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ch 9 - goodbye, Odessa!!! I just hope he remembers to Obliviate her of Hermione, or Odessa might tell someone that Snape is "fond" of his prisoner or something. Hermione's oath about her wand - "an oath that you will not use it on me or to escape me" - ouch! If he gets injured, she won't be able to use her wand to heal him ("on him"). Well, he better keep safe. Those Order members at Azkaban will have to hide their activities form those snitches. Ooh, I'm getting all nervous already and you haven't even started ramping up the action yet! Thanks for the new chapter.
Ew. I don't like this Snape....it feels like he's raping her.
No. He's not a nice Snape. Not at all. He also scourges (whips) people though we haven't actually seen him do it in the story.
i love how your snape isnt truly evil..just snarky :)
Reviewer - I don't know but, I don't think it's possible to rape a whore.
pokerfan - seems he's a little more than 'snarky' he does seem to be touching the dark side. reviewer2 - rape is rape no matter who you are.
I have to agree rape is rape, if the woman is unwilling. Odessa was willing to engage the wizard a final time. Snape probably looked at it as Odessa "protesting" like she undoubtedly must have done before, since she obviously hated it. It wasn't his first time taking her that way. Inversely, she must have accepted it on some level since she was still at his mansion. If she felt she were being violated, she would have left before then, I imagine. But it was non-consenual and an act of vindictiveness on Snape's part.
maybe for odessa but i was talking about hermione. if she's a whore then you can't really call it rape what snapes doing. no matter what.
ch 10 - eeps! I hope Voldy doesn't find out that Sevvy is trying to find his house.... Looking forward to seeing Severus' plan get communicated to Kingsley and the Order. Thanks for updating!
ch 11 - squeeee! he found the house!! and Kingsley knows Snape is on the right side. clever plan. thanks for the new chapter!
Whoa! That was a fast moving chapter. I'm torn between wanting it all now and wanting it to last as long as possible. Poor Hermione - I feel like crying every time I read what she has to go through (even with Snape). How are you ever going to get these two together? So sad.
Hi reviewer: This isn't going to be a very long story. It is dark but it will have a resolution, if not an outright happy one.
lol. u found some way to get odessa out of the way. *grin* i hope hermione stays with snape after that. but i feel soo sorry for what hermione went through. thats just plain sad :( cant wait for the final battle. i hope lucius and those sickos get their due at the end.
To bad snape is not into boys a bit he could have given marcus what for and a bit of a pay back for what he has done.....maybe an evening with grop
ch 12 - ahhh, Marcus..... let's see if he realizes he needs to change to the winning side before the fighting is over. looking forward to seeing the rest of the plan!
Snape in this fic is no avenging angel as far as others go. Everyone he comes in contact with he's using towards his own ends. Hermione, Kingsley, Harry, the Order members, everyone. He couldn't care less about what atrocities Marcus has done or to whom. He just wants him out the way so he can access Harry. But lol at the idea of Snape buggering Marcus. I did have him get buggered in one story though. I can't remember which right now though. Then he became a porn star or something. lolol. Still landed on his feet.
Groans . . . not Marcus! I'm so glad it's just a cameo. Can you tell he's not my favorite? ;) This is getting really interesting. I hope you can find away around having to kill Harry. I also enjoy how quickly this story is moving. I always love your slow, complicated plots and building of relationships, but I'm glad we're already almost at the big day.
Marcus makes an appearance...Love to hate that guy. I'm loving this story. I do hope it all works out for every one in the end. Keep up the great work. And Keep pushing out those chapters for ALL the stories currently in progress. Hope your having a great day. Tootles. Steph
Ms Figg - Will these two fall in love at the end? Please. Loving the story!!!
OH NO YOU DIDN'T!!!!!
I know what you did... *Is pleased with herself*
Hmmm. 15 minute Polyjuice. Severus dead. Or is he? <evil grin> But still, poor Harry.
Ooooooh. I get it. You are bad. Bad Figgy, bad. Update soon, please!!!
Wow. Fabulous! I love how you've handled this and it is so satisfying.....the dialogue from DH interspersed with your own writing is perfect. Can't wait for the rest- LK
I'm happy for all the new chapters, but surely YOU can't be killing off Severus. No Way. Book 7 ended badly enough, please don't mean it. Surely he isn't gone. Poor Hermione, surely she'd have a happier life under Voldemort's reign, than married to Ron Weasley.
God, I'm stupid. I think I got it about 10 seconds after I first reviewed. How could I have doubted you. My only excuse is it is very late here and I really need to go to sleep. Wonderful Work.
Am loving this story. One of my favourites from you by far and definitley the best post Deathly Hallows fic to date. How much longer on this one. I'm dying to know what happens but am due to give birth any day now. Please don't make me wait until I get out of hospital to read the next update. I'm begging you (not quite on my knees begging, I wouldn't be able to get up again. I'm sure you understand.)
Kaley: lol. Your response only shows I'm doing my job. I wanted the shock value of Snape dying. And you fed my jones. :) I don't think I will ever kill Snape, ever. But I loved your response. No apologies necessay. ***
Angel Prince: I wrote this as a short fic. There are only a couple of chapters left. I was spared the character/relationship development aspect because of how Snape and Hermione were at the outset. There was no need to develop a relationship between them, though of course it's clear to see one has developed simply because of their situation. This is a short, action PWP and will wrap up shortly. Still, it's oddly satisfying to write, though it's a quick story.
I had to laugh in chapter 13 where Snape roughed Harry up and enjoyed it. You have a wicked sense of humor. This story is great even though it's short. Still, it doesn't seem rushed and that shows what a good storyteller you are.
oh man! For a second i really thought SS was dead! Nice job Figgy!
More! Update now, please! Ha, I knew Harry was going to live like in DH...
ch 13-14 - SQUEEEEEEEE!!!!!! Hermione is going to protect Severus and help kill VOldy!!!! Boy, are they going to be surprised when Harry shows up. THANK YOU for the new chapters.
Please don't leave us hanging here for too long. Talk about a cliff hanger. Three fantastic chapters in one day, but I can't get enough of this story.
Oooh, I love this story. Actually, I seem to love all of your stories. They're all different from each other, varying in plot and all that. Anyway, nicely done! Keep it up. ^^
I love it. Snape can now be seen as a true hero, actually having a hand in Voldemort's downfall. But at this point I can't see how you are going to get Severus and Hermione together; he hasn't exactly endeared himself to her so far. Still... how could she really resist?
Finally caught up with this story also. I actually have to schedual time just I can read stories. I do like this story, even though it's not something I probably would have read if anyone else wrote it. I can't wait to read what happens next. You left us hanging at very suspensful point. I hope you don't keep us waiting to long.
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