane. yeah she must be a petite witch that likes novelty. i've only ever been on a plane twice, once to maui and once back. kinda hoping the fact i was newly pregnant has something to do with the way i handled the flight back cause i wasn't at my best "panic" =) , did i have you in the 20th centure or the 16th lol what a thing for a mom to say to a child, but its sooo true hes so out of time =) absolutely love how this stories going looking forward to how it continues. =)
Good transitional chapter. Mom's a keeper
severus mother is so cool!!! i couldnt stop laughing when severus said that the car would leave the driver. gods. he is indeed a 16th century person. bt then, i guess there are only a few who actually knows anything about muggle stuff.
Great chapter. I loved Hermione struggling to get out of the chair. It reminds me of a similar experience trying to get out of bed one morning while heavily pregnant and naked as jay bird. I looked like a turtle flipped onto its back with arms and legs flailing. Did my Hubby help me? No! He stood there laughing his head off. MEN! Toodles, Alex. MEDS?????
I took my meds...but am feeling a bit out of sorts this morning. Will have to write later. :( It's just an upset stomach though...so don't worry.
Ch 64 - nice to see Sevvy with his mummy! Ooh, we get to see Isadora with Eli again? Where was the house-elf during all those cabbage-and-potato years? Thanks for updating!
Isadora is great! Love her. Hermione's hormones really kicked in crying and all ^^ and Severus blushing?! lol Great updates, can't wait for more!
I have just one word to describe you! Genius!!!! You are the best writer in the Harry Potter Fanfiction area ever!!!!! I LOVE Your Work!!!! Thank You For Ever For Your Work!!!!!
Lovely to see you back writing, dear!!! Hope all is going much better for you. Bringing in Snape's mother was pure brilliance!!! She seems to bring so much into the story. What a story by the way!!! No need to wrap it up anytime soon. I love it!!! It has become one of my favorites from you!!! Hope you are taking care of yourself, update when you can!!! Tengo que irme! Salud! Hugs, Killer K :)
What a suck up Raccous is. Excellent chapter. I'm glad Isadora and Mione get on.
that familiar is such a kiss ass, glad hermione and isadora seem to get along nothing worse then not getting along with your inlaws. this story just keeps getting better and better.
"No! I swallow." Lol! That was hilarious. You have quite the sarcastic streak my dear. They say that sarcasm is the lowest form of wit, but damn, it's also the funniest. Hope you're feeling better. Toodles, Alex.
I love Isadora. I'm looking forward to her and Hermione bonding. I really like the characterization of all the players in this one- spot-on, it feels like. As always, looking forward to more... L.
wonderful! Keep on chuggin!
Now I get to read you here! Oh goody :)
Glad that she received help from Isadora ... feeling unsexy indeed.Raucuous is quite the suck up, but still love his character.How Slytherin of that bird.Severus misses his mother...that makes her as important a person in his life as Hermione^^..Sweet. Marvellous chapters, Ruth.
I just wanted to say how great this story is. Not to mention all your other fics too. Please keep posting and I'll definately keep reading. I love it:) Good Job!!!
Isadora is wonderful! Just what Hermione needs. She doesn't seem to have too many female friends, Ginny being the big one, and they haven't seemed to be around. It's good that she has someone to talk to. It's halarious how they both keep Severus in line. It's great. Keep up the great work and stay healthy. ^_^
awsome 2 chapters. i loved the raucous thing with isadora. lol. tht was so funny. no wonder hermione got sick. and the bonding between isadora and hermione was good too. and the wedding dress? thats just fantastic. cant wait to see the wedding now. waiting for the next chapters. :)
Great like always.
Great chapter - in fact great story! I love everything that you write. Keep up the good work but don't forget to rest and take your meds! Looking forward to more chapters soon!
I love Isadora! What fun it is to see Sev tow the line with her!
awww... what a nice chapter! update soon please!!!
loved the wedding, the cake feeding was hilarious, Cake WAR!!!, was glad to have escaped my wedding without that alittle thing happening though. least hermiones wedding didn't have the inlaws arguing over the brides decisions (music, food, fact the bride isn't wearing heels etc). very nice chapter =)
Poor Remus. I've always felt so bad for him. He wasn't like the other Mauraders. Even though he allowed them to torment Severus, he just wanted to belong, so he went along with it, but I'm sure he regretted it. I get the feeling Severus is going to give him trouble, but I hope Hermione sets him straight. After all, Remus, like he himself, deserves a bit of happiness.
what a funny chapter!!! i especially loved snape's speech!!haha:) poor harry and ron though!haha:) update soon again!
Ms_Figg you have perfect timing.The song started and by the time it ended, so did the marriage part. oooh how romantic. *sigh*. and the speach and the cake fight was the best. I wouldnt have imagined severus being naughty at a wedding. bt it was really good... specially isadora coming in to smash the rest on his face. haha. and remus has fallen for isadora. lol. i was trying to think who the lucky guy would be. that'll be a good pair right? well remus is a werewolf and all... and btw i hope he isnt all soft on the other days. lol. waiting for the next chapterS.
Here comes the bride!What a beautiful wedding. Hope all is well with you today. All is well with me because the kids are back to school tomorrow. YIPEE! Toodles, Alex.
loved Neville hitting Severus in the face with the rice...hilarious
I loved the wedding! So does Severus know that the baby is a boy, or did I miss that part of the story? I love that you are leaning towards Remus, I was kind of afraid that you would pair her off with a Malfoy! I love Remus, that is going to be so cute! I love that Eli could be a part of the wedding, that was such a nice touch! And the food throwing, bad Severus, bad =). So are you still planning on having Voldemort being bad again, or was that simply a nightmare of Hermione? Keep on writing, we all love it, but remember to take care of yourself too!
ch 65 : I've much enjoyed the story so far, one of your best IMHO. However I have trouble to get the song, it says to me that the playlist is not valid. Is it because I'm on aol ? It's a pity because it would have been so great to just read the story with the music. That was a great idea to put the song in the story.
I had a feeling that somewhere soon, there'd be something like that. It's only natural, as you wrote before, she had tried the nice guy before but wasn't satisfied. But now there's the...sweet tempered rough-riding werewolf in the picture. totally awesome!
I laughed, I cried, I went Oohhhh and Ahhhhh..... What a nice wedding! ^_^
Ah, that was nice. I love that song and of course it made me tear up while reading. Isadora and Remus...nice. :) Hope you're feeling well and pacing yourself on this. You must be since I can't wait for more! L.
mmmm do i detect a little in outie between Remus and and the MLF?? or maybe marcus and his ever growing cock??
Great wedding and I was so hoping that it would be Remus that Isadora would be interested in - thank you!
love the song you picked out. i assume that was hermione's choice since it doesnt seem like something severus would choose. hmmmm remus and isadora could be interesting!!! now what have you decided to name the baby? he should be coming along soon. keep up the good work. lizzie
Dear Ruth, you are a charming and enchanting writer and you are doing a great job, especially with Severus .I also love your author notes. Please keep up the great work!!
Lime. A lemon wouldn't fit the story.
i never thought of what work Remus did after he left school. in fact i hated him so much for ignoring what the other marauders did to severus, that i didnt care. so this was a very eye opening chapter. btw, limes would be good since its severus' mom. bt since u have put remus in here, lemons would be an interesting thing cos we'd know how Remus does the thing. hehe. bt still lime is the best. or maybe u should write another story with Remus and Isadora's lemon part(something like what u wrote about kingsley and tonks)*eg*.
Another great chapter (as if you could right a bad one). I think you are right and should only write limes about Isadora, I think lemons should be reserved for Severus and Hermione. Speaking of which, don't we have a wedding to consumate? Take care of yourself (MEDS???) Toodles, Alex.
Oh dear Ms. Figg- why have limes when you could have lemons? in my fairly randy and subjective opinion, i say lemons trump the limes whole-heartedly. but that is just my opinion. love the chapters, as always! (i'm trying to be better about reviewing- i've done two in the last week! not much, but it's an improvement)hasta la proxima!
I so love this tale - oh my, and the nearly nekkid photo of Severus to the right of the box here! Woohoo! Chapter 53 - you put in the wrong name for the Dean, confusing his last name with the Potions Professor. And you gotta love elves- "good in-outie". ROFL!
Marcus had better watch his arse or he'll be dangling his "Dragon's Jewels" around on a necklace. Isadora and Severus are forces to be rekoned with not to mention if Remus has any interest in Snape's mum.
I've added a chatroom to the site. It might be temporary...just wanted to see if anyone wanted to hang out and talk. It could be kind of fun. :) If no one uses it though, down it goes. Thanks
Well I wouldn't mind reading a lime or lemon involving Remus and Isadora, but quite frankly don't care much for Marcus. So my vote goes for Remus and Isadora limons.
Isn't motherfucker like an insult? I know I use it as an insult... maybe the phrase you were looking for was Milf - 'Mother i'd like to fuck' Great chapter though!
Marcus doesn't care if it is an insult. It fits him either way, whether he gets Isadora or not. lol
Limes, but only out of respect for Severus. He wouldn't be overly happy to hear that you were writing about his mother and sex, tho it would be hot, haha. Um, I think she meant motherfucker. The literal term. As in fucker of the mother. MILF would be the slang for Mrs. Snape. And, dammit, not Marcus. *shakes fist at thought of Marcus* He's a good character, but I love Lupin to death and just... *shakes fist harder* Yeah. I went there, that's right. <3
love the bit about the motherfucker thing! hilarious!haha poor remus though! i hope everything works out with him and isadora! i wonder what happened to severus and hermione though! tehee... (wags eyebrows)
great story so far!! totally love it!!! i would prefer just a lime, a lemon could get a little weird considering its severus' mom. JMHO
Yay! I like that she's interested in Remus. Very sexy anyways, and then the whole "animal" thing can only help. Definately liking where things are heading. Keep up the great work!
Chapter 67 - Oh what a cute scene with the mom smooshing some cake on him too! <gleefully laughing> and I guessed right as to who Momma Snape was going to hook up with. Yeah, that is a 'first time' scene I want to see you write!
your fics are amazing! i keep checking several times a day to see if you've updated. just wanted to give you a big ::thumbs up!:: and keep up the great work.
I'm pretty pervy, myself, so I say go for mom lemons!
I'm pretty pervy, myself, so I say go for mom lemons!
I love this story, keep up the great work. Thanks.
Limes are fine by me, just knowing that Remus would be happy for a change is enough for me!
As pervy as I am, a lime would be great for Severus' Mom.
it's kinda funny, it being chapter 69 and them consumating their marriage, just an aspect of my twisted humor.
thats was the best marriage consummation i've ever read about. Phew. that lucky hermione. *sigh* ok i'll try to stop feeling jealous. lol. see you next chapterS and thank you for continuing the story. cant wait to read all the myster/suspense that you are soo good at :D
Ch 65-69 - ooh, thanks for the lovely chapters!!! Great backstory for Eli and Mrs. Snape; it makes plenty of sense that such a man would forbid Eli from many things. Too cute, Raucous kissing up to Isadora; I notice Crookshanks wasn't invited (heh!). Loved the Shania Twain song - perfect! As for Isadora's possible "beaus" - eeps! Lupin?? Marcus?? Whoa... I could see Albus, although Minerva may not like that; or maybe a nice rich doctor or alchemist. Lupin doesn't seem strong enough for Isadora. That's just me. Be sure to get plenty of rest, Ruth!
*Boots Marcus in the ass* I'd rather it Lupin than that male whore.He isnt, but he acts like one. lupin is getting turned on by Isadora like Hermione was by Snape? This should prove interesting... ^^ Lemony goodness suits me any way you write em, Ms Figg. Marvellous chapters...Racuous dressing up,should look rather smart, eh? :)Imagine the outbursts of rage that would have occured if he had not restrained himself, he probably could have been fried O.O with a hex. Loved the wedding sound clip, Ruth!Nice one there. Cake fight with his mother and wife? What audacity...*Cackles* glad she got him back.
That was beautifully written. Late pregnancy sucks because you're horny as hell but getting comfortable is the impossible dream. Toodles, Alex. P.S. I will try to get into your chatroom but you have to understand that I'm practically computer illiterate. Wish me luck!
Ruth HELP! How do I login to your chatroom? OK, You can stop laughing now! Lol. Toodles, Alex.
Oooh! By George! I think I got it. But there was nobody else logged on so I can't be sure, either that or I did it wrong. I'll try again later. Toodles. Alex.
hard to forget being a beached whale or flipped over turtle unable to move, thankfully my hubby never thought it was funny, or if he did he kept it to himself lol. Wonderful chapter, poor eli what did he do to piss her off man, poor little guy. a hyena and laughing hyena hehe that'll be a funny thought for the next couple days =)
hard to forget being a beached whale or flipped over turtle unable to move, thankfully my hubby never thought it was funny, or if he did he kept it to himself lol. Wonderful chapter, poor eli what did he do to piss her off man, poor little guy. a hyena and laughing hyena hehe that'll be a funny thought for the next couple days =)
omg the turtle part was so funny. gosh i can imagine hermione unable to even roll. how huge she must be!! i have this cousin my age who is expecting. i literally run off to the bathroom to laugh. there's no way im going to have a baby.its too embarassing. bt i love the fights between hermione and severus. and since severus is going to work on the potion... what is he going to expect. hmm??? wondering. waiting for the next chapters.
I get the feeling he'll help Remus. I think he could eventually be a good friend to Severus if they can get past what happened all those years ago. I'm looking forward to more.
oh ruth... this chapter was so funny...i love how they are manipulating him...lol...i loved how hermione said that she can make him see things her way by blowing him...lmao...i am still laughin...can't wait to see if she does follow through...again i say great chapter... keep up the good work...
Poor Hermoine can't even get out of bed. I know what she is going through I did the same thing this morning I am due in a week and I pretty much have to roll out of bed in the mornings, at least my husband doesn't laugh at me!! :) Boy I can't wait till my body goes back to a some what normal size. I'm only 5 feet and my baby is already 7 pounds, I am very round. Cannot wait till the next chapter! I love this story.
Hooray, I'm finally caught up! Severus seems the type to help Remus even though he complains about doing it. What will Remus do to pay him back, I wonder? Will you bring the triplets back? There are lots of possibilities for this story yet. You're amazing! I don't want this to end! Any possibility of a sequel to keep the story going? This is so good!
Ruth, I am honoured, and thank you for the revenge I would have so liked to do. A hyena! That was priceless, I laughed so hard at this chapter that I almost peed my pants, and I haven't done THAT since I was pregnant. At least I didn't have to go outside and scratch in the dirt like poor Severus Lol. Toodles, Alex.
Great few chapters like always!!!!!!
Oooooo shes gonna get it! she should know by now not to try and manipulate Severus especially not after hexing him. Nice chapter enjoy your nap hon. =)
Hmm...don't blame him. I'd still be pissed too if somebody turned me into some ugly ass hyena.
You have a positively wicked sense of humour lol. The next chapter is going to be delicious, can't wait, but you take all the time you need to rest. Toodles, Alex.
i await in delicious anticipation.
Sheesh! He did laugh at her when she was stuck on her back- I'm sure he wouldn't have appreciated it if the tables were turned! She ought to make him wear a pregnancy belly. I hope he remembers to give her the foaming colonic! (I must say, that picture of Severus is very distracting! I love it...) Get your rest- you don't seem to have slowed down! I have to say that each time I've gotten online and checked here a new chappie was up! Thank you! But take care! Laura
Ahhh...great chapters now that I am finally home to enjoy them. Loved the wedding--I am kinky enough to want Isadora-Remus lemons :) But I bow to your superior judgement...Great wedding chapters I loved Eli and Sevs transformations too....
she waddled her way to the serpent's den. haha. i couldnt stop laughing at that. and i just imagined hermione on all 4s. lol. she'll fall right on her huge stomach. bt ooh how hot it is already. cant wait for the next chapter.
I still see nothing in Severus to indicate that he cares one bit for hermione as a person. Honestly their entire relationship seems to be built on his saving up grudge points. Now Hermione is accepting the "punishment"? He can stand there and humiliate her with impunity, but she must be punished for doing the same to him? Perfect setup for this to become a copy of his parents relationship. As for Isadora, she's certainly no great mother. What kind of woman remains in such a relationship allowing both herself and her child to be abused? Then coming back later and comparing the feelings of a small child, unable to protect himself or his mother from an abusive father, to the feelings of a young man who, as prefect had certain responsibilities, who was afraid of losing his friends? Well I suppose Severus comes by his incredible selfishness honestly. I wonder how long Hermione will accept this relationship after the baby is born? Long enogh to have the cycle repeated yet again, no doubt!
If all you see in Severus' actions towards Hermione in all this time is his need for sexual vindication, then you have missed the growth he's shown entirely. He could have easily continued to use her as a plaything, not accepted any responsibility for her impregnation, let her find her own place to live and be left to the cruelties of wizarding society, let her be treated like a second hand citizen, thrown out of school and not used his influence to place her in a better educational setting, left her with no recourse and not married her at all. He didn't have to do any of these things, but did so because he did care. Sexually, yes, he's kind of a tyrant but he is Hermione's tyrant. She accepts him this way, and who are we to judge anyone's sexual preference?
As for Isadora, her situation is one that many women are trapped in today, they are too afraid, or too fearful, or too codependent to leave an abusive relationship. Why don't you just leave, is something they hear constantly but for one reason or another they don't do it. Isadora lived within that kind of world. She had no place else to go. It wasn't the best choice but abused women don't normally think as regular women do. They are demoralized, frightened and believe themselves without recourse. She did the best she could in the situation she was in. Her comparison of Remus' fears to Severus in my estimation was fair, in that Remus' relationship with the Marauders did not start when he was a prefect, but I imagine when he first arrived at Hogwarts, so this tormenting of Snape had been going on for years, long before Remus was given the responsibility of prefect.
What was he supposed to do? A complete turnaround because he now had a badge and
be accused of letting his position go to his head?
As a werewolf, he was always fearful...he treasured his relationship with his friends and never had the opportunity to know what real friendship was. He didn't have friends or an Eli to keep him company and teach him. Remus thought acceptance was the key to continued friendship...naturally because acceptance was all he wanted. So he accepted the Marauder's actions rather than risk becoming what Snape was...an outcast. There are many instances of everyday people letting wrong things occur because they don't want to be on the outside looking in.
Hermione accepts Severus because she gravitates to the kind of man he is, and she loves him. Severus treats Hermione according to his own desires which seems to satisfy her. She knew he was dark from the very beginning. The main thing about their relationship is that when she needs him, he is always there, strong and protective. There is nothing Severus wouldn't do for her or his child despite his continuing darkness. She didn't marry a poster boy for a great relationship. She married Severus Snape with all his faults. She hasn't regretted it either. What we need to remember, reviewer, sad as this is...dysfunctionality is more normal in most relationships than functionality. Nothing is absolutely perfect and some people just find satisfaction in their quirks and imperfections. As much as we'd like everything sweet and nice...frolicing thru fields of bliss... it's never going to happen so we have to glean whatever joy we can from the stubble. Sorry for the length of this response, but it was warranted. Thanks for reviewing.
Gods...I just have to say this concerning the possiblity of Hermione's and Severus' relationship turning into the type Isadora and Darius had. It is highly unlikely because unlike his father, Severus wants his child, never believed Hermione purposely tried to trap him into marriage, and didn't ever think that she could grant his every wish. He doesn't have the same issues his father did. It is doubtful Darius actually loved Isadora, whereas Severus does love Hermione. His similiarity to his father shows itself only in his voice and in his sexuality.
Ch 70 - hilarious! I'm glad you used that overturned turtle story - it's great. And Hermione hexing Eli and Severus. Hmm... is it time for Raucous to get hexed, or is he too smart to get in her way now? As for Lupin, I still don't think he's man enough for Isadora, although he could be her "project". No rich powerful manly wizard for Isadora?
Woah...she's not to be trifled with when she pregnant. Poor Eli...of all things, she gets turned into a doxy...she will be head heavy. Like the Isadora and Remus pairing, Ruth. I've always liked that werewolf...must be difficult to have any positive look on life when you're always biased against. Love the hyena scene, Ms Figg!
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change in plans? *whine* bt it was good too... specially the peeing part. poor hermione. no, actually its poor severus. lol. and i hope severus doesnt forget the little revenge after they have the child. *grin*
Sev shouldn't underestimate Remus. Besides, it's possible that Remus could end up helping Sev's mum escape from Marcus' clutches some day.
lol interrupted by the bladder toooo funny, realistic too. it's nice to see that even when hes rearing to go and all worked up he can stop himself and be the compassionate husband. also glad hes gonna help remus. nice chapter hon =)
Poor Severus! He doesn't stand a chance with these two! Man, what a blow to the pride- a laughing hyena!!! Got what he deserved though! Your site is awesome, not only do we get hot pics of Severus but music too!!! Ms Figg, you spoil us!!! And all for a few(actually a lot!) well meant ravings! Just kiddin', but your site really rocks! Happy writing! Tengo que irme! Salud! Hugs, Killer K
Great chapter Ruth, and realistic too. Lets face it all of us who have been pregnant know how difficult even the simplest things can be, and getting comfortable is next to impossible. Toodles, Alex.
awww severus can be so sweet! hehehe not words usually associated with him but oh well! Oh and i know the fic is about hermione and severus but personally i would like to see how things unfold between isadora and remus!
You continue to amaze me with your wit,and never giving up on Severus being a snarky bastard! This was a very funny chapter. How realistic can you get? Getting up to pee indeed! I remember the feeling well...
*grins big* does this mean that we're gonna get a bonus remus lemon??? great writing as always, ms_figg.
Maybe.. this story could start to focus more on Isadora and Remus for awhile? Like a story within a story? Remus is adorable, by the way.
OK--that settles it...I definitely want remus lemons...you cant call him an animal in bed and just leave it there..... So here's a challenge: Make Remus even more enticing than Snape (I know that is a sacrilige...) but hey you are the best so I trust you...LOL
Wow! Okay, Remus is hot. Let the lemons fall where you want. It's all good.
Ch 72-73 - (closes eyes at thoughts of Lupin and Isadora shagging) I agree with Severus that Lupin in S&H's bedroom is not a good thing; it sort of makes Hermione a prostitute, i.e. sex for pay with the "pay" being a cure for Lupin. Hmm, if Isadora really wants strong rough sex, she could try Marcus at least once. Okay, I think I could handle your Lupin-Isadora if you bury it in a lot of S&H lemons and romance!
Hmmmmmm! I don't think Severus is going to be a happy chappie if Remus starts banging his mother. Loved it as usual. Toddles, Alex.
I vote for having a Remus-Isadora lemon, but what ever you want Ms Figg. Love the last few chapters! The hyena thing was pure genius and Hermione having to pee. Haha. Poor Severus. Well, once the baby's born and everything, he'll get his revenge. Can't wait till your next update. ^_^
Ok, remember how I said to not have lemons between Isadora and anyone out of respect for Snape. I LIED. DO IT WOMAN. Man. Isadora. Remus. Hot. Can't. Help. But.... *smiles evilly*
i LOVE your insights into each of their lives!! (and eli is awesome!)
i LOVE your insights into each of their lives!! (and eli is awesome!)
I like the way this story is turning out ms.figg. Keep up the good work and remember to take it easy if you need to!
Marcus is sure a little devil with his plotting. Definitely liked this chapter, Isadora and remus in heated dreams, Hermione demanding to have her cravings satiated. with me it was reeses mc flurries at ungodly hours when i had my daughter. sadly up here mcdonalds no longer makes them /cry, loved it keep up the good work hon. and btw thanks for all the encouragement towards my own story it meant alot =) oh and for those who asked me to put a link to my story in a review here ya go. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2855553/1/
"And what's a prick?"...that would be Marcus...LOL gotta love him though....ahh good chapter worth waiting up for....hopefully my dreams will be as nice as Isadora and Remus'... BTW--How are you feeling? Meds reminder :)
Ch 74 - ah, c'mon, isn't there someone for Marcus? Isadora could handle him - after all, she survived Darius? Sigh.... Okay, I'll focus on Severus and Hermione and baby and Eli. Glad Eli is there to help with baby; I guess Isadora won't be much help if she's in that condition. Yay, Eli! And yay, Figgy, for another great chapter!
ch73-74. awsome chapters. its good that severus has decided to help remus. and lol. if isadora hooks up with Remus, its all because of severus. hehe. and gosh i loved it when hermione woke severus up in the middle of the night. i dont know bt i love it when hermione gives him a hard time like this... a hard time esp when severus is dark. she should trouble him more. hehe. and now she is going to have the baby at any time? and yes. severus better not tell her... although i would love to see hermione take out her anger on him. :)
ooohhh! Interactive fan fic, isn't technology wonderful. How come my computer didn't spit out a little bit of parchment though? lol. The birth is close, oohhh, the anticipation. How will Severus cope? Can't wait to find out. Toodles, Alex.
I so love your writing- Isadora's ad was funny. Looks like things will be culminating soon...maybe for all concerned. really enjoying this- Laura
Ms Figg - hope you are looking after yourself - - am enjoying the story immensely - your newest chapters cracked me up - good thing Hermione isn't going to be late - my first was overdue by 10 days - can't imagine how Severus would survive Hermione's discomfort too much longer. looking forward to more Isabella and Remus
Oh, Ms Figg, the wait for chapter 75 is absolutely killing me. I want the baby to get delivered, I want to see what happens with Marcus and Isadora and what happens to Remus and Isadora. I feel like your stories are a drug and right now I am going through horrible withdrawals.
okay, i haven't reviewed in a couple of days, but damn woman you have doing the greatest job with hermoine. i remember being like that. i found this and just had to send it to you guys. mmmmmmmmm, makes my heart go pitter patter. look at this picture, its awesomely f'n f. http://www.rickman-snape.net/art/pdw_damiana.JPG
oh no Ms_Figg, where's the new chapter? *sigh* i guess its going to be very good... hence all this time. hehe. canNOT wait for the next chapter.
hey, i was there in the chatroom, but there is no bell or buzer to let anyone know that someone came for a visit. needless to say i missed everyone that came by. so sad. hey ruthie, one of the pic. in your gallery does not come through-its the room done by Melissa. and the one before it-damn woman!!! hot flashes here.
BABY TIME!!! BABY TIME!!! I can't believe I am so excited for a story. My goodness. Chapter 76 is gonna be good... I can feel it!
soon as i read that the floo network in their area was down i just knew it was baby time. Dear lord pregnant and on a firebolt good thing eli knocked her out cause if it were me and i were conscious i probably woulda been sick. Excellent chapter hon =)
Hell, where was she going to go? hahahahahaha
ah baby time! I remember it well. Did it once, did it twice, NOT doing it again! It's not called labour for nothing, it's hard bloody work. How will poor Severus cope? loved it, can't wait for the next update. Toodles, Alex.
paper work? yup, sev ought to appriciate that. i just hope it's actual (quick) paperwork and not some kind of problem or surprise... well, problem. ;)
I was wondering who was going to go into labor first me or Hermione. I am glad it was not me but the doc says anytime now. Thankfully I am having c-section on Monday hopefully I don't go into labor before hand but we will see. Can't wait until the next chapter!!
shoot yeah, now we can watch the man turn millions of colors of the rainbow, green being the most prominent. thought for a minute there that they, severus and eli, were going to be delivering the baby. god, i hope there are two babies, she sure seems awefully big. oh wait, i remember that really big feeling. that child turned out to be over 10 lbs. i really wanted to castrate my husband on that one.
whaaaaaaaaaat??? that was the evilest cliff i've ever read in my life!!! *banging head on wall*. please update soon. and where is hermione going to go? something certainly feels fishy. i hope there is nothing fishy. hehe. see u next chapter.
this story keeps getting better and better...i didnt expect it to go on this long but am so glad it has
omg...twins!!! im so happy for them!! when Poppy said she heard the two heartbeats i was like hmm...could it possibly be twins?? im so happy it was. kinda wish one would have been a daughter though. anyways cant wait to see them buy more stuff...and what's up with the floo??
absolutely loved that, twins explains how huge she was at 7months =) definitely curious what the idea for eli is, anyways keep up the good work.
TWINS! Oh my goodness. Twins. I LOL'ed at Poppy's comment. Men definitely act the same way Sev did there. Oh goodness. Next chap Ms Figg!!!
perfection.
What a lovely chapter. I get the feeling I know what Severus might do. But I'll stay quiet until I see if I'm right.
Great posting. You are an amazing writer. Please post again soon. Thanks.
Wow!! Twins crazy!!! Can't wait for more... This is one of my favorite stories of all time!!
yes! i knew it twins. whoo hoo. loves to ya ruthie. that was great. so were the pics. you sent me. hubba hubba.
Who cares about loose ends? You could go for a lot longer and we would love every word. I have a theory on what Sevvie-kins is going to do for Eli, but I don't want to ruin the surprise if I'm right. Love it, as always.
omg ruth... that was so sweet...i just loved this last chapter...i am still wiping my eyes...she will be good as new in a week eh...hmmmm...(evil grin)...2 babies lucky sevvie...i cannot wait for isadoras response...keep up the good work...very anxiously awaiting the next chapters...take care...
yay
You didn't link to 75 from 74, by the way, but I found it. :) Twins! Twiiins.
aww twins!!! so sweet. and poor eli. i hope he gets well soon. cant wait for isadora's reaction towards the two grandsons. lol. and about loose ends... who cares as long as u keep writing? see you next chapter. PS: i hope that one of the twins isnt voldemort. lol. *evil grin*
O_O For some reason, I thought she was going to have twins.... I don't know why, but I kept thinking that. Oh who cares... TWINS! ^_^
I was scared silly when Eli started hurting himself! Glad it was two healthy boys!
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooo Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! that was utterly great, especially naming the baby after eli. and Isadoras reaction utterly priceless. =)
It's great!!! I can't wait to see how Isadora handles Marcus. Plus, I'm hoping for details of her 'handling' of Remus. ::smirks evilly::
I don't waaant the story to end, lol. It's so sad when I see 'THE END' in those big capital letters..
I was singing this in the chatroom the other night: (sort of)
It is the fic that never ends
It just goes on and on my friends
One day I staaaarted writing it
not knowing what it was
and I will keep on writing it
forever just becaaaaause
It is the fic that never ends....
help! lol.
that was so cute. just love it, ruthie. you are such a tease. love ya lots.
aww that was so cute. eli and all the naming part and all. isadora is very naughty indeed! commenting abuot the boobs eh? lol. and wahts going to happen with Marcus? too many questions still. and the main part is... i cant wait for the headboard to start shaking. its going to be good. i hope severus hasnt forgotten all the hexes he got when she was pregnant. lol. oh and PS: Just wanted to tell u something... Eli in my language is "Rat". lol. bt the funny part was... i realized that only like... a few chapters back. lol. How dumb am i? bt then... will anyone be able to think of anything else while reading your stories? lol. see you next chapter.
call me blind..but i did not see that coming...i never once thought of them naming one of the children after eli...what a sweet thing to do...i just love eli...isadora is a hoot...that boobie comment cracked me up...lmao...i hope once snape learns about marcus's interest in isadora, it weakens his resolve about her being around remus...but that is only me...i just know this story is fantastic...and i could care less how long it goes on...i will be with this fic till the end...keep up the good work...hope you are getting your rest as you write...take care...
You're killing me woman!! Killing me!!! I love it and I can't wait to see what happens between the triangle of marcus - isodora - remus .... I repeat YOU'RE KILLING ME!!!
You're killing me woman!! Killing me!!! I love it and I can't wait to see what happens between the triangle of marcus - isodora - remus .... I repeat YOU'RE KILLING ME!!!
Oh my gosh. My heart melted that entire chapter. I don't want this fic to end Ms Figg!!! It is too damn good! Awww, I'm so going to wear a smile to bed this evening. Gosh, that chapter was cute! Next please!
ya know... i check this story two to three times daily just hoping for an update. Thank you for being so prompt with them. Glad that you are home, btw, and hopefully feeling better. I absolutely adore your writings, and apologize for not being a more tenacious reviewer. I find it difficult to put thoughts into words sometimes. Happy Writing!
Eli Snape I know it's to honor Eli, but what happens when his friends (Slytherns?)find out he's named for a house elf? lol
awww you made me cry....i loved that chapter...twins were totally unexpected...but why do i have a feeling one is going to be evil
Poor severus..his pleasure was intervened by Hermione feeling the urge to pee, of all things.Eli is very faithful, staying up so he could help. Severus accomodating Hermione will end soon...then it will become vice-versa.
Yay! I was right. I'm so happy they named one of the babies after Eli. He really is part of the family and it made him so happy.
Oh Delightful! I ADORE the idea of naming one twin after Eli, I had thought perhaps making him a godparent, but well that would just be..odd.. wouldnt it? And Isadoras comment on her boobs..(LMAO) Keep it up and coming darlin and as much as we all love these sweet moments, I'm sure I am not the only one getting thirsty for a big pitcher of Remus/Isadora Lemonaid!
Ahh, you never are one to dissapoint are you ruth? Great update as always!
Hm, seems my last review disappeared. Oh well- this has been just wonderful! You've had me tearing up quite a bit in this one- I loved that they gave one of their twins Eli's name. I'm just glad they didn't name the other one Raucous, lol!! Great story.....I hope it'll be Remus with Isadora as Marcus is still pretty sefish. He needs to go find Cassandra... L. :-)
Kids out the door to school, fresh cup of coffee and not 1 but 2 chapters. YESSSS!!! Then about 2 paragraphes into chap 76 and the power goes OFF!NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!Thankfully it was just a quick blip, but enough to knock the computer off, so I have to wait for the damn thing to re-boot. Anyway, Ruth you totally cracked me up when Hermione asked Poppy if the baby was coming out of the right orifice because I said the exact same thing to my midwife, only I wasn't so eloquent, I said "hole". It really does feel like the baby is coming out of "that" one. Wonderful chapters and "twins" and that too is a wonderful surprise. One hell of a handful, but wonderful. Toodles, Alex.
oh so sorry Ms_Figg... had gone out to take a shower without closing the chatroom and i came back to see ur messages. stupid me!!! :S:S:S:S:S bt see u soon online Ms_Figg. take care.
I hope Isadora hexes Marcus's balls off. I know he hasn't done anything yet, but still...when he does do something, I hope she takes care of him. Especially because I want Remus and Isadora to stop beating around the bush and just get ot it already. Very cute chapter, can't wait for the next part.
OR, even better, I hope Marcus makes a move on Isadora in front of Remus and Remus beats the crap out of him, and Isadora is so impressed she flings herself on the werewolf. That would work too, though I do want Isadora to get a shot in. Yes, yes, excellent...
oh yes ch 78!!! how good can it get? and whatever seerus has planned for vindiction is going to be yummy!!! and now Marcus is in the game too. hehe. wonder what will happen. just cannot wait for the next chapters.
ooooh severus is gonna be pissed!!!
*severus. not seerus. damn typing. i guess im all screwed up today. *sigh*
Ut oh, marcus is in the house. and Sev working her up like that, its so hot its almost cruel. just woke up and saw an update, what a wonderful start to the day. =)
what a wonderful chapter....i just wish I was at home reading it instead of on my phone.......keep up dating can't wait for more
Cackling witches going to the loo, fine shooting from Severus, a tripping hex to Ron and a bendable Hermione. Oh Ruth you are something else again. Wicked, wicked sense of humour! Lol! And now Marcus and Remus, oohhhh testosterone overload. Loved it, can't wait for more. Toodles hon, Alex.
Ah! You canNOT do that! I have never resented one of your cliffhangers, but this borders on cruelty. CRUELTY!! I think I just like Remus way too much here. Snape is hot, but... I dunno. Maybe I've been Snape Overloaded or something. I know, I know. Blasphemy, right? haha.
