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I do believe this is the best story you've written yet. (and I've read all of the ones you have posted) I check for a new chapter at least once an hour when I'm home :D
Ms. Figg, don't leave us hanging with that...I wanna know what happens with mathias and jasmine. What will the dark lord think? will it provide enough of a distraction for andreas and mathias to kill him. Oh well you do need your rest don't overwork yourself and great work on the chapters, I love how you are tying everything together and not leaving any loose ends. I especially am looking forward to danas reaction when she relizes that andreas spoke the truth and what andreas will have her do when he comes back from killin the dark lord
/whistles, oh boy Mattias Snape and Jasmine Malfoy are finally growing up.. awwww looking forward to tomorrows updates =). ---- On a Happy note for those who are interested my First Nephew was born at 6:52pm AST this evening and i was actually there to witness it. Its a happy moment for my whole family so i thought i would share =)
Kai: congrats on the new addition...a nephew. That's wonderful :)
figg this was a great chapter...you have made it easier on mathias now so he doesn't have to worry about coaxing her into sex with him and then going through with the deflowering...i am very interested to see how you write the next chapter...keep up the good work....take care...get some rest...
oh i forgot...congrats kai on nephew...
Woohooo!!
that chapter has me in my toes. it sounds very scary... seems like many are going to die... ah well, what to do, life's like that. :( anywayz, hehe. was lmao when mathias was 'preparing' himself for the night. lolol. and well he has been taken by surprise. cant wait to see how he will react. and cant wait to see the lemons. Sleep well Ms_FIgg, get up eaaaarly tomorrow and start typing. heh heh. *eg* see u next chapter.
congrats kai! :)
OMG, she came to him. I'll bet Mathias was surprised, but I'm glad it worked out this way. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Hermione pulls it off at the last minute. She's just got too.
Ch 105 - you're doing great!!! Nice balance between what he knows (from his dad) and what he learns by accident. Very realistic, that the first time doesn't go smoothly, but two determined partners will figure things out. Go, Figgy!
Oh god that was sooooo sweet. I think you showed their innocence as well as their curiosity very well. I'm looking forward to the next part.
im speechless. its bloody brilliant! wow Ms_Figg... i just cant wait for the next chapter. this is getting so hot.. and well... i kinda like mathias being a bit nervous. all in all it suits the scene. loving it. cant wait for more. pleeeeeeease keep them coming. but first... sleep!!! dont stress yourself. and if u cant sleep.start counting sheep. hehheh.
Poor Hermione, I hope the boys can kill Voldy before he activates the mark. Andreas/Dana was so funny. ^^ Mathias and Jasmine are just so sweet together, trying to figure it all out together and also really caring for each other. Loving it!
i just love you and the way you write...the way you wrote chapter 105 was so sweet and poor mathias he though she was seizuring...you are writing the innocence perfectly...i am sad to see that this story is coming to a close...this is the best fic you have ever written...of course i say that about every fic...lol...but this is by far my fav...anxiously awaiting chapter 106...take care...and i am so happy you are online for another month...
ch 105: You did a good job on this =)the nervousness and the surprise within their reactions is quite well done =)
"There is a button between your legs that will make you meltdown" lol. that line was very funny.only you can write something funny amidst all the tension and heat. lolol. thank you Ms_Figg, waiting for the next chapter.
Oh my fucking god!!!! That was the most I ever laughed in any of our stories! That was great!!!! When Jasmine had an orgasm and Mathias got scared! LOL!!!!!! That was really great!!!!!! Cant wait for the good part... ;)
ooh voldemort is an ass! but thank god jasmine will not fall into his dirty clutches now that mathias has her. wondering how voldemory will react to this. nice chapter.
sorry!!!! not our stories!!! your stories! I spelled it wrong... with a million other things I guess.... my only excuse is Im from sweden..... :/
Very well done, I think you did show the innocence although I find it hard to believe Jasmine would be having her first orgasm at 16! I was about 11 or 12 when I discovered my 'button.' (Did I just type that??) Ah, Mathias has it in him to make it good for them both, I have no doubt! Voldy is going to be soooo pissed, hehe! Love it- LK KAI- congrats on your new nephew! Isn't it amazing to see a new life emerge from someone else? A priveledge to see. :-) Hope mom and baby are both well.
Laura! 11 or 12??? lolol. Let's just say she's a late bloomer ;) I don't think I had one until I was 17 but that was a loooong time ago...I could be wrong heh heh ok. I'm going to start the next chappie see ya'll in a bit
104-105~ Oh, man, I was laughing SO hard while reading these chapters. Now my dog is looking at me like I'm crazy. I don't know why, I just thought it was so funny.
Hey, Kai, congrats on the new little one! Another kid to spoil then send home to mommy, eh? ;)
Excellently written chapter. You did a wonderful job conveying the discovery and innocence of the moment. We never did find out if anyone saw Snape's "notes" on the board before he got a chance to erase them? Am eagerly waiting for the next chapter. And Laura - you're not the only one :P
hey wheres the next chapter? :(
ahhh its finally time im soo nervous for them, your doing a great job Ms_Figg!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon..
Wow that was hot!! I loved it!!!
WooHoo! Great chapter. Too bad they couldn't spend the night together, but I'm hoping there will be many more. Get some rest, lord knows you earned it!
Wow, that was a hot little chapter and a great one to boot. why did jasmine leave did she just realize that this might be the last time or was she worried about what her dad and voldie would think if they found out that she lost her virginity..I can't wait until the next chapter especially the chapters involving the big finale with the fight I hope they kill voldie. Great job! keep up the great work!!
You did a good job with that, Ruth. And I know I may be soft or whatever, but even though they are each other's firsts, I hope they fall in love and stay together... Or at least end up together!
nice chapter, not quite a Sev Lemon but hey he did his old man proud /chuckles =) will be interesting to see how new years goes, keep up the good work =)
Kai: lol No, not a Sev lemon. Mathias has to learn his "art". At 16 and his first time, he could hardly be a sex god, more like a sex-god in training. lol. But he has Severus-like tendencies, and will probably wind up a devastating lover with a bit more practice and exploration. He's still a bit prudish. But he likes sex...so there is hope for the boy. <g>
Lovely lemons, Ms_Figg! They really were great together especially for a first time (I hope there will be more, or that they at least get "happily-ever-after" together). Will we get to see why Jasmine left so quickly?
hopes confirmed!
These last couple of chapters have been great. I can't wait to read the about the battle with Voldie. I hope Jas and Mathias can't work it out and live happily ever after. And don't forget Andreas and Dana :) Keep up the great work can't wait for the next up date.
106~ Aw, that was sweet. Why did Jasmine leave?
PERFECT!!! Just like everything else you write. Get some rest and update ASAP.
JUSTICE is yours!!!!!!!!!! haha, great job!
Sorry I haven't reviewed for awhile! I have been sneaking peeks at work here and there, and thanks God I waited until I was home for Ch. 106!! You did an awesomely outstanding job of describing their first time! I wish mine had been so good! I personally like this story best of all so far! I can't wait to see how it ends, but I don't want it to end, either! Please take care of yourself and update as you are able!
That was nice...I expect he'll outshine his father one day in the bedroom. But I'll always prefer Severus, rowrrr! Now, on to the finale!! You rest up and have fun writing the rest- you know we love it! LK
very nicely done...one tiny mistake though--in the first paragraph "The witch quickly learned that when Jasmine's body ..." when you said witch I think you meant wizard... I think this was very well written :) Hope you are able to sleep :)
i'v been reading this storry for weeks and i thoght it about time i actualy gave u a revew. all i can say is i think you are amasing. the way the last chapter showd both the antisapation of there first time along with the pleasure involved. bril'. i hope you update soon coz u have me at the snd of my seat but iff you are ill you have to rest up and get better. thank you for the joy you have borught me. :)
That was just wonderful! You did a great job with the deflowering!!! And I really love that Mathias is so like his father! Hugs Aihythil
aww that was perfect. although i had a small problem with mathias being err... almost soppy. lol. but well, that was his first time, he will improve i guess. but i loved it anyway. its not always that we see mathias like this. hehe. cant wait for the big action now.
oh and why did jasmine leave so quickly? draco is supposed to be coming to pick her up the next day right? hmm... cant wait for the next chapter.
Ch 107 - EEEEEEEK! Where are Andreas, Mathias, and Severus?? Aren't they hiding somewhere? And Pettigrew and Nagini are gone too? Cliffhanger!!
Wow. This has been quite mesmerizing. I am hoping that Jasmine doesn't feel moved to deviate from the plan due to anything Mathias has failed to tell her or say to her.
aRgh! I'm sooo nervous right now!
Ms_Figg!!!!!!!! i shouldve' known this was coming!!!!! an evil cliff as usual. well i jsut have to wait i guess... pleeeeeeeeease update soon. im totally loving this and im so scared. what have you planned? cant wait to know... *looking around nervously* keep the next chapters coming.
great chapter! Any chance we'll get through the climax tonight/eeearrrrly tomorrow? I'm going on vacation and won't have computer access for 10 days. *sigh* No pressure or anything! Seriously though...take care of yourself and don't overdo it.
Great chapter, Ms_Figg. It's all going to happen now. But: *argh* evil cliffie!!
OMG, I'm so afraid for everyone. You know, as I read the Order part, I almost imagined them dressed as Knights Templar's or something. Very nice visual. I cried during Severus and Hermione's scene. Very touching. I'm so happy he was finally able to tell her how much he loved her. Oh Ms. F, I don't think I need to tell you what I'm begging you on my hands and knees for right now. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but I'm also wary.
YAY! Voldy is dogfood! Gabby had a "nice" little snack. ^^ The Slytherins are the heroes and they all survived! What will happen to the three couples? I'm keeping my fingers crossed for "happily-ever-after" all around; I'm just a hopeless romantic that way ^^ And just what did Jasmine and Severus talk about last chapter? Hoping for more soon, Ms_Figg.
Yay!!!!! They all lived!!!!! Thank you!!! I'm curious though as to what Severus talked to Jasmine about. I'm guessing he maybe offered to take watch over her, knowing that her father and grandfather would soon be in Azkaban.
The reason Severus took Jasmine aside was to set his track-a-port on her. I was hoping the readers would figure that out when I said "Severus portkeyed to Jasmine's side." I guess I need to clarify that better. He had made his own plan to supplement theirs, but didn't tell them.
You know, I've read this twice now, and I finally got it the second time. It was pretty clear, it was just the excitement of everything else, that made me just not even think about that.
short chapter but nice chapter! im so glad that voldy died a horrible death although i freaked out when mathias also journeyed. hopefully he has gained some MORE powers after this second journey. almost feel sorry for draco but well he's an ass through and through i wouldnt mind him being in azkaban if not for Jasmine. anyway, cant wait to see how the rest will go. cant wait for the journey chapter. i hope mathias kicks voldy's ass there.
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. That bit involving Gabby, ingenious.
LMAO, damn damn damn that was tooo funny i nearly woke my husband up with my laughter. Awesome job hon =)
Hooray! I'm really glad the Jasmine is going to get full credit along with Mathias and Andreas. They really are the new trio. :)
whooohoooo and here i was thinking of a sick twist that voldy came back to mathies body leaving him behind... please dont do that to us. but other then that great Chapters so far lots of intressting twists in it one of your best storys so far to date.. looking forward to the next chapter, i hate to see the end of this story will there be a sequle in the works?
Up to Chapter 108 -- Wow. Jasmine's deflowerment went very well. The plan the 3 kids had worked like a charm. And dear old Gabby - will he now live with Hagrid and have a place of honor at Hogwarts? He sure deserves it. Great job, Ruth!
Ah, Gods...loved LOVED the Voldemort decapitating death and becoming Gabby's dinner! It was hilarious...such a fitting way for something so evil to die! Will you write a little snippet in a future chapter where Voldemort will be confronted by the Dark Soul of the World on his "journey"? And I hope smarmy Draco gets his comeuppance/just desserts...especially since he willingly too Jasmine to Voldemort; what a cowardly bugger!
OMG, I am in tears with relief that the confrontation went so well! Ms Figg, you are truly gifted with the pen, or keyboard, so to speak. I also really liked Jasmine's deflowering. It was well written, respectful and beautiful. I look forward to reading more.
OMG, I am in tears with relief that the confrontation went so well! Ms Figg, you are truly gifted with the pen, or keyboard, so to speak. I also really liked Jasmine's deflowering. It was well written, respectful and beautiful. I look forward to reading more.
omg....what a confrontation...i am dying to know what happened on the plain...wtg gabby...and i love the fact that snape gets bragging rights...he so deserves it after all he has gone through throughout his tenure at hogwarts and being a deatheater spy......great great great...there is so much i want to say but it will only sound silly you know how good this story was and you know how good of a writer you are...you keep up entralled with the first sentence you write in each and every new story...keep up the good work...take care...
107-108~ Wow that was fantabulous! You always have the most creative ways of killing Voldemort. Ruth, I just have to ask. I've noticed that you have spoken of a deadline and whatnot. Are you leaving us?
Ch 108 - wow, all that practice paid off. I'm looking forward to seeing what happened with Voldy and Mathias on the Dark Plain - Voldy can't come back to another body, can he? And all those Death Eaters and DKV members - their Marks are gone, but their brains are still pro-Voldy, so I hope their thinking gets straightened out. Very neat, to have Gabby do the "clean up" and the boys transfigure themselves into bracelets.
I love the story from begginning to the end. I hope there will be a few more chapters to wrap everything up. You did another wonderful job I can not wait to read your next story. But I do have a question or a request, have you ever written a story were Severus is the one to instigate a love affair with Hermione while she is still in school? I have read many where Hermione is the one to start everything but I have not read many where it is Severus the one who have to do the seducing especially if Hermione is still in School at the time. Everyone seems to assume that hermione has to be instigator in most of the relationships and that she has to be the one push the relationship because Severus is too cold and distant to make a move but I think it would be more likely that Severus would push for a realationship not Hermione. I am not saying Severus would be lovey dovey but he does seem to be a seducer of innocence or that is what alot of Severus fans that I know think. What do you think???
WOW! you did it! very gruesome, but voldy did deserve what he got.. cant wait to see how you wrap this thing up.
That was freaking awesome.
JW: Most of the DKV members gave up on Voldie when all that info and his photo came out in the trial. As far as the deatheaters go, I will write about them. Bethiany: I haven't written Severus pursuing Hermione in school...the closest I've come is the "Bang" series, where he seduces her because he's randy, and he's decidedly a bad guy in that one. I just can't see him pursuing Hermione as a love interest while she's in school, though I can certainly see him sexing her up. lol. But love? :::shaking head::: Can't see it. I'm sorry. Hmm. In the first story I ever wrote, "What Was I Thinking?" Severus pursues Hermione after he discovers she fantasizes about him, and takes her virginity. Eventually he does end up in love with her and marrying her over a few years. That is the 9-part series.
Ms. Figg, Great chapter for 107 and 108, I can't wait until we see what happens with severus and hermoine maybe you can squeeze some lemons out for us since it will be severus's homecoming when he thought that he would die. I am also eagerly awaiting what happens with mathias and jasmine are they gonna become a couple and what will andreas and dana do? You have to include some lemons with those two since andreas has been waiting so long to get together with dana. I love the pic you put on the homepage of gabby with voldies head!!! Great job on the series I hope that there is a sequel and I am eagerly awaiting the final chapters.
ok have to say it the picture on the front page is hilarious! hope they give that weredog and order of merlin for eating the basilisk bastard. =)
Wow, I was out all day and only just got to finish this! The front page pic was a bit of a spoiler but that's ok, I expected gabby to get some, or hoped- lol! :-) Very well done, I just hope you don't skimp on the epilogue. There's a lot of meat to this story and these characters that I hope you'll want to explore more. I know I hope you do- I love your original characters as much as JK's! Loved it!! LK
I'm kind of sad to see this story come to an end. All those updates gave me something to look forward to when I woke up in the morning instead of daily drudgery. Kudos to Ms Figg for not leaving us hanging, no matter what was going on.
109~ Yes, very fitting for that evil git.
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