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Chapter 41: This is why I love you, Ms_Figg! So inventive, so well thought out. Just bliss! This chapter, although short, was simply steller! Thank you so, so much!
This is nice.. although I would have liked it if Hermione demanded some form of promise in exchange for knowing what Hermione has invented. Ron is a prat like always.. hmm.. now it is left only for what Hermione will show Severus.... although up to now.. I wonder what will she think when she realizes that Severus is creating a sorcerer's stone for her.
Loved that chapter- I think all of those precautions sound on-the-money for a Potions Master and/or apprentice. I also believe that one day, JK will write another HP book and tell us that Severus is indeed alive. He certainly was never shown to be actually dead, was he? No talk of a funeral, a gravesite, a portrait, etc. :D Great job.....LK
Hey, I'm back and I've finally caught up with what you've written over the past week. I am totally lovinig the shower scene. It really broke down a lot of barriers and made it so that Hermione was more accessable to Severus. Nice sliding that in there. Loved the part where Flitwick was salivating over Severus like a dog in heat, it makes a lot of sense that behind a kind, gentle exterior, Flitwick would be fairly greedy and manipulating, a touch like Dumbledore in that respect (from other fics that is). I'm so excited about "Celebrations"! I really hope that this isn't going to be a one off though, a man can only take so much, and I think Severus could be nearing his limit. Although, his patience does appear to be limitless concerning Professor Granger, hehe. I really like how you've incorperated the rose as well, I thought it might play a side-role in the story before.
blech his fumbling's as bad as ron
Thanks for the new chapter, I had an awful day and it made me feel a lot better :-)- but I hope there is still more to come, I can't wait!
when a u addin anatho chap
lol, reviewer. He's okay once he gets past his excitement. Hermione's going to have to school him. :) I think he was a little better with the younger witches as far as patience goes, but I think he's always a little afraid Hermione's going to say no to something so he goes for it quickly so he can get a little. But at 18, yeah there will be some fumbling. He's still a little sex god but nowhere near what he's going to be.
lol. "This is Granger's House." rofl, too funny Miss Figg!
lol. "This is Granger's House." rofl, too funny Miss Figg!
I can hardly wait to read Rita's article.. but please continue with the night of seduction...
Oh do stop complaining Hermione, and let the boy at you. Oooooo, next stop Kama Sutra positions. Totally Yummy!!!!!!!!!
He's certainly impatient when it comes to Hermione isn't he? lol. This chapter had a good feel to it, like you know everything's going end up being all right.
That was an evil cliffie. *sigh* But I'm very glad for the update. Kind of missing the good old Hermione/Snape though. I like him better older I think. Haha. :P
MollyMolly: I hear you, but for those of us who imagine we might like to have at Snape, or at least this dirty old woman :::snicker::: a younger, more vulnerable Snape sounds extremely yummy. I'm really having fun with this story, unlikely as it is. Seeing Hermione in the "dominant" role is kind of nice. :)
aarrrghghgh!! you cruel, evil bewitcher. i am ashamed to say it, but damnnit, i've been figged.
I am SOOOO having my hubby read Hermione's advice! By the way, bad writer, bad, bad, bad writer. That was so naughty of you! Now I have to wait two weeks to see if anything happens. (stomps foot in frustration)
As always, very entertaining! I have a few more chapters to go but Great! I have an unrelated question ... Would you ever consider using a single line in one of your stories? You wouldn't need to give that person credit (b/c there wouldn't be that much too it), just as a request? Just curious.
Fantastic! I love this story and the whole idea of Severus being the younger one. On with the suduction!
Chapter 43: Yum.
Hermione actualy thinks potions is the reason she dosen't want anyone else working with Severus.Man is she wrong,I can't wait tillshe realizes it.love your stories!
Flitwicks makeing it hard on Severus offering him so much.But he will do the right thing and stick with Hermione.
MORE! I'M DYYYYYYYYYING!that was cruel. please write more,i can't wait to see what happens next.lol on herm. and sev. switching up their roles.
I hope Hermione makes an offer for Severus,weather she sdmitts it or not she doesn't want him to be with anyone else.And I know he doesn't want to be eather.
*cracking up* Oh.My.God. That's hilarious! And I bet it's even true, what kids in that age think about women in their thirties. *wiping away laughing tears* But poor Severus, I have to add. Great chapter!
great! Now I'm hooked and don't want to get back to my work! *argh* ;o)
*sigh* honestly, I was a little suspicious about the alternated roles, but my oh my - I'm loving this in a weird kind of sense.
who would hate you for a lovely chapter like this? *sighs and reads on*
Oh my bloody fucking god. That was so so so HOT! I really loved how some of the sensations were from Severus' point of view. It really connected me to how he was feeling. Frankly I wouldn't want to leave Hermione after that either, lol. That was so sweet when she told him to call her Hermione as well! I can only hope now that Severus will succeed in melting her heart and securing it for himself.
That was hot and very sweet at the same time. Fab as always!
that smug little bastard ;o)
feeling hot hot hot!!
Chapter 44: Now THAT'S what I'm talking about! Wonderfully written - vivid, textured and HEE-OTTTTT! Oh Chapter 45...................is gonna be good. Thank you, Ms_Figg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Heart you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*trying to click the next chapter* darn, already over? *pouting just a little* what a lovely story, I would have never believed it. Good thing I'm so damn curious, I would have missed something for sure! Thank you!
I need chapter 45! lol I must admit...I have been figged!!
I love the chapter, and all of your stories
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