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Oh, that was kind of nice seeing Ron rescue her, punch Malfoy and actually be pretty mature about her and Severus. I like it! I'm going to like the next bit much more, I think......;) LK
Lemons! Woohoo!
Naughty,Naughty leaving us with a cliffy! Nice to see Ron smacking Draco, and Minerva wising up and not getting her knickers in a twist over the whole situation. But will the binding work and if not will there be dire consequences to them both? Oh! I can't wait to read the next update. Nice work Ms Figg!
How dare you stop at that point. LOL LOl Great job.
oh pleeease update soon! evil cliff after evil cliff. aaarrh!!! the i dont hate you think is just so funny and coming from snape thats damn sexy. *grin* atleast minerva's calmed down now. cant wait for the lemons.
You are such a tease! Tee Hee!
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LOVE all of your stories!!! I'm constantly checking to see if you have updated Twice Biten..hehe..ever thought of doin something with Veelas?..I think Hermione would make an awesome Veela ; )..just a suggestion
Mmmm...I want one of those too! Preferably with Severus in the middle of that zone! Lol, clothing free zone, good idea! And FINALLY they've stopped being stubborn and he's realised just how good she is for him! Yay!
Ohhh do I sense that Sev likes his women to take charge sometimes. hehe Even tho it was short it was good and I do like the idea of them opening an apothecary is a good idea too. And I think that Cerridwene is right about Hermione making a good Veela
Oh girl! You know that was a fabulous chapter. Severus used some smooth lines there! I can't wait to read on. I honestly believe this is the best chapter you've ever written!
Hmm... could Albus have been rejecting Minerva because he bats for the other team? I don't know if you intended this, but its pretty funny to me. You have to love Rowling on that one.
Am on the edge of my chair in anticipation! This is getting really hot, really fast! I love it!
MMMmmm...great chapter. I do hope you tell us a little more about their post-Hogwarts life. I'd love to hear more about it!
I truly like your stories. You are a talented writer. You're writing feels real ... like its not work to understand it or to imagine what's going on. I really like the interplay with Harry, Ron and Snape. It seems almost realistic. As if that is exactly how Snape would react in this sort of situation. Almost. The only thing (and please don't take offense) is that you seemed to have jumped into the attraction with Snape & Hermione too soon. Maybe that was your intent. Maybe you don't like to draw out the drama but it seems a little uncharacteristic. Other than that, it's a great story! Lots of humor! I have to keep it down when I'm at work but it really is intriguing.
Yes, I did indeed speed up the sexual interaction with Snape/Hermione (aided by vampire pheremones, lol) I wanted a quick run to the goodies in this story for a number of reasons, the main one being my previous story "A New Beginning" was almost ALL sexual tension and many of my readers like it hot and relatively fast, but stuck with that story anyway. So, the first thing I had to do was "feed the need" for all of us. I write erotica first and foremost, but plot always seems to get in the way. lol. I don't take any offense at your critique and in fact welcome it. :) But I will always produce a few stories that go right to the smut. Those are my roots after all. Thanks for commenting.
Love this chapter! It really merged the old Snape and the new!!! His snarkiness is so sexy. Great job!
I had to shorten my name from FellowFanFictionWriter. Who needs to know that anyway? WOW! !!!SCREAMS!!! LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
Well, done.
Clap! Clap! Clap! Whew ... do you want to take a joy ride? Ha, Ha LOL. Okay, I waited until I was finished with Chapter 44 before I made my next comment. Awwww, Snape really loves her (Grinning). I really became worried there for a moment! After the apology, he became all "icy". Burrrr. Not that I blame him of course and it made for a climatic fall! It's just that I am glad he came around. Those scenes really tugged at the heart strings. It's hard to do that with someone like me ... hence, the clapping! Wonderful job. The sex is ... what can I say? Mm, mm, mm.
please up date please please!!!!! i like this story, i want to know what happens next!
Oh, to be the one looking up at Severus at that moment.
i LOVED HOW YOU ENDED IT,NOW I'LL HAVE SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT OVER THE WEEKEND!i THINK TAKEING A WEEK OFF WILL BE GOOD FOR YOU.You have wrote so hard for soo long you need to rest up for a while.That way when you start back you can be better than ever.
hey, Ms_Figg, I know you're on a vacation from writing, hope u're having a good time :) but I was rereading the 9-part series and found smth u've written apparently a long time ago, but I wanted to ask you anyway... “I believe our child has just accioed your breast.” :) HAhHAHhHA I just wanted to ask if u ever used this in a story :)
Dechagny: No, I never did get to use that line. lolol.
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