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I think I might be sick... spending eternity buried and chopped??? that was soooo twisted! but it will be a really interesting story if you decide to describe the adventures they go through... and will she break already? I want some action! great story, luv it!
I was so happuy about the update that I sat, while at work, and re-read the story. Thankfully my boss didn't catch me. Thanks for posting. I hope you feel better. Happy Holidays. P.S. Have you every thought about making a yahoo group? Its a great way to let everyone know you've updated. (Sorry if suggestions like this bother you. just let me know and I'll stop)
I'm really liking this. Great work. Get well soon. Happy Holidays Truly
Ok I'm getting sexually frustrated by just reading this story. Anyone else what to smack Ron upside the head? Hermione go with Severus save yourself a lifetime of boring sex and a dull life. LOL
Great chapter, Figgy! And wow, you did a good job making an ugly Snape absolutely hideous on his driver's license. :)
so much for the immortality potion. being buried and alive. cant wait for hermione to go and fuck the shit out of the potionsmaster. ron just grosses me out in this story. never like him anyway so its good. :D im so glad that your considering to make this one a series - this one has sooo much of potential for adventure and some hot hot hot lemons!!!!
I WOULD LOVE TO SEE AEVERUS ON A PLANE!POOR HERMIONE SHES HAVING SUCH A HARD TIME FIGURING OUT WHAT TO DO,IT JUST MAKES YOU WANT TO SCREAM RUN AWAY WITH HIM NOW!CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS.
ch 6 - I see you still have "PWP" listed in the blurb (hehe!). I'm enjoying this development of Severus trying to lead Hermione out of her self-made "box" made of "life with Ron, happy ever after". Looking forward to seeing Ron get the boot! I hope you feel better soon, Ruth.
I hope you feel better soon. It seems like everyone's getting sick lately! I've come down with the flu, my brother got a bit of it too, dad's been coughing a bit, my friend Ilona just had the flu - probably who I got it from - and it's down to something like -7°C. I really hate european weather right now, this time of year should be more like 35°C...I've just made myself homesick...lol *starts humming 'Waltzing Matilda'* Anyhoo! As for the story, lol, Sevvie threw a tantrum! Had to get that out there...even if it isn't completely true...I think he just got pissed that she's being really stupid about this whole Ron thing. I mean, what good is the guy anyway? She needs to go back to her chambers and seriously take a long hard look at her life as it is, and then the benifits it would have A)If she started shagging Severus, and then B)If she went travelling for the potions. I think that she might find a serious imbalance between the two options.
At least in your fanfics we don't have to see Hermione married to Ron[if we don't want to!]I hope poor Hermione does decied to get a life[with Severus of course]Can't wait till the next chapter.
ch 7 - yay!!! she didn't accept ron's proposal and instead ran to sevvy!!!
how can you end a chapter there?!! gah. but the beginning of the chapter...wow. that hit a few home runs with me in a sense...i mean, it was great and all, but i felt really uncomfortable for a while there...still do a little. gah. idk what to think anymore about my own life. ah well. just er. idk. anywho, update quickly!
Absolutely first class. Hermione is making the right move. Better now than waste years finding out the hard way. Who said, "The saddest words of tounge or pen were these, 'It might have been.'?" You are letting my favorite coupling get on with it with a minimum of regrets. Love you Figgy. Respectfully, vonHardenberg
Kath: If I made you feel uncomfortable, my apologies, but it shows the story reaches. It is written rather simplistically and I am glad that despite this, it is reaching others. Hermione is in a tough situation, but I like to think it "can" reflect situations in real life while both entertaining and making people think. We should never just "settle." There's so much to be missed.
You know what I like about this story? I have absolutely no idea where it's going. Lookin forward to more updates.
"Little did she know" always reminds me of "Stranger than fiction" with Emma Thompson :) absolutely loved the chapter, cuz I thought it will be longer 'till hermione realizes how she's wasting her life... the faster, the better :) and now I'm wondering how snape will calm her down :)))
hi really good fic cant wait to see what happens next. please udate soon! p.s i have read all your fanfiction and they are great, i like them all, you are a great writer! hope you have a merry christmas
Yay! Poor Hermione though...
actually, i think the reason your writing really struck me in such a way is that severus's opinion is stated so cut and dry making issues obvious. it's easy to see other people's flaws but you try to cover up your own. i still remember, my 7th grade geography teacher...she was a horrible teacher, but at the end of my yearbook she wrote "don't ever settle" it took me several years to understand what she meant, and now i look back, and i've settled too much and everything is going wrong and i'm nowhere near where i'd like to be. *sigh* oh the woes of me. ha. kidding...to an extent.
Lol, this has got to be good. Ron proposing? If that isn't a joke in itself I don't know what is, lol.
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I'm loving this story! Especially enjoyed the faux article about dating ugly men: My mom once told me to never go out with a man that's prettier than I am LOLOLOL! Ya think girls are bad when they're all pretty/girlie, the guys are twice as vain!
ya poor lucky hermione but lucky us. but evil cliffie!!!! whine!!! i love it how snape is playing hermione in nicely. lol. and how will hermione react to seeing Ron afterwards...? ooh cant wait for the next chapter - i want lemons now!!!
No Fair! why can't you finally let us know her answer? oh! IDEA! What if she sleeps with him, and therefore he convinces her enough to come travelling the world with him? lol, I love brainwaves. *Random POTC quote - I love those moments. I like to wave at them as they pass by.* Hehe. Merry X-mas and a Happy New Year!
Rachaelzi: Are you saying Snape possibly has a win-win situation on his pale hands? Imagine that. :::smirks:::
I can't properly express how happy I am when there are updates to your stories! I'd be disappointed that Hermione didn't get rid of Ron personally, but you know, I am absolutely sure there will be a Ron-get-lost-I'm-not-marrying-you-ever speech sometime in the future *wink*. I love those! Looking forward to the next bit. Thanks for your work -- and I hope you had excellent holidays!
Lol to the 'thin' comment. She's certainly in for it now Ms Figg! And TY TY TY! Finally we smell lemons, preferrably from the next few chapters as well. *Gives a questioning/pleading look*
Hey, you snuck ch 9 in when I was reading ch 8. I'm so glad you did. I'm glad she chose as she did, once Snape has her on the bed, the rest of her decisions will be made for her. I know mine would be. lol. Wonder when Snape said to Ron. Hermione is gonna have to face the Weasley's sometime soon, if only to tell them what she and Snape are planning. That should make for fireworks that'll best Weasleys Wizard Weezes. Hurry up ch 10. Pleeeze. ccino
oooh hermione - what the hell did u just think! thin snape? and a hair trigger snape? rofl! ok. she's in for it now. (i hope so!!!) oh pleaase bring up the next chapter. she might not only be gapped leg but she might have to walk on her hands cos of this. lol!!! *giggle* :D
That thin comment...*Winces* She is SO in for it... More chappies please!
Aah! Short chapter and a high and dry ending. They'll do it in the next chapter yes? I can't take another dry ending, it's driving me bonkers. ccino
Ccine: You might be a bit dry . . . but I assure you . . . it's not that way for everyone if I know my girls. lololol
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa... not fair! I want the lemons :) I can't believe how Severus trapped Hermione into making such a desision... it's just tooo rich ;)
ok ok writing in spurts leaves so many comments that could be said LOL....There's a hole in the world like a great black pit And it's filled with people who are filled ...
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