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I am Soooo loving this. What a great twist on the regular Snape/Granger stories. But then again, what else could be exspect for such a muse!
This is cool, although a darker Hermione than usual. However... Why are Twice Bitten and In an Alternate Universe so abandoned and forlorn? I really want to know what happens next... Also, whatever happened to Dark Lady? That one had great potential.
Lizzy: I've just been writing other things. Sometimes the muse takes over and wants to go elsewhere. Plus I was out of it creatively for a few days earlier this month so it took some time and tapping about before I could get my groove back. As I said in the A/N I intend to work on TB and IAAU. But I am going to have to read the both of them up to the point I stopped so give it a little time. And Dark Lady is still a one-shot. I was going to work on that but it got superseded by other stories. It happens. lol. There's still hope though.
I always thought fanon seriously misunderstood Hermione, especially after DH. The Hermione in my mind isn't quite this um...evil, but fanon makes her out to be a saint. DH made her seem like a snivelling, incompetent brat, really. I like this story and will patiently wait for updates.
Well it's 2008 in my little corner of the world. So Happy New Year folks! Love this tale! Hermione the Uber-Bitch! Well that's a new slant on things! Very interesting! Though I can't wait 2 see what happens in ur other stories est. Twice Bitten and Yuleride!
Happy New Year Bluejay!! ****
happy new year! Ms_Figg! thanks for the new chappie... i love love love it!!!! hermione as a villain is so cool. cant wait to see how snape handles it... lol! blood capsule? rofl!
okay so... i am just so fucking in love with this. i just finished a new beginning (yeah, im slow, been working a lot..and i loved it, by the way) and i loved that too... but what a story to read right after. I totally love this dark Hermione. I can't wait to read what happens next!!!
Oh, my, but this is exquisitely dark... and funny! I just about split a gut: "“She’s a whore! She can suck the foreskin off a wizard from thirty paces away!” OMG, ROTFLMAO!!!!!! Watch out, Hermione. Snape's on a tear!
pleeeeeeeeeeeease write more!
please update :(
I've read a number of your stories. Man of Misery, Yuleride, Twice Bitten, etc. but this one is truly out there. AWESOME! I'm patient, so I'll just sit back and wait for the updates. Just so you know, you have a great thing going on here!
I was wondering if you were going to pull Marcus in this one. It'd be funnier than hell if you could pull Adam and Victor in on this as well. Even Cassandra. She was my absolute fav from 'The Ghost and Lady Snape'. Other than that, I positively adore this story. I like the new angle you have for Hermione, and how Slytherin she truly can be. Can't wait for more!
You know a writer is good when the woman you always love and root for is suddenly the one you want to see get raped by incubus-Snape! LK
Laura: That's just plain scary. lol. At least you're open minded. I don't really know what's going to happen, if I can actually let it happen, but we'll just . . . just see what happens. lol. I do know he's going to scare the shit out of her, a full fledged haunting.
Just for fun, you should put ALL your amazing OOCs in here! Adam, Victor, Vashti, Cassandra, Odessa, Vivaldi, Venoma, Malina, Voltaire, and Volaria (I just realized, you LOVE V names).
lolol. All the OC's??? oh my god, you have to be kidding me, Lizzy, although I have to admit this is priming up to be one of the most self-indulgent fics I've written to date. I mean, I've actually put myself in it, targeted by Marcus no less. lololol. But I think it was the video that caused that really. It does hit my fantasy bone. I just hope no one takes this one too seriously. A fic of almost entirely OC characters. Talk about a distortion of JKR's world. lol. You are the second person to suggest more OC's. I'll have to think about it. :)
Well that just filled me with all kinds of warm fuzzies. lol.
I can't wait for this one to be updated. Snape wanting revenge on Hermione makes a nice change from him wanting to shag her. Marcus (lol) and Snape! It's about time they teamed up. This could be the start of a beautiful friendship. Ha, ha.
I think this is an interesting story, with potential to become even more so, therefore I hope you'll update it soon, although you have already lot to write. Go on, girl, you are the best ;)
Utoh, not good. Yet somehow I always thought Snape was an incubus anyway. Hummmm. Once again, Marcus is not nice.
lol Marcus always seems to be making bad situations worse. He's definitely one of my favorite characters. Him and Adam. lol
Very interesting twist!! Girl, this is an original!
reviewer: lol. It's like that's his niche. There isn't any situation Marcus can't make worse. lolol. He's such a bad guy, but so likable anyway. I might have to make up another magical world just for him one day. Of course still being a former Eradicator and descendant of a dragon. Maybe in that world, all the wizards and witches have beastial heritages some appearing more human than others. Hm. Interesting. :)
Hey, you could bring Odessa in as a woman cheating on her lover that Marcus targets... Bring in Venoma and Vivaldi as a Succubus and an Incubus...
Lizzy: lol. You just broke into my plot niffler pad. I was already thinking Odessa would be the perfect "example." I might have to scrap it now. lol.
Oooh, Marcus is back! Very cool. I'm really a fluffy Severus-and-Hermione-happy-together sort of person but a dark story with our man Marcus -- well! Can't pass that up! Looking forward to more, even if the updates are slow on this one. Thanks for your work -- I love it!
I know you're busy cranking out stories but I would love to read more! I like that you included yourself in this piece.
I'm not above begging. Pleeeease write more!
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