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Name:
Ms_Figg
Date:
02 May 2006
Time:
21:15:37
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Whew! This took forever to upload. I think this Snape is my darkest. I had no idea where this story was going where I started it, but it became an epic and is one of my favs. Hope you enjoy if you haven't read it...but warning...it has some very dark, disturbing parts in it. I have posted warnings at the squickiest.

Name:
JD
Date:
03 May 2006
Time:
07:21:16
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Comments

*does happy dance* About time! Yay, I'm the first... well, second... on this page!

Name:
Kailael
Date:
06 May 2006
Time:
14:18:34
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Comments

glad you finally got it all on this site =) makes it soooo much easier for those of us who like to reread your work =)

Name:
Kailael
Date:
07 May 2006
Time:
19:38:12
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Comments

just reread this seriously enjoyed it though the description of pettigrew tasting like old eggs and limburger, as well as him dousing himself in bottled manticora piss was seriously gag worthy. loved this version of severus, loving and possessive, was soooo hot =) =)one of these days i hope you write a sequel to it, i'd be one of the first in line to read it =)

Name:
Nessa
Date:
08 May 2006
Time:
21:47:51
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Comments

wow, amazing the double-standards men have: ronickens can't touch her, buts he's got a playdate for their wedding night. so snapey. u are my favorite author, by the way. i absolutely loved your stories. happy b-day!

Name:
Nessa
Date:
11 May 2006
Time:
20:27:13
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Comments

K babe, this is what i totally love about you: ur Snape is always in character. he NEVER steps out. you never over-fluff him, make hims snively and sappy. BUT you make him human, capable of lust, kindness, and most of all - love. but not a simpering kind of love. a snape-love. and thats why you are my absolute fav! please keep writing, your stories rock

Name:
Nessa
Date:
11 May 2006
Time:
20:36:34
Remote User:

Comments

o no! run, moine, run!

Name:
Nessa
Date:
11 May 2006
Time:
20:45:44
Remote User:

Comments

i hope he wipes the floor with lucas.

Name:
shayna
Date:
16 May 2006
Time:
04:45:25
Remote User:

Comments

go severus! and to heck wif the prophecy...hahaha, i really liked the way it was made redundant at the end of this fic... been following it for quite sum time now, glad and a lil sorry for the ending... kinda like saying goodbye to a favourite, u know... any chance for a sequel? *hopeful* juz in case u didnt get it, i love all ur fics! [=

Name:
SexyIsSnape126
Date:
01 Jun 2006
Time:
14:37:10
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Comments

I love this fic. Hope you do start a sequal! This story was awesome! Hope to see you updated a sequal someday, but until then, your stories rock... all of them, and I have tried to read all of your stories on AFF. Not all though, working on it!

Name:
CM
Date:
20 Jul 2006
Time:
19:22:25
Remote User:

Comments

aww, what a loverly story, though i did find it aggravating that you left it open, especially their conversation of possibly becoming a family! well yeah. do me a favor and lemme know if there is a sequel or when there will be a sequel. ( clarinetgurl_19@hotmail.com ) it would be much appreciated, and i would leave lotsa reviews if you did :)

Name:
elfpassion
Date:
24 Jul 2006
Time:
01:24:31
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Comments

That is the best snape/hermione story I have read! I would definitley await the day that a sequel would come out! I love your stories! ^_^

Name:
me
Date:
25 Sep 2006
Time:
10:21:07
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Reviewer:
reviewer
Date:
12 Dec 2007
Time:
13:09:45
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Reviewer:
Jade
Remote User:
Date:
07 Jan 2008
Time:
05:42:26

Comments

Hello Ruth, Thank You soo much for creating this page,its absolutely great,I love it. "Disharmony in the Dungeons" was by far the best story of Severus and Hermione I have ever read (and I've read alot of them;)!!!),particularly because of Severus' love for Hermione and vice versa! Although I think that in the end- Harry,Hermione and Severus should have defeated the Dark Lord together the ending is great,(Please,please write a sequal!)! Thanx,xox!

Reviewer:
Elaine Larrabee
Remote User:
Date:
22 Jan 2008
Time:
15:47:08

Comments

This story is sooo awesome. And I love that you left it open for a sequel. It seems that you are able to pick up right during the year of Hermione and Severus being informants... or even before. Like another Adventure fic. Or right after so we can read about the Happily Ever After that is due to the two bravest 'death-eaters' - I just LOVE the FLUFF! I hope you have a well-deserved vacation from writing... but you should know you are missed! *All the best, Elaine

Reviewer:
JosieMarie
Remote User:
Date:
16 Mar 2008
Time:
20:31:52

Comments

I am running out of ways to tell you how fabulously you write. The lemons are lemony, the story line is top caliber, and you always know just what is needed and where. This is why I love your stories. I don't even mind that you left the ending open to a sequel. I think it works out very well. So once again, I bow to your greatness, thank you for an evening well spent, and hope you continue to find inspiration to write. Thank you. I'm on to the next story.

Reviewer:
Cassie
Remote User:
Date:
22 Jul 2008
Time:
13:27:25

Comments

Wow! An in character Snape. Do you have any idea how rare that is?! It was believable, the lemons made great lemonade,and you blew that @#%& prophecy to smithereens! *Loves* I do agree with Snape about Hermione getting over being raped way too fast even with the breakdown she had, but I understand your reasons for that.

Reviewer:
wolfrose
Remote User:
Date:
06 Apr 2009
Time:
22:20:07

Comments

I absolutely love this story. Definitely one of my faves for the Marriage Law. As it is you're my favorite fanfic author, by far. I hope you do write a sequel, it'd be cool

Reviewer:
fandjio
Remote User:
Date:
15 Apr 2009
Time:
14:22:29

Comments

This fiction is an original marriage law fiction! Severus is dark but he's fond of hermione and I love it. Thanks a lot! Merci !

Reviewer:
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Date:
20 May 2009
Time:
19:43:20

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Date:
21 May 2009
Time:
12:39:18

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Date:
21 May 2009
Time:
15:44:52

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Name:
Ms_Figg
Date:
02 May 2006
Time:
21:15:37
Remote User:

Comments

Whew! This took forever to upload. I think this Snape is my darkest. I had no idea where this story was going where I started it, but it became an epic and is one of my favs. Hope you enjoy if you haven't read it...but warning...it has some very dark, disturbing parts in it. I have posted warnings at the squickiest.

Name:
JD
Date:
03 May 2006
Time:
07:21:16
Remote User:

Comments

*does happy dance* About time! Yay, I'm the first... well, second... on this page!

Name:
Kailael
Date:
06 May 2006
Time:
14:18:34
Remote User:

Comments

glad you finally got it all on this site =) makes it soooo much easier for those of us who like to reread your work =)

Name:
Kailael
Date:
07 May 2006
Time:
19:38:12
Remote User:

Comments

just reread this seriously enjoyed it though the description of pettigrew tasting like old eggs and limburger, as well as him dousing himself in bottled manticora piss was seriously gag worthy. loved this version of severus, loving and possessive, was soooo hot =) =)one of these days i hope you write a sequel to it, i'd be one of the first in line to read it =)

Name:
Nessa
Date:
08 May 2006
Time:
21:47:51
Remote User:

Comments

wow, amazing the double-standards men have: ronickens can't touch her, buts he's got a playdate for their wedding night. so snapey. u are my favorite author, by the way. i absolutely loved your stories. happy b-day!

Name:
Nessa
Date:
11 May 2006
Time:
20:27:13
Remote User:

Comments

K babe, this is what i totally love about you: ur Snape is always in character. he NEVER steps out. you never over-fluff him, make hims snively and sappy. BUT you make him human, capable of lust, kindness, and most of all - love. but not a simpering kind of love. a snape-love. and thats why you are my absolute fav! please keep writing, your stories rock

Name:
Nessa
Date:
11 May 2006
Time:
20:36:34
Remote User:

Comments

o no! run, moine, run!

Name:
Nessa
Date:
11 May 2006
Time:
20:45:44
Remote User:

Comments

i hope he wipes the floor with lucas.

Name:
shayna
Date:
16 May 2006
Time:
04:45:25
Remote User:

Comments

go severus! and to heck wif the prophecy...hahaha, i really liked the way it was made redundant at the end of this fic... been following it for quite sum time now, glad and a lil sorry for the ending... kinda like saying goodbye to a favourite, u know... any chance for a sequel? *hopeful* juz in case u didnt get it, i love all ur fics! [=

Name:
SexyIsSnape126
Date:
01 Jun 2006
Time:
14:37:10
Remote User:

Comments

I love this fic. Hope you do start a sequal! This story was awesome! Hope to see you updated a sequal someday, but until then, your stories rock... all of them, and I have tried to read all of your stories on AFF. Not all though, working on it!

Name:
CM
Date:
20 Jul 2006
Time:
19:22:25
Remote User:

Comments

aww, what a loverly story, though i did find it aggravating that you left it open, especially their conversation of possibly becoming a family! well yeah. do me a favor and lemme know if there is a sequel or when there will be a sequel. ( clarinetgurl_19@hotmail.com ) it would be much appreciated, and i would leave lotsa reviews if you did :)

Name:
elfpassion
Date:
24 Jul 2006
Time:
01:24:31
Remote User:

Comments

That is the best snape/hermione story I have read! I would definitley await the day that a sequel would come out! I love your stories! ^_^

Name:
me
Date:
25 Sep 2006
Time:
10:21:07
Remote User:

Comments

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reviewer
Date:
12 Dec 2007
Time:
13:09:45
Remote User:

Comments

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Reviewer:
Jade
Remote User:
Date:
07 Jan 2008
Time:
05:42:26

Comments

Hello Ruth, Thank You soo much for creating this page,its absolutely great,I love it. "Disharmony in the Dungeons" was by far the best story of Severus and Hermione I have ever read (and I've read alot of them;)!!!),particularly because of Severus' love for Hermione and vice versa! Although I think that in the end- Harry,Hermione and Severus should have defeated the Dark Lord together the ending is great,(Please,please write a sequal!)! Thanx,xox!

Reviewer:
Elaine Larrabee
Remote User:
Date:
22 Jan 2008
Time:
15:47:08

Comments

This story is sooo awesome. And I love that you left it open for a sequel. It seems that you are able to pick up right during the year of Hermione and Severus being informants... or even before. Like another Adventure fic. Or right after so we can read about the Happily Ever After that is due to the two bravest 'death-eaters' - I just LOVE the FLUFF! I hope you have a well-deserved vacation from writing... but you should know you are missed! *All the best, Elaine

Reviewer:
JosieMarie
Remote User:
Date:
16 Mar 2008
Time:
20:31:52

Comments

I am running out of ways to tell you how fabulously you write. The lemons are lemony, the story line is top caliber, and you always know just what is needed and where. This is why I love your stories. I don't even mind that you left the ending open to a sequel. I think it works out very well. So once again, I bow to your greatness, thank you for an evening well spent, and hope you continue to find inspiration to write. Thank you. I'm on to the next story.

Reviewer:
Cassie
Remote User:
Date:
22 Jul 2008
Time:
13:27:25

Comments

Wow! An in character Snape. Do you have any idea how rare that is?! It was believable, the lemons made great lemonade,and you blew that @#%& prophecy to smithereens! *Loves* I do agree with Snape about Hermione getting over being raped way too fast even with the breakdown she had, but I understand your reasons for that.

Reviewer:
wolfrose
Remote User:
Date:
06 Apr 2009
Time:
22:20:07

Comments

I absolutely love this story. Definitely one of my faves for the Marriage Law. As it is you're my favorite fanfic author, by far. I hope you do write a sequel, it'd be cool

Reviewer:
fandjio
Remote User:
Date:
15 Apr 2009
Time:
14:22:29

Comments

This fiction is an original marriage law fiction! Severus is dark but he's fond of hermione and I love it. Thanks a lot! Merci !

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Date:
20 May 2009
Time:
19:43:20

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