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Very Hot!!! Thats pretty much all I can say
LOL, well Andreas didn't have a problem exploring Dana. Great chapter. Next is the epilogue? Wow, I'm sorry to see this end. I remember when I started reading this I wasn't sure if I would keep it going. It looked angsty, but you made it all work. I can't wait to read what the characters have in store next.
** Fans face rapidly ** Damn that was hot.
Wow, hot lemons!! Next up epilogue? I'm so sad to see this story end; it was such a great read!
wow...that was quite good :) What an excellent story! And 13 pages of reviews! You Ms Figg are worth more than all the cows in the world LOLOL :)
Bravo!!!! And your encore is?
i loved it i can't wait for the next storie u rock
Take Three! Oh! I can't believe it's over!! I loved Mathias and Andreas and Severus. I can't believe it, I thought it would go on forever. Thank you. You are wonderful and so talented.
Whoa, just wait a minute..... is there a sequel coming or something?? Lucius and Draco GOT AWAY WITH MURDER??? And Jasmine let Draco off just so she could get a job?? With her status as a hero, she didn't need Draco for the job - she should've gotten rid of Draco! Good thing Mathias did NOT end up with her... grrr... (sends Gabby the Weredog to Draco's house...)
115 chapters! *phew* I really enjoyed reading it. But Draco got away??? *grmbl* See you next story, Ms_Figg. Thanks!
*Wild applause* Yay!! Excellent end to a wonderful story- one of your very best! Do you think you'll do one with any of the new characters? What's next on the agenda- rest? A break? Or jumping right in with a new tale? :-) Thanks for another great read- see you next one- LK
I really did enjoy this fic, and you totally hit most of my kinks... :D
JW: lol. Sorry about that...but Draco is Jasmine's father...and let's face it, blood really is thicker than water. A lot of children protect parents that really don't deserve it. Plus, she's being Slytherin about it. She can do a lot of good in that ministry position, and help make sure people are educated so organizations like the DKV never rise again. So it's not just any job.
Okay, but after Jasmine has the job and Andreas moves up in the Ministry, NOW can they send Gabby to eat Draco? Gabby is hungry, could eat Lucius too...
Laura: I don't know what I'll do now. Maybe the sequel to the Bang Series ~ Hermione Strikes Back or something. lol. No promises though. Just chilling right now :)
I loved it!! Too bad Jasmine and Mathias couldn't get together :( I loved it anyway. Hermione and Snape happy ever after, my favorite. I can't wait unitl the next story. No rush though, you deserve a much need rest. Take care of your self.
AWESOME STORY!!!!
All I can say is WOW!!! That was a great ending to the story and I loved the Andreas and Dana lemons, very well done. I liked that you updated while I was at work and on my breaks and lunches I tried to keep up with what you wrote viewing it on my tiny little cell phone screen since that is the only web access I have at work. But it was so worth it to read the chapters 111 and 112 at work and then when I got home I got on the computer and read the last 2 chappies. I look forward to the next story you choose to write and maybe you could throw in some lucius and hermoine lemons?? I agree with others that they would make a great story but not as good as sev and hermoine. Any chance of doing a sequel to this story maybe 10-15 years in the future when mathias is the snarky potions professor and andreas is the minster of magic?? Anyways I look forward to the next story. Keep up the great work!!!
ch114: ROFL!!! couldnt help laughing when dana pulled on his ears. lol. anyway, that chapter was very nice. and Andreas is something else!!! off to read the next one. :)
oh wow the story is over! well atleast i know that mathias has a very 'active' life even if he isnt with Jasmine. :) cant wait for the next story. see u there. take care! :)
I love it!!! Really one of your best works!!!! If not the best... Can't wait for your next story!!
WOW!!!!!!!It was smashing!!!!!What more can I say? Your story says it all^_^And now, I don't want to pressure you so soon after this long story, but....didn't you promised a sequel to "prof.Snape brings New Year with a Bang II"? I hope to see it soon!!!!lol ^_^
A great ending to to story. I loved it. I can not wait to read your next story. I do have one thing I am wondering about? Have Hermione and Severus ever had a Daughter?? How would Sevvie handle a little girl??
yay a happy ending woo hoo! awesome story good work hon =) one thought though, put the artwork you did for this story on a page and link it to the storys index would be cool to go back and see some of it sometime =)just a thought =)
So I've been trying to think of which of your stories is my favorite and I can't decide. Right now, I'd say this one is my favorite, but knowing you, your next story will be equally fabulous or even better. But you should take a nice break before you start writing it, Ruth... even if your loyal fans go into withdrawal pains while we're waiting for it! You're a very talented and creative writer, and a special lady. Hugs!
lilly: I wrote a story called "You Promised It Would Be Forever" where Severus had two daughters by Hermione and three sons. Though I only wrote about them in the epilogue there was a bit of dialogue that I thought covered Severus' attitude well: >>>Severus left the sexual education of his daughters to their mother. When Sarah approached him with a question of a sexual nature, he promptly told her just say "no" and go ask her mother.<<< lol, I think daughters would make him distinctly uncomfortable. <g>
ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!! NOT THAT IT'S SURPRISING!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You did it!!!!!! :) Another wonderful story by Ms Figg! I love the way you made Mathias a snarky and scary teatcher just like his father! And I really love this site. Its the first thing I do in the mornings.... Go out on the burning pen and look around. I really love the work you do and I am a huge fan of yours. So keep up the wonderful work!!!! Hugs Aihythil!!
I Loved it. There is nothing else to say. Take a break because you deserve it. Then come back, because people are addicted to your stories! We'll be waiting.
NOOOOO not the end. i loved this story and i hope you do something with mathias and andreas again (maybe a spinoff ;););)), i love these characters.
Another great story! I loved it, but of course you knew that. Lol. Can't wait for the next one. Toodles hon, Alex.
Wow! that was such a unique fic! I just loved thae way you have progressed the idea with Mathius and it's worked so well! Can't wait for your next idea! ;)
You just had to allow Draco to slither his way out huh? But I do like that you made him cower to Jasmine every wish in exchange for her silence. Yep, that girl sure did find out how to toy with men, mainly her father. It's too bad she and Mathias never got together, but like Severus said, "there too much trim out there." LOL, great final chapter. I'm glad to see Mathias and Andreas remained friends.
Awesome job, willl there be a daddy dearest II? cant wait itll the next story comes out..
Thank you for a great story.
Man Draco slithered his way out of that mess. And then managed to turn it into a gold mine! Does any of the Malfoys get what they deserve? At least Jasmine is not that bad. Of course I'm glad Severus and Hermoine married. I love the fact Mathias turned out just like his father. This was a great (and long story), can't wait to read the next one. Just make sure you get plenty of rest.
very awesome story....i cant wait for you to start again
This was a great story, I loved it. Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks.
Ruth- have a fun and restful holiday and take your time in whatever you decide to write next. :-) You know we'll be here, no matter what. LK
You're best story yet -- it goes in my keepers/re-read file
another great story - well done!!
Well another great story - but there was no doubt that is what it would be when all this started. Ruth you have such a gift with writing, pulling the reader into the world you create, and keeping the characters in line with what we have come to expect from them. Thank you so much for always sharing your stories with us and being so regular to update. Now I want you to make sure you take care of yourself and your family first - and enjoy those grandkids! Be happy and be well. As always I'm looking forward to your next adventure.
lilbitbord: lol. I have a soft spot for Draco in this fic I think. I often let Severus get away with a lot of things too. But you know, that's really how life works. People just aren't always punished like they should be. Draco was such a bumbler in this story...he just had to land on his feet to show he really is rather slick. He didn't get where he was by being stupid. I think he was more fear driven in his actions rather than being purposely cruel or evil. So yeah, Draco not only bounces back bur gets richer doing it. Life is sooooo unfair. <g>
To Readers: Thank you for enjoying the story and trying to swell my already rather large head up to the size of a watermelon. <g> It was a fun story to write and I really appreciated all the reviews and comments you all shared on the boards. Lucky 13 pages. Wow. I'll soon be starting on the final story of the Bang series: Tentatively titled: "Payback is a Witch". I came up with a really twisted idea for this one...I assure you...it is waaaaaaaaaay out there too. But I will try to make it believable. The opportunties for humor are limitless. :::rubbing hands together::::
WOW! When my computer broke down, I didnīt know that a few weeks later when it would work again there would already be a great ending to Daddy Dearest. You have really outdone yourself with this story Ms_Figg - thumbs up! Stella
Hello Stella Black, my fav Original Character to be :) I love that name and am going to definitely steal it for a story one day! Welcome back and glad you liked the story. :)
Great story! Loved it from beginning to end!
love the story! love it!!!!! :D
Thank you for the story. I liked the characters very much and couldn't wait for the next installment. But I have to tell you, I hated the ending (after Voldemort's death- which was great- ending up being eaten by a weredog!) I really wanted Mathius and Jasmine to fall in love. Hermione's son and Draco's daughter together has a great irony. ANd since Mathius has the parents he does, it makes sense to me that he would be the "find the right one and be serious with them" type, not the promiscuous type. Just my humble opinion- its your story, after all.
eslbeth: Sorry you hated the ending, but you know...I thought about Jasmine and Mathias falling in love...but it was too tidy, and too predictable. I hate predictable.. Much better and ironic Jasmine, a pureblood, ends up with a muggle-born wizard she loves. I got Severus and Hermione together, for me...that was the happy ending. But Mathias...no. As far as being promiscuous, he is like his father when he was single. Mathias is a Slytherin after all, and therefore an opportunist. He has fame, looks, is powerful and witches love him probably because he is famous. Groupies. lol. Why tie himself down to one when he's so young? Eventually he will settle down like Severus did, when he finds the right witch, but for now...he's just spreading the lust. lol.
My, that was a fantastic ride. It was a nice summation of everything. I cant wait until your next tale. Blessed be Red
payback is a witch? lolol. now that you have 'said' it i am not going to get any sleep till you post it. i simply cant wait for the next story. i hope you put it up fast. and the bang series was like one of my favorites and snape there is such an ass and a hot one at that... how on earh is hermione going to err... payback? that should be quite interesting. simply cant wait. see u in the next one. :)
that was most definitely amazing.
Bad news chatty. I'm probably not goint to start it until Tuesday, though it is dancing around in my brain like crazy. I am forcing myself to take a break. How I'll hold up, I don't know. Plus it's the beginning of the month...you know I have hustling to do. Bill time. Sigh. But hang in there...I'll be posting chapters soon.
Ruth- start it on Tuesday? That's the fourth, girl- relax! Lol! Tho I do understand when you have an idea just dying to get out onto paper or onscreen! :-) I love the title and am now looking forward to this one, trying to imagine what you've got in mind for us! LK
you had me hooked the first chapter...and i just kept drooling from then on...i loved the way you ended it...i am glad the way it ended...i like the fact that mathias is being a little severus...a chip off the old potions master...(evil grin)...jasmine fell in love with a muggle...draco's karma...lol...and andreas...well i just love him...he is an awesome character...i would like one day to see a new story about these characters as they have aged and what has become of them...the sev and hermione bit was awesome...i loved that they got married...i love the dominate snap...yummy...this story rocked and as hard as it is to say considering you have so many wonderful stories, but this is my fav fic by you figg...cannot wait for next addition to the bang series...cannot wait to see what you come up with...i like the title so far...lol...keep up the good work...take care...
Oh I loved every little part of this story. I must say however that I was really hoping to know who Methaes settels down with. Since it isn't Jasmine than who is it??? Is there any chance that you might write an ulternative ending?
Once again, great ending!!! Can't wait for your next masterpiece! Hugs, Killer K :D
LaLa: No...I won't be writing an alternative ending. Maybe in the future I will write something more about Mathias. But I am petered out with this fic now. 115 chapters is more than adequate I think. :)
Wow Ruth!.....What a climax...in soooo many ways!!!Brilliant ending,I have so enjoyed your latest fic;it was so difficult to see where this was going from the beginning.....but as usual you are a true master of the HG/SS plot. I still rate you as the #1 Sev/Herm writer on the net....and like many of your readers I suspect...we all read many other authors, but none of them can touch your skill! You leave no loose ends ever.....sublime as per your usual.....I kneel at your literary feet!
Mrs Strawberry: I am glad you enjoyed the story. There were times I wondered where it was going myself. :) But as to being a plot-master...not too sure about that. lol. I think true plot-masters sit down and take the time to figure out a plot from beginning to end. The stories I write develop themselves pretty much. I write from...hmm...a Life Aspect? Cause and Effect? Not sure. All I know is there has to be conflict on several levels and then resolution with a whole lot of living along the way. I try not to make the stories take themselves too seriously. Life is full of humor, even in the worst situations. But there are a slew of fine HG/SS writers that I think write circles around me. I just try to keep the stories I write easy to read, fun and interesting, preferably without putting too much of myself into them. The "fly on the wall' approach works best for me. I watch JKR's characters and the characters I make up live their lives and tell you about it. lol. But thank you so much for your very kind review.
*g* Sorry I didn't review earlier, but you had me quite captivated with your tale. I love Mathias as a character, he's so much like Snape. And sex-crazed Severus is a lot of fun, too. *g* Just a question, though. Didn't you say that two of James's friends were in higher years? How could he hex them on the way to Herbology then? Or did he hex somebody else? Take care, Aldara
Excellent! How are you feeling?? Take care of yourself before starting the next one :)
Aldara: You are so right about that. Drat. Will fix so it's just James he gats. Thanks. :)
hehe. forcing yourself to take a rest? hmm, you better. we dont want a Ms_figg with a head the size of a water melon do we! lol. take rest Ms_Figg and let your mind flow. the more you rest the more better the story will get once you start at it. anxiously waiting for the next story. it sounds very promising... *eg* 'payback is a witch' that heading is just not getting out of my head. lol.
Wonderful story! Quite possibly your best yet:)
DKV approved?!? *roflol* Little Jasmine has DKV approved views... I wonder if that's a cachet... *g*
It took me two days to read it, but I enjoyed it very much. I would have liked to have read the proposal, but understand why you didn't include it. Thanks for a great read!
I would guess that my only complaint is that Hermione never went back to work. You would think that after all she went through she would at least get her job back
I could not believe that you would out do Man of Misery but you have proven me wrong. I absolutely loved this story. It did not have as much sex as your other fan fic's but the story in this one just blew me away. As always your characters are so wonderfully written that I could just curl up with them. It's funny you should write about their son as I had this cute dream the other night that Hermione and Severus's son came upon his mother and father, invisible doing the "nasty" in an alcove. Can you just imagine it? Here he is patrolling and comes across an invisible spell. He can detect them. Assuming this couple are students he causes the spell to cease and he is horrified to find his parents there going at it like wild rabbits. Any, I just wanted to say that I so loved this story. You have such a marvelous talent. I hope one day you can become rich and famous from you stories.
Love this story, it's utterly amazing. A totally wicked idea, and so well writen. Always love your work! Thanks for writing it!
Love this story, it's utterly amazing. A totally wicked idea, and so well writen. Always love your work! Thanks for writing it!
Anjade: I thought about her returning to the Ministry, but thought it better she embark on a new career as a Spell Mistress at Hogwarts.
I'M BAAACCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!! Really, four days is way too long to be away from a computer. I swear I was having withdrawl symptoms. *shudder* Anyways, this story was brillant. Loved the ending. Too funny.
That was one of the best stories I've ever read, including books that have nothing to do with Harry Potter and a ton of other stories i've read online. You are extremely gifted in the ways of words. I greatly hope that you will write more with Mathias and Andreas. I think I like them more then your stories that focus on Snape and Mione, though I really enjoyed the list and the ring.Thank you for making me a slave to this website, and I intend to continue to be one. xoxo, your faithful reader, greta
dear ruth ,enjoyed you story and your great characters. you always do such wonderful work. Looking forward to more soon
that's a great story, you're a really good writer!!
that's a great story, you're a really good writer!!
heya, great story and you're a great writer!
heya, great story and you're a great writer!
that's a great story, you're a really good writer!!
*roflol* That was sweet. I doubt I was ever that innocent. But then, I discovered the wonders of X-rated fanfiction when I was 14... :P
Ahhhh, I've said that I would review all the rest of the story at once, but it is long and I need a pause. So, wow, many, many good ideas there ! Skitter's pet, for one, Gabby is almost *cute*, it really takes you to make *cute* a so disgusting animal ! The trial was well done and funny, poor Draco. Though I must admit that I don't understand the name of Hermione's lawyer, but well... I'm not a native... (or perhaps I'm just dumb, which is possible). But my very favorite scene is the sexual education of Mathias, I was literaly laughting out loud. When you told me that you were planning to write a lemon scene between the two characters, I was a little apprehensive, as I love lemons a lot, but am really not hot at the idea of sex between teenagers (my memories of teenage sex are ones of ackward sex, so it isn't very exciting), but now I'm so looking forward for this lemon, just to see the poor Mathias trying to act with his father's teaching in head. Ahhhh, I'll come back later.
Yes, it was sweet for a first time. Even if I enjoy more, far more, lemons with Severus, I liked this one too :-) But, well, you'll forgive me, as I'm an old woman, who prefere men a little more mature :-)
It was nice. I specially love the fact that you didn't make *eternal* love stories with the kids: they are young and teenage loves don't last usually, but in a great part of the fanfictions, there is often a end with *true love* or *soulmates*. It is quite refreshing to read something else. In the same way, I like your young slytherins who enjoyed their celebrity status without shame. A great and fun story :-)
Bravo!!! i loved it please tell me there will be a sequel... your fics keep getting better and better. please do not stop writing.
i just love this story. i started reading it on aff.net, but the chapters weren't posting fast enough so i came here to read more. i am cursing self for having made plans today when all i wanna do is read more if this story! LOL that should tell you something about how much i like it
Wow. I honestly laughed, cried, worried and wondered with this story. Wonderful. Keep up with these and I may have to make this my new favourite fanfiction site.
Found my way over from AFF and spent the last few days reading the story. I wasn't sure if I would like the story from the summery but once I started reading, I was hooked. Simply brilliant!
I love this story.
I loved this story, it was completely brilliant. Cronnie Jockrin? lmfao that was priceless.
wow great story i have been reading this for a couple of weeks now when i got the chance... Its really good couldn't stop reading it. Good work
You do know that a wanker is a masterbater not a penis.... right?
A wanker is a masturbator, or one who wanks off, or someone who is considered a big show off as far as I know
A wanker is a masturbator, or one who wanks off, or someone who is considered a big show off as far as I know but if I've misused the term eh...I'll correct it and live :) It's really no biggie.
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It took me about 12 hours to read this and I loved every minute of it. I first encountered your work on whispers and found this site by accident. I loved every minute of it.
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speaking as a CHILD of a useless father, i would lose ALL respect for my mother if she 'fucked' him after years of abandonment. can't people say anything other than fuck? it's such an ugly word. this fic is shit.
& what's with your little 'wow im reading this for the first time thing' as if what you're writing has any kind of quality ... get real. don't write when your pen's on fire!
reviewer: lighten up baby...this is just a story...not a great work of literary merit. Stop acting like the story is a commentary on morality or ethical behavior, or all deadbeat dads or something. In other words, either enjoy it or dump it sweetie, it's up to you. Personally, I think you probably have much better things to do then read a fic you think is shit.
hey reviewer, I'd like to see you write anything near as good as this story. The character development alone is spectacular, and not just JKRs characters, but the original ones too. This is one of the best alternate universe fanfics I've ever read. It's exciting, angsty, full of adventure and humor and doesn't end all sappy. If you don't like the word fuck don't read the story. I think it's sexy when used in the right context like it is in this story and not all people who dad ran out on him don't forgive. just because it isn't in your heart don't think others are as messed up as you are. People come to terms with things that happen in their lives and try to understand them. This fic isn't shit your reviews are.
I love it! I usually read the one shots, but this caught my eye! I can't wait to finish reading! P.S. Justice Forall has been in how many and this is the first time i realized that it's "Justice For All". lol
Gosh, finally made it through. Two days of almost non-stop reading. I loved this story. I especially loved Matthias, Andreas and Jasmine. This story was awesome! I tried to leave more reviews on AFF but they have a limit, which seems grossly unfair to the author. I really don't know what to say. I loved just about everything about this. Plus it kept me "page turning" for 115 chapters which is amazing. congrats on this.
Gosh, finally made it through. Two days of almost non-stop reading. I loved this story. I especially loved Matthias, Andreas and Jasmine. This story was awesome! I tried to leave more reviews on AFF but they have a limit, which seems grossly unfair to the author. I really don't know what to say. I loved just about everything about this. Plus it kept me "page turning" for 115 chapters which is amazing. congrats on this.
looking forward to many juicy lemons! btw would you be intrested in a fic. i'm writing? it's kinda smutty and i need help! lol i'm a poet-trest/author under the influence of Edgar Allen Poe, Shakespehere, J.K Rowling, Lynsay Sans, and Nora Roberts. I'm messed up lol. So meeage me back. hsam12my@aol.com
wow yummy lemon waiting 4 level 2 hehe
wow a nice sour juicy lemon really penetrates the senses!....*slurp* *sigh tasty lol
i hope you don't get bored w/ my reviews but that brings confidence i supose. mathias's questionare baffeled me. how can one so young be so damn mature? i dunno but i liked it. level 2 lemon was veryyyy.....etc. etc. etc. tasty! lol ttyk
i thnk the sorting hatin this scenerio would say, 'watch out ye young wizards, witches can be bitches when in a pisser.' lol corny i know but i'm tired
this justice dude sound slike a jerk really btw i didn't review justice forall?! that's great! lol i can't wait for his reaction. honestly i hope she [hermione] hexes him 2 bits
jeez! emotional dude isn't he? snape'll kick his bloody butt 2 sure! lol right?.... right?.... sum-1 please say right! lol ttyl
oh she curses him! so bad of her! lol he should've went 'lucius' on her if you get my drift!
lemins lemons lemons! *chant* lemons can't be hot but damn screw physics
That story is brilliant, I have just spent the past 13 hours reading it, foregoing a night's sleep to finish it, but it was worth every minute! Thank you, C
Thank you for all your fine stories. During a bad time in my life they have helped. Missblue
Absolutely terrific. I read every single chapter...didn't skip any~~you are a very gifted authoress. I didn't want it to end either. Longest story I've read in the fandom...only beat out in real life by the Stephanie Plum novels and HP series! Keep up the incredible stories!
please say there is a mathias story in the wings
Loved it! Definitely my favorite voldie!death so far. Mathias is such a great character ... you must be just itching to write a sequel about his adult life ... You are, aren't you? Aha! I knew it. tee hee hee. Can't believe Draco, taking a page out of Lockhart's book I suppose. I really expected Severus & Hermione might have another kid, but I suppose Severus' change of heart about fatherhood didn't extend that far. Too bad about Andreas & Dana as well ... thought they might have worked out. Young love is fickle I suppose. On a technical note, if you ever go back and edit, I noticed in the trial chapters you typed 'Delores' instead of 'Dolores' for Umbridge, and when Andreas is courting Dana there was something about him taking her 'to Hogwarts and Madame Puddifoot's' which I assume is supposed to be 'Hogsmeade' and not 'Hogwarts'. I think that's it, other than a few instances of using 'then' rather than 'than' - I always make that error the first time I type something out, so I always notice it. Must go catch up on a Matter of Circumstance now ... I've been avoiding everything else so I could finish this! ~lizzie
Annabelle: Thanks for the Dolores spelling. I always thought it was "Delores." Another prob with listening to the books rather than reading them. I couldn't find the chapter with Dana and Hogwarts rather than Hogsmede, I'll have to look again (so many chappies) I'll have to pick out the thans and thens perusing the story again as well, but thank you so much for taking the time to point the errors out and I am glad you enjoyed the story. ***
huh? who?... *had been reading about hermione's trial* cronnie jockrin?... after all this hubbub, a name I've never heard of before? I was starting to speculate Longbottom, Lockhart...
Cronnie Jockrin is a play on the name Johnny Cockrin, the flamboyant lawyer who successfully represented OJ Simpson in his murder trial.
Wow that was an epic length tale. I really enjoyed your take on this archetype. As always thank you for writing and I look forward to reading more of your work
lol, love it! loved the play on Johnny Cockrin. also loved how andreas didnt magically end up with dana and the same with mathias and jasmine. great fic!
I almost fell out of my chair I laughed so damn hard. "You can call me the wizard who's going to kick your ass". That was too fucking funny. This story is just getting better and better. But Snape IS such a snarky bastard sometimes, I hope he get pimp slapped!
just found this - happy new year for me! wonderful story and characters. like a good book, very hard to put down. loved the original way that you got rid of voldemort. and good for Jasmine, making her own life. damn, Ms. Figg, you are good!
OMG, I have tears coming out of my eyes from laughing. Dragon dung and garlic indeed!
THis was a really great story. I loved Snape's evolution from a solitary bastard to a loving bastard! The plot was great. Love how you explained away Harry's part and incorporated your own ending to Voldy. I was a bit disappointed that Mathiais and Jasmine didn't end up together in the epi. And, that Draco ended up popular and famous, but that was a bit of realism. Sometimes stupid people do end up in a bed of roses. But, I don't have to like it. Great job all and all. Very entertaining.
cronnie jockrin! Lol! Is he related to Johnny C? ;o)
Just had to say--I realized that you created another "trio" about four or eight paragraphs before you had Dumbledore dub them the Dark Trio, and had to squeeeee! I'm very curious about how Jasmine is going to work out. Maybe there's hope for her yet!
LOL! You never cease to amaze me. I have to admit, at first I was pissed that Severus did what he did (You know, not offering to help). He's always come off as a "natural gentleman" so in my little mind, honorable. But I love where this is going. I must have skipped over this story 100 times, thinking that I wouldn't like it but I was wrong. GREAT job!
Whew! I am going to have to pick up on some of this tomorrow at work. It's hard to read something when people are constantly spying (usually b/c I am laughing to myself) but I'll keep my finger next to the trigger. :)
Cronnie Jockrin! I almost died laughing. That's brilliant!
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LMAO to Jasmine using her feminine wiles to win the match against Mathias. This has got to be my favorite chapter of my favorite story!
116 Chapters!!!!!! First, that is not a fanfic, that's a book! Second, OMG, I almost never review before I get to the end, but WOW! I'm so excited to get such a long story, I might have to pop in a review more often.
Whew! Had to stop in and leave a comment. I'm only on chapter 46, but WOW. I am amazed at what you have accomplished in a fairly small number of chapters. Set everything up, clued in everyone who needs to know, gotten Snape and Hermione in the correct frame of mind, threw in some lemons, AND humiliated Trelawny! My goodness, no wonder the authers notes say you are tired. I have to sleep now, but I will be back tonight to read more. thanks again.
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Wowie ka-zowie!!! It actually took a few nights to get through this story, but DAMN it was well worth the effort. It really is too bad that JKR wouldn't let you publish any of your stories, girl you'd be damn near as rich as her. I think this one will be my altime favorite fanfiction. Plot with porn, long, and well written. Thank you, from the very depths of my heart, for allowing me to spend time in your world. Much love.
I loved it ...it was lots of chapters but i couldnt get enough...absolutlely wonderful. loved how u written an ending that told the story out..very nice..
I loved it ...it was lots of chapters but i couldnt get enough...absolutlely wonderful. loved how u written an ending that told the story out..very nice..
I've been reading this fic for the last couple of days and have been enjoying it so much! I really love Jasmines side story in this chapter... It's great that she gets to see things from the perspective of the people she was brought up thinking were inferior to her. <3 All people should have to go through something like that, even if it's just a little thing like working in food services for a while in order to appreciate what working people go through. I really enjoy your fics, I've been reading through a couple lately and I'll definitely be checking out the rest. God(s) bless!
Loved this story! Loved, loved, loved it! Mathias is awesome, Andreas and Jasmine were great characters. It all came together so well. Took my breath away. Well done!
Love this story! You should write a long one just about Andreas Mbutu -- he's such an interesting character!
Awesome, simply awesome! I loved this story from start to finish and it took me a few days to read it. lol A friend was several chapters ahead of me and I kept asking, they get together, right?! :) Thanks for the good story!
