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Wonderful :)
loved it! love it! loved it!!!! such a good story, it was a real pleasuer and it was totally worth the checking for a new chapter every 2 hours :) Hermione and 5 kids? I've never imagined smth like this, but I guess Severus deserved a big family :) thanks again for the great story!
Beautiful. So moving, and just...beautiful. Thank you Miss Figg. Bless your sweet, happily ever snarking heart. And what a marvelous quote. I loved this story so much. And the epilogue chapter was more moving and sweet than the rest of the story combined. And that is saying something. ~Mia
I was so busy with my bathroom that I fell behind on this story. I went to read the updated chapter and I see that you finished the story. I was a little shocked to say the least. I really liked this story. It is the best DH compliant story that I have read. I did feel sorry for Rod and Rose at the dance, but some people are not just meant to be. I did think it was funny that Hermione and Severus had three children of their own. Now that my bathroom is done maybe I can finally catch up on In an Alternate Universe, I started it but never got back to it :) You did an amazing job on this story :)
You goofed at the end... Albus can't marry them, he's dead, remember?
I believe Rod and Rose will have their day. They were "looking at each other longingly" as Hermione and Severus took their vows, and Rod is a supervisor now and their differences were "patched up." Just because I didn't say they were together doesn't mean they aren't or won't be. I like leaving some things to the imagination. :) Whew. I can take a little breather now.
whoops I meant Wumblewort. THANKS!
I can't believe it is over. This is a great story. Write more! Thank you for catering to all the Hermione/Severus fans out there.
Oh, I can't believe it's over! You tied everything up so well....what a great ride this was- BRAVO!! :D I'd buy you a drink if I were there with you....Thanks! LK
i guess all good things do come to a end.. i really liked this story!! well done ms fig!!!!
I think this might be my favorite one yet!
hmm, wonderful story. i think this might be my favorite of yours so far...
Really enjoyed this story...and I certainly would not mind a little story about Rod and Rose if you were so inclined ;-) Thanks for sharing your writing talent with us all!
Loved this story yet am so sad that it is ending! One question though, did Rose and Rod ever get together? Did they marry? Did Severus give her away on her wedding day? Sorry! being a soppy romantic again! Can't wait 4 the next story!
i am sick. all stuffed up. and now I am crying too. Thanks a lot Figgy..I cna barely breathe! I am such a sap....I love happy endings....
i am so totally in love with this story
I loved the story...i came in around the middle somewhere and checked more than once a day everyday to see if it was updated. Can't wait to read your next one.
Whew! You did it, Ms_Figg! Thank you so much for seeing your story through -- it could not have been easy; producing chapter after chapter nearly every day since late July. But you truly helped ease the grief of your heartbroken readers through the post-DH gloom into a hopeful, humorous and horny renaissance of our favorite dark hero. What a journey, huh? You are simply wonderful. Thank you, again!
Wonderful, I loved the epilogue. Just brilliant. Thank you for a terrific story. Truly
*sigh* sniff... that was a nice ending. too bad its over. now. i cant wait for the next stories... :D
THIS HAS BEEN THE MOST WONDERFUL STORY. I was wondering, will you be telling us about the romance that will contenue between Rod and Rose?
THIS HAS BEEN THE MOST WONDERFUL STORY. I was wondering, will you be telling us about the romance that will contenue between Rod and Rose? Will you now Finish the AU story where Sevvie is the student and Mione is the snarky Professor?
You almost had me at tears near the end, So very well done. I think this fic here is one of the most unique you have written character wise. Severus is always very undenabley dark in your fiction (just the way we like him) But you made him more human in this piece. He was so vunerable and different... but the changes were so subtle that never once could he be OOC. This is now my choice ending to the HP series. Again you amaze me! Also... I am loving the alternate uni fic. It is so much fun.
"But you truly helped ease the grief of your heartbroken readers through the post-DH gloom" Mrs_Brown... I just realised that HP actually never ended for me... exactly because of theburningpen :))) every time I opened a HP-book or watched a movie I asked myself what it would feel like to not have smth to wait for... 6 years of waiting for the next book to come out... and now I really see that I'll always have smth to wait for :) I'll wait for every new story, for every new chapter... all written by our Ms_Figg! blaaa... that came out kinda too sloppy for my taste, but it's absolutely true...
OMG!!! That was so BEAUTIFUL!!! AAW factor is so so so high! and if I didn't know better I'd say that Rod was Severus' distant relation. Hehe. Lol about Hugo and his lady, it totally fits with his character! and Rose is just like her mother isn't she! I wonder if Rod is anything like Severus...? hehe, if so she's in for a wild ride, hehe.
Oh yes: I enjoyed reading this a lot! I loved the way Severus' revenge didn't work as he had planned: Hermione's reaction and the hot, touching and delicious lemons were excellent. *melt* And the ending was wonderful too. Thank you so much for sharing! :D
wow that was good I can not wait for more from you .. I know this might sound funny but how about bring back bagheria or what ever taht wearcat's name is hehe sorry just a little stinker in me... but a new beginning was a very good story.
I really enjoyed this very much! Thank you. ~Ruthie
YEAH!!!!! Thanks Ms Figg.....you are the bomb!!
I loved it! Thank you so much. It was a wonderful story, and a perfect end to DH!
WOw!! That was fantastic!
Fantastic! Lots of character development. Loved it and can't wait for another!
loved it. I want you to write a fic about Rose and Rod!
Thank you for a wonderful story. I was so upset with JKR for what she did to so many of my friends in DH. I love Rose, Hugo and Rod. I think you did justice to Sev. Please keep writing. You bring so much to your stories.
What a great choice of music for their dance! Wow... I wondered what it would be since dean made his choice but I would never have guessed Footloose. :-))))
I have to say that this story made me so so emotional that at times I couldn't stand it. When Snape had read off the list of people who had died to stop Voldemort, I sobbed. same with the very end. This has been my favorite HG/SS Fic ever, and I'll never forget this. Thank you for writing an amazing fanfic that will never be forgotton. Where there is love, there is hope. Thank you ~Rhee
HAHAHAHA JUST LIKE I THOUGHT IT WOULD LOOK!!1 LOL
Awsome, super awsome and hilarious. Your a genius.
It took me 3 days between mentel friend's friend's and shuger hyped kid's to read threw this who thing. it was a novel of wonderful proporsions and I truely enjoyed reading it. your a fab writer girl :D Pixie! XoX
It took me 3 days between mentel friend's friend's and shuger hyped kid's to read threw this who thing. it was a novel of wonderful proporsions and I truely enjoyed reading it. your a fab writer girl :D Pixie! XoX
Hi Ms Figg, I'm happy to read in your livejournal that you feel better now! As my name may indicate my first langage is french and I just now read the prologue of the traduction of the story in french. This is accurate so far and I'm also happy to note that it is faultless too. I imagine that as an author this is something that you would like to known that your baby as been greatly taken care of... So now you have confirmation!! Hope to see you at the top of your health soon!!
Thank you Geneviève. It's nice to know that Jullsy is doing a great job. My one concern is that Snape apparently is Rogue in French. How is that going to translate when it comes to the anagrams? Well, we'll find out. :) Thanks again.
nooooo how can it end i was just getting in to it please bring us more rod and rose chronicles and thanks for a most enjoyable read.
Great story, with very believable original charakters. I really did like this much more matured Hermione. It's suits her. The End was romantic, with her marry him and get pregnant again. *lol*
I LOVED this story! Absolutely adored Severus in this one. And I really liked your original character, Rod. Very nicely done!
And, as a more mature woman, I really enjoyed the more mature love with both Hermione and Severus being quite a bit older before they get together!!!
Hello Ruth...I have fininshed reading "A New Beginning" and as I promised...here is my review. "WOW!!!!!!" As all of your stories go, it was wonderful! A gentle Severus was a different angle for you concerning the couple (when compared to the other stories). I found it refreshing...but must admit that I was (in my mind) urging Severus to let go and really do the "pounding" we all have become accustomed to. But you did manage to slip in a wee bit of hammering. An emotional Severus was different also. Yes, you have written him with emotions before, but in this story, he purposely brought them out for Hermione to see. Some may argue that this is too far OOC for him, but you explained the reasoning behind it well with the story of Lily and Severus in the early years. He didn't want a repeat of his shortcomings and possible missed opportuninties that he experienced with Lily to affect the budding friendship/love that he was experiencing with Hermione. So he gathered his inner strength and told the witch how he truly felt. I like that he was still a Slytherin through-and-through. The jokes he played on Hermione and the children were priceless! Bubblegum?!?!?! That is hilarious! I also like how the women in your stories are not perfect little barbie dolls. You make them believable and more realistic. There is nothing wrong with a woman with cushion. I am not as thin as I was in my twenties...but have matured into a softer version of the girl I was. I would not allow myself to become obese--but that is something that I choose for myself. A woman needs to be happy with herself when she looks in the mirror; if she is not, then she needs to address that herself, and only for HERSELF! But Hermione reflected many of the insecurities that most women have occuring in their lives. Well done. Hugo was a hoot! You couldn't help but get caught up in his youthful exuberance. He was also fair-minded and empathetic towards others. Rose was sweet...but also a typical teenager. When my parents divorced and mom met my step-dad...I reacted in similar ways. It was believable. The relationship (or lack there of--or budding???) between her and Rod was refreshing to watch. Rod....a very complicated young fellow. Alot like our "young" Severus without the darkness and excessive anger pouring from him. I clued in that he was never a Hufflepuff (?)--and figured him a Slytherin all along by his self-serving nature. But may I interject that his traits may have been learned by being exposed to it and for survival purposes. We are human; we adapt. The stone was a good piece of writing brilliance. The way you weaved it in and allowed it to heal old wounds, cause upheaval, and then to let Voldie slip in...amazing. There is so much more I could go on with about this story...it is a truly brilliant piece of work. As all your stories are. Please keep writing. Tonya
I'd trade my apartment for Hermione's any day! ;o) Love this one so far... can't wait to see what happens next, as usual!
I stayed home the ENTIRE weekend, just to read this story. Worthy of publication at the very least! Of all the works I've read on your site, this is my absolute favorite. You have a fantastic mind for this kind of writing... and I love this version of Snape. Kudos to you, Ms. Figg.
wow, that was really beautiful! you portrayed Snaoe perfectly, unlike most writers i know of. i hope you write more, because the way you write is amazing! ♥addie
wow, that was really beautiful! you portrayed Snaoe perfectly, unlike most writers i know of. i hope you write more, because the way you write is amazing! ♥addie
Ms Figg, You weave your stories so skillfully that I am quickly becoming one of your devoted fans. Congratulations on another wonderful tale!
A great story. You are to be commended for your wonderful writing, exciting and interesting plots and well-developed characters. Cheers!
You are too fabulous for words. I started reading this story when you first posted it and left it about 5 months ago until I finished it tonight. I must say, I am glad I returned. You are wonderful, you should be published, your words bring tears to my eyes and laughter to my heart. I can honestly say that when Snape whispers loving words to Hermione, I honestly feel my heart clench. No other author can do this for me. You make me cringe with horror when things go poorly for our characters yet make me actually cry with delight and exlpoding love in my heart when things go well. You bring such power to your words and your words bring such raw delight to your reader, I can honestly say you are one of the best authors out there...published or unpublished...you deserve awards. Thank you for writing your stories. You have no idea how much joy you have brought this loyal reader of yours! Your words make my heart sing and you bring these characters to life moreso than ever before. Thank you for sharing your genius! You should hang your head high as your words are beyond greatness! Thank you!!!!!!!!!
that was an amazing story a perfect beginning for my first snape/hermione stories, and im sure many more of them are to come after this one, mostly yours ur an amazing writer! i was hooked! for two straight days i read, simply amazing!
I nearly caused a riot at my military ball when I requested this song and led everyone (including the Captain and Master Chief) in the dance... IN FULL UNIFORM. xP
hey you should write a follow up story about rose and rod because you kind of leave them hanging think about it love this story ive read it 3 times already
I loved this story and I love your writing. Thanks so much for writing and sharing your stories with us.
Ok, seriously. This whole fic is PURE GENIUS. I laughed my ass off with your song selections. Priceless. I must say...Tootsie Roll is the shit. =D
Wow. I loved this fic so very much. It was so well written and...a roller coaster ride. Hehe. I'd looooveee to read a "sequel" about Rod and Rose. Rod is a great OC. I really want to know how they ended up together. =D Thanks for yet another outstanding HGSS fic. <3