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Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
Date:
30 Mar 2006
Time:
20:08:08
Remote User:

Comments

Just wanted to know what you all think of this twisted challenge. Sound off!

Reviewer:
Kailael
Date:
30 Mar 2006
Time:
20:10:52
Remote User:

Comments

rant, rave, just dont be afraid to tell us what you really think. =)

Reviewer:
pokerfan
Date:
30 Mar 2006
Time:
20:25:12
Remote User:

Comments

Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Can't wait to read what the sick minds come up with.... LOL

Reviewer:
chatty
Date:
30 Mar 2006
Time:
23:26:15
Remote User:

Comments

crazy challenge. should give us a good laugh.

Reviewer:
Isabella Ravenhurst
Date:
31 Mar 2006
Time:
14:20:35
Remote User:

Comments

Oh My Dear Gods!... This is just beyond disturbing.. Hmmm I might have to try my hand at it ...*EFG*

Reviewer:
Kailael
Date:
31 Mar 2006
Time:
15:03:48
Remote User:

Comments

I know I definitely hoped you'd say that isabella ;)

Reviewer:
Koda
Date:
31 Mar 2006
Time:
16:32:59
Remote User:

Comments

I'm writing mine now. Instead of studying.. >>;

Reviewer:
anaretaacronycal
Date:
31 Mar 2006
Time:
22:49:41
Remote User:

Comments

I agree with beyond disturbing. In a good way. :)

Reviewer:
Alex
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
01:16:56
Remote User:

Comments

Tehee! Voldemort vanishing the chairs! Hillarious! Oh, and yes; Disguisting! Bravo! ;)

Reviewer:
Alex
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
01:17:05
Remote User:

Comments

Tehee! Voldemort vanishing the chairs! Hillarious! Oh, and yes; Disguisting! Bravo! ;)

Reviewer:
beeky63
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
05:38:03
Remote User:

Comments

Ewwwww Kai that was definately squicky, lol. It was also very good and well written. Well done hon. Toodles, Alex.

Reviewer:
Kailael
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
09:54:20
Remote User:

Comments

dear lord Ms_Figg, that was sick and funny at the same time.

Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
10:34:38
Remote User:

Comments

You should talk, Kai with that squicky (but funny) piece you did! You know something? I need a bath. Yeesh.

Reviewer:
chatty
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
10:56:35
Remote User:

Comments

drawing: lol. damn even if it was twisted it was bloody hilarious. i guess that covers up for the voldy lemons from the blackest heart. lol. btw, waiting for your next story. keep them coming.

Reviewer:
chatty
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
10:58:45
Remote User:

Comments

kai: that was funny, specially the vanishing the chairs part. lol.

Reviewer:
beeky63
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
12:17:49
Remote User:

Comments

Ewwww squicky is right, lol. Loved the crack about the sack hon, lmao. I'm gonna have nightmares tonight, I just know it. Toodles, Alex.

Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
14:53:09
Remote User:

Comments

Testing Title Selection dropdown...still squicking. Write for this challenge!. You KNOW you want to :))

Reviewer:
MrsStrawberry
Title:
The Dark Lords Floor Show
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
19:44:11
Remote User:

Comments

cool story K....really good one!I think u made Umbridge horrid enough even for me!!!!Sevvie jealous of Filch...nononono.....?Give him to me!!!

Reviewer:
MrsStrawberry
Title:
The Drawing
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
20:03:03
Remote User:

Comments

Oh Ms-Figg!Umbridge...Euuuuwwww!*reaches for the Listerine*....yuckily good writing!Even snape wasn't turned on.....thank god!Will not sleep tonight with this pinging around my skull!!!!Glad that Bella gets her come uppance...lol!!!!!!

Reviewer:
Anne
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
21:19:22
Remote User:

Comments

I'm kinda glad I wasnt in chat that day, things would have gotten out of hand. lol

Reviewer:
Severusism
Title:
The Drawing
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
23:10:39
Remote User:

Comments

Omg. That was too gross, and funny. To retch or to laugh?Nice story structure. Anyway,*Goes off to gargle mouth*.

Reviewer:
Severusism
Title:
The Dark Lords Floor Show
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
23:16:35
Remote User:

Comments

Liked the part about Bella cleaning off 'squidy'. Good piece.

Reviewer:
Severusism
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
01 Apr 2006
Time:
23:18:12
Remote User:

Comments

It seems that you've named this challenge the right title. It is sick..very much so. But in a good lemony way. ;)

Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
02 Apr 2006
Time:
13:09:17
Remote User:

Comments

Oh My Gods By far the squickiest story I've read yet on this pairing :::still shuddering AND laughing::: We had to disqualify Beeky from the challenge because she picked out one of the lines, and with this piece she stood a good chance of winning for sickest lemon. If she had won it would have been a conflict of interest and Kai and I could have been accused of favoritism. So I posted it so you could all read what we read. She is the current squick queen hands down. I never suspected how twisted this chick is...lololol. Brilliant writing though. What a squicky, squicky mind. Love ya, Beeky. Going to shower again.

Reviewer:
Taria
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
02 Apr 2006
Time:
15:48:46
Remote User:

Comments

EEEKKKKK!!!! *runs quickly to showers* ARGH!!! GET IT OFF! GET IT OFF! GET THE SICKNESS OFF!!!!!

Reviewer:
Karen
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
02 Apr 2006
Time:
17:04:09
Remote User:

Comments

Holy shit. That was sick. Poor Severus. *grabs Severus, Hermione, pulls them into closet, thinks for a second, then grabs Harry too as Umbridge runs by*

Reviewer:
anaretaacronycal
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
02 Apr 2006
Time:
18:20:17
Remote User:

Comments

*bows to beeky63* The Gods have favored this one. That was... actually, I wasn't grossed out until she said she wanted Severus... shows how weird I am. haha

Reviewer:
pokerfan
Title:
The Drawing
Date:
02 Apr 2006
Time:
19:57:40
Remote User:

Comments

so, so gross....LOL

Reviewer:
pokerfan
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
02 Apr 2006
Time:
20:06:09
Remote User:

Comments

I bow to you....that was utterly disgusting...i really do need to shower...LOL

Reviewer:
chatty
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
03 Apr 2006
Time:
00:09:02
Remote User:

Comments

lol, that was squicky. imagine that tongue of umbridge, eww. a toad indeed. no wonder she has such a girlish voice, with all that tondue buried inside her throat. lol.

Reviewer:
Severusism
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
03 Apr 2006
Time:
05:27:31
Remote User:

Comments

I have to hand it to you, Becky, was that sick!!! ..Lolx, i must be immune to sickness ,but frankly, it's well written. * Hides Sev in her own bedroom to play with.* *Screams at umbridge: Go find your own boytoy..no, Ahem..Mantoy!* Hands Hermione to her as a replacement.

Reviewer:
Laura
Title:
The Drawing
Date:
03 Apr 2006
Time:
16:31:03
Remote User:

Comments

That was squicky, all right! Blechhh! Loved it, especially the last line about a well-placed glamour or a sack, lol! Laura

Reviewer:
reviewer
Title:
The Dark Lords Floor Show
Date:
03 Apr 2006
Time:
16:34:32
Remote User:

Comments

Oooo, that was icky! *shudder* at Bellatrix having to clean off Filch's cock! Ewwww! Well done! Laura

Reviewer:
Laura
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
03 Apr 2006
Time:
16:36:20
Remote User:

Comments

Ahhhhh! Run away, Severus- far away!! That was quite good...and yes, squicky! Lol! Laura

Reviewer:
melskylark
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
03 Apr 2006
Time:
22:01:45
Remote User:

Comments

*cracks knuckles* I just have to put aside my "V for Vendetta" story for this one! Already started working on it, and I feel DIRTY for even writing it! But it sounds like fun. Are you going to be posting up more challenges after this one? It sounds like fun!

Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
03 Apr 2006
Time:
22:42:59
Remote User:

Comments

If we do post any more challenges, then you can count on them being strange and twisted pairings/plots! Preferably something no one in their right mind would want to read or write...but so compelling that they'll HAVE to. lol

Reviewer:
Kailael
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
04 Apr 2006
Time:
08:54:26
Remote User:

Comments

oh dear lord, she's plotting already. You're taking the blame for the next one! =)

Reviewer:
Killer Kadoogan
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
04 Apr 2006
Time:
11:17:10
Remote User:

Comments

Ewww!!! Hold - on - I - have - the - dry - heaves. That was really gross!!! Wow, what a naughty little mind you have, my dear! And I thought Ms Figg was bad! Hmm... a little competition out there for ya, Figgy! All these stories are extremely gross and offending. Why do I love them so much?! Keep up the nasty writing ladies!!!

Reviewer:
JD
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
05 Apr 2006
Time:
08:53:37
Remote User:

Comments

URG Umbridge is pining after Severus? Or does she just hate him? Either way...

Reviewer:
lizzie
Title:
The Dark Lords Floor Show
Date:
07 Apr 2006
Time:
20:32:07
Remote User:

Comments

this story is good but not good enough to be the sickest. too straightforward. sorry

Reviewer:
lizzie
Title:
The Drawing
Date:
07 Apr 2006
Time:
20:33:29
Remote User:

Comments

this story is a little better it has potential to be make you gag.

Reviewer:
lizzie
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
07 Apr 2006
Time:
20:34:45
Remote User:

Comments

i have now read all 3 and i must say this story is the sickest. was enough to make me sick. good job!!! i vote beeky63 as the winner of the sickest lemon challenge.

Reviewer:
MrsStrawberry
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
08 Apr 2006
Time:
05:12:34
Remote User:

Comments

Woah there girl!!!I don't think that scrubbing with pumice would clean my mind after that!Alex...you write really well....how come this is only your 1st fic????Maybe you and Kai could do a piece together..I think you'd work well together as a collaboration!!!!!!Enjoyed this despite the squicky factor of 1000%!!!Well done!

Reviewer:
Allison Campbell
Title:
The Drawing
Date:
20 Apr 2006
Time:
10:29:32
Remote User:

Comments

Yuck!!! But amusing nonetheless.

Reviewer:
Allison
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
24 Apr 2006
Time:
17:09:46
Remote User:

Comments

I think I need an Obliviate after that one. Poor Snape

Reviewer:
Kailael
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
29 Apr 2006
Time:
21:01:14
Remote User:

Comments

Tomorrow the 30th if the deadline for entries if any of you have last minute entries i'd suggest getting them in ASAP =)

Reviewer:
Kailael
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
01 May 2006
Time:
16:29:05
Remote User:

Comments

And we have our winner! grats hon though truly I swear I need special soap to scrub that story out of my head /shudder =)

Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
01 May 2006
Time:
16:36:22
Remote User:

Comments

Congratulations Laura!!! Dear gods, when I read this story I needed a TUMS. lol. Good, squicky writing girl. You deserve props for this one. Sqeeeeeeee! lol.

Reviewer:
cyprusdiesel
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
01 May 2006
Time:
17:12:10
Remote User:

Comments

wow, that brings new meaning to la petit morte. or in her case it was probably la grande morte. good sickiness.

Reviewer:
reviewer
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
01 May 2006
Time:
18:37:00
Remote User:

Comments

vomit

Reviewer:
beeky63
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
01 May 2006
Time:
18:59:54
Remote User:

Comments

I got to hand it to you Laura, that was definately one seriously squicky fic. "SHUDDER" Well Done. Toodles.

Reviewer:
JD
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
01 May 2006
Time:
19:44:40
Remote User:

Comments

By far the nastyest thing EVER

Reviewer:
anaretaacronycal
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
01 May 2006
Time:
23:34:07
Remote User:

Comments

Squicky, yes. I was definately more squicked by Beeky tho.

Reviewer:
Sara
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
02 May 2006
Time:
10:17:07
Remote User:

Comments

OMG noooowwww i KNOW why you won!

Reviewer:
Laura
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
02 May 2006
Time:
12:46:42
Remote User:

Comments

This is so exciting! :-) Thank you, Ms_Figg, for inspiring my squicky story- you're the one who first mentioned that snakey cock, and it stuck in my head. The rest....what can I say? I have a bit a sick mind, I guess! I also thought your sickest lemon story was great, in that squicky-kinda-way. Thanks to Kaiael and Beeky for your votes as well~ and for your excellent -and also squicky- stories. This was fun! LauraK.

Reviewer:
Dirty
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
02 May 2006
Time:
12:48:46
Remote User:

Comments

lol u cant reach your organs thru ur vagina u have to go thru the ass

Reviewer:
Laura
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
02 May 2006
Time:
13:06:19
Remote User:

Comments

It was through the uterus....into the abdominal cavity. LK

Reviewer:
pokerfan
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
02 May 2006
Time:
16:15:37
Remote User:

Comments

OMG---that was so unbelievably gross!

Reviewer:
anaretaacronycal
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
02 May 2006
Time:
20:18:22
Remote User:

Comments

I thought you were going to put the top three stories up, of which, included the one winner.

Reviewer:
Kailael
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
02 May 2006
Time:
22:06:43
Remote User:

Comments

was decided to post all entries and 1 winner, she just hasn't gotten around to posting all entries yet but i'm sure she will

Reviewer:
Ms_Figg
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
04 May 2006
Time:
07:44:51
Remote User:

Comments

Only three other entries were recieved. They are now posted.

Reviewer:
ozarkmoon
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
04 May 2006
Time:
10:53:18
Remote User:

Comments

RE: Think Pink - what a hilariously twisted story! I did enjoy all of them, but this is the one I would have voted for to win! Good job!

Reviewer:
hey Nonny Nonny
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
04 May 2006
Time:
16:00:14
Remote User:

Comments

RE; Think Pink.. That was Hysterical!. Twisted and gross, Yay Isa! This would have been my pick as the best.

Reviewer:
anonymous
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
04 May 2006
Time:
20:27:44
Remote User:

Comments

uh, that one where voldemort was a backdoor boy, by anereta- awesome!!!

Reviewer:
Laura
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
05 May 2006
Time:
06:23:46
Remote User:

Comments

Isabella- Think Pink was great! And the part where Wormtail was tongue-reaming.....ewwwwww! That was one funny and squicky story, girl! Loved it! Laura

Reviewer:
Raia
Title:
Comment on Challenge Itself
Date:
10 May 2006
Time:
20:50:02
Remote User:

Comments

the fic by Anaretaacronycal was sick. which I guess was the challenge though. lol.

Reviewer:
Jasmine.
Title:
Twisted Love by Beeky63
Date:
26 May 2006
Time:
19:26:46
Remote User:

Comments

Oh YUCK. XD Okay I got through fine until the end... DON'T TOUCH THE PROFESSOR UMBRIDGE!!!!

Reviewer:
shadowfire76
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
22 Jun 2006
Time:
13:51:54
Remote User:

Comments

Oh my.....that was just squicky as hell. But I want to know what happened with Filch and Bellatrix. LMAO I like a big cock and I've had a couple that felt big enough to come out my mouth but damn.....I am disturbed and slightly turned on by this story. Good job. :)

Reviewer:
takemeaway
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
19 Oct 2006
Time:
02:46:16
Remote User:

Comments

yep, that was without a doubt the squickiest thing i have ever read in my life...feel a bit ill actually, so bravo!

Reviewer:
Rani
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
13 Nov 2006
Time:
12:53:36
Remote User:

Comments

Eww!! Heave, heave, gods I need a shower and a memory charm.

Reviewer:
reviewer
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
12 Dec 2006
Time:
21:41:06
Remote User:

Comments

Bravo...it was the sickest lemon!

Reviewer:
Lily of Darkness
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
18 Dec 2006
Time:
12:20:10
Remote User:

Comments

I can definitly see how this won the sickest lemon award. that was just beyond disturbing. I think I'll be having nightmares about the.

Reviewer:
reviewer
Title:
The Drawing
Date:
16 Jan 2007
Time:
12:20:02
Remote User:

Comments

Reviewer:
roxy212
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
30 Jun 2007
Time:
18:19:44
Remote User:

Comments

OMFG... wow just absolutely wow. That was horribly disgusting yet wonderful at the same time. It was most definately original. Keep up the awesome work!

Reviewer:
reviewer
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
12 Aug 2007
Time:
22:30:12
Remote User:

Comments

Yuck on so many levels, but at least Snapey was in the story.

Reviewer:
Tori
Title:
WINNER: Rise of the Serpent by Laura
Date:
14 Sep 2008
Time:
20:51:22
Remote User:

Comments

oh... my...god... EWWWW!!!!!! ugh, I think i'm squicked for life! gah! .........ima go read another ;)

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